A Hero's Courage

I haven't read anything these days and am reviewing Wu Dalang. Lao Qiang, let me tell you that you don't have to mess around at all. The system is fantasy and the writing is the same as Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio. You can definitely take the same path as Wu Dalang and write Liu Bei through the late Sui Dynasty. There are still people watching. In fact, readers don't really have many requirements for the author. If the book is logical and the characters are written more vividly, a lot of people will read it. Why do you like to go to dead ends? If you are confused, just read Wu Dalang again. Readers' recognition is the real recognition. Rather than working behind closed doors

Don't double-open, don't double-open, don't double-open, why don't you listen to advice?

Good guy, I saw that there have been no updates on the Three Kingdoms side for seven or eight days, and I thought I was trying my best to write about this side. But it turns out that this side is also a eunuch. You are really invincible.

The author's writing is very good, but he is worried about over-describing the fighting scenes. No matter what level of master the opponent is, the fight is always very long and long, and I feel tired just watching it! Just like the football book I read, he comes on as a substitute in a warm-up match. He writes 22 chapters for you. Do you dare to believe it? I hope the author can write this well!

There is no such thing as trashy subject matter, only careless or talentless writing. Author, you have to write the story well, and you can't end it by repeating it like this. We are all familiar with the story of the boy who cried wolf. After three times, these old book friends will not chase you again. Only a great god's new platinum book will be popular. When you are not enlightened, you must be patient! You should know that "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" took a long time and millions of words to wait until it exploded.

