The Sword Rises in the Stars, Poison Leads the Way

Wooden Man

People, once they've tasted the finest delicacies, become picky eaters and can no longer enjoy simple meals. Some books they used to be able to read with a pinch of their nose now seem utterly uninteresting. Sitting at my desk every day waiting for the author to update feels like a nicotine addiction.

Stop pairing people up randomly! Thinking you'll steal Duan Yu's wife and then give him another one? Abi is utterly loyal to Murong Fu. The protagonist, a master of intrigue and scheming, surely doesn't actually see Duan Yu as a brother? His character is so confused; does he really think he's a great, righteous hero? In my opinion, he's like Wei Xiaobao. I advise the protagonist to mind his own business and be a little more greedy.

I suggest avoiding writing too much about modern people's understanding of martial arts and their solutions; it's counterproductive. Since this is a martial arts fan fiction, readers will naturally immerse themselves in the martial arts world, and the more explanations you give, the more detached you'll become.

The author's writing is excellent, so why write about such absurd and ridiculous things? I originally thought I was going to see a story of chivalry and adventure, but instead I watched a melodramatic soap opera, which was utterly disgusting.

The last few chapters haven't been very enjoyable. The protagonist has even mastered poison; does he still want to be a good guy? In the original novel, I hated the sycophantic Duan Yu the most, and what's most ridiculous is that the author made him even more of a sycophant, yet the protagonist actually becomes sworn brothers with him. I really... Author, are you afraid to deviate from the plot?

The beginning of the book was quite original, with the first three chapters being particularly well-written and captivating, drawing the reader in. It was a strong start. However, the story became rather bland after the Xingzi Forest arc. The plot simply followed the original novel, lacking any unique features or innovations.

There are too many female characters; apart from A Zi, the others are all copied and pasted, leaving little impression. The work is too focused on "revealing the secrets" of the Xiaoyao Sect, lacking other driving forces for the plot. It's obsessed with serving as babysitters for the original main characters, lacking originality. In short, the work's future is worrying; it will likely need further cuts.

The author has too much personal bias; the villainous woman, A Zi, has more screen time than the main character, and yet this detestable and vicious woman is forcibly written as the female lead.

The author is truly talented! I've admired the Starry Sky Immortal since childhood, and today I've encountered a divine book. I only regret that there's not enough content. I'm offering all 32 of my monthly votes, just asking for 10 updates a day without hesitation. Please describe the ferocity and ruthlessness of the Starry Sky Technique as much as possible, I just want to read it for myself.