(Your ability is not simply that of an ancient person going to the Song Dynasty/Wei Jin Dynasty) but that you have a good foundation in ancient prose, and it seems that you can write about indigenous people. In this case, you can play through the Wei and Jin Dynasties, or you can write about the rise of the indigenous people. Just like Z's core strength is chivalry, your ability is the collision of people with different worldviews, resulting in heroic transformation, or reverse hero deterioration. (The latter can learn from the Calabash Baby model, how can sister Snake Spirit easily dismantle seven Calabash Mountains) ——-Others, you can change the skin any way you want. I think the author has started to go astray since "Cao Cao Crosses Wu Dalang". The author is currently the most suitable for differentiated competition, and the advantage is that the writing is ancient, the author is a fan of famous works, and the hero is transformed. So I think the author is more suitable for two directions: 1. Positive Describe characters from other works who travel through time and upgrade heroes to heroes. 2. Anti- Describe that a force that originally had heroes leading heroes to change suddenly lost its leader and deteriorated. I will not show my shame when writing the original version, I will say some reverse writing methods, Now the history of the late Ming Dynasty is the history that has been changed by time travellers. Originally a hero XXX was tricked to death by time travelers. And Li Zicheng was just a substitute, a substitute whose level was a little inferior, and all his methods were a little inferior, which led to the entry of the Qing Dynasty. At this time - it is recommended to describe these heroes who failed to transform and saw another timeline before their death. How the story develops after that depends on the author... In the timeline where the key point has been destroyed, the gathering of the rangers has become a thing of the past, friends eventually turned into enemies, and the oath to save the country swallowed up the country itself. At the end of XXX's career, the heroic souls of XX and XX filled his dreams, howling vows of revenge every night. The adults who rushed to catch up, struggled unwillingly in the new prophetic dream of their own, and left this new world that was heading for disintegration. [AT] [Version 2] At the end of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, the court was a bastard, the people rebelled, and the enemies invaded the camps step by step. Liu Yu, the savior of the empire, took power in the east and west expeditions. The bosses of the Directory fully supported him to become Napoleon, and finally and Like Napoleon, he betrayed his original intention, betrayed the Directory, betrayed the Chang'an elders who supported him, and betrayed the oath he made in front of the tomb of Emperor Gao. In the end, he failed to complete the great cause of saving the world. Liu Song's revival became a flash in the pan in history amid the traps of human nature and the black hole of machinations. Although Comrade Talleyrand and Liu Muzhi in this time and space are good people (not necessarily, it can only be said that he died early), it is of no use. Like Napoleon's men, the marshals of the Beifu Army who followed Liu Yu did not die well one by one. All the vows to revolt and save the country were not worth the passage of time. In the end, Comrade Dawutan Daoji thought that everything was fine, but he died inexplicably at the hands of Liu Yu's son - the Southern Dynasty lost the world, just when the Southern Dynasty was established. This is the pathos, this is the greatness, this is the flavor. Fate, the struggle and failure of man and fate, has the beauty of Greek tragedy emerged? [Finally] How to write about the transformation and fall of heroes For example, Ruan Ji. Crying bitterly at the end of the road means that Ruan Ji is not satisfied with the darkness, so he behaves recklessly. Then since this is the meaning of crying at the end of the road, what does it mean to have no heroes at all? Of course Liu Bang and Xiang Yu are heroes, but there are no such heroes now, so all the famous adults, you are all bastards~ So who do you want to understand when talking about Wei and Jin? The easiest thing is to understand Ruan Ji thoroughly. What should we start with to fully understand Ruan Ji? What did Ruan Ji write? What did Ruan Ji do? Everyone is familiar with what Ruan Ji did. For example, working as an official for more than ten days and then running away after solving the problem, For example, drinking all kinds of meat and vegetables every day at the feet of the young daughter-in-law, For example, for example, for example, one is overly sad after the death of one's mother, for example, one cries bitterly at the end of the road, right? Are these things normal behavior? No. Then why do this? It was made for the Sima family to see. Where is Sima Zhao? Knowing that Ruan Ji is doing trouble every day, he still has to support him. Ruan Ji just wants this effect, just to see you support me. Why? Because you have a guilty conscience. Ruan Ji was very happy to see a guilty usurper showing his "generosity" by showing his "generosity" by showing his generosity to someone who violated etiquette every day. It was just a mistake to do something so unconscionable. But then, if you have a bad conscience, you will engage in various performance arts that are like compensation to move yourself. After you are moved, you will make two bigger mistakes. Moral hazard is like this - as long as you save him, he will know that you will definitely save him, and he will try his best to die. It usually takes decades to establish credit, but it only takes a moment to destroy it. So, if there was a British master above, would Ruan Ji be like this? No. This involves the second question, what Ruan Ji wrote. A strong man is so generous and aspires to dominate the world. Driving far away for service, I forgot about my orders. A good bow carries a black horn, and the armor is bright. Disregarding life in the face of adversity, one's body and soul will fly away after death. How can I serve as a whole body soldier and fight on the battlefield? Loyalty will be honored for centuries, and righteousness will make the name famous. I say thank you to future generations, because my integrity remains constant. Look, this is what the so-called "decadent" Ruan Ji wrote. The flames spread for thousands of miles, and the floods and rivers surged. The bow is hung with fusang, and the long sword is leaning against the sky. Mountain Tai is the fortress, and the Yellow River is the belt. Looking at the Zhouzi of Zhuangzhuang, there is no need to rely on prosperity and decline. Sacrifice one's life and abandon the middle field, and the black kite will cause harm. How can he be a great hero and his fame will be great from now on? The whole article is rich in writing. I don't know if I thought Ruan Ji came from the Han Dynasty. However, Ruan Ji can't reveal his true nature every day, saying that I am actually a Han Dynasty person, and I can't talk to you Wei and Jin people. But Ruan Ji is unwilling to give in, what should he do? In addition to the performance art I just mentioned, another way is to write. He wrote eighty-two poems about feelings. Except for these two poems that express his feelings, the rest are all laments. What kind of lament? In his own words, it is called "There are no heroes, and the emperor becomes famous." In our words, it is called "You Jin Yi Tan". This is the first character. Ruan Ji lived between the government and the public, constantly disgusting the court with performance art, and lived a happy life. The second character is Ji Kang. Who is Ji Kang? Ji Kang was an opposition figure and he did not take the middle road. I have mentioned Ji Kang's most famous performance art, which was to imprison Guangling San in front of all the imperial students on the execution ground, calling on heroes to stand up and wipe out all the Sima family. Although Ji Kang is not as smart and smooth as Ruan Ji, most people don't understand Ruan Ji's performance art. Only Sima Zhao understands it. It is a targeted attack. Everyone in Luoyang knows about Ji Kang's performance art. Three years later, several imperial students drank too much at the welcome party. When mentioning Ji Kang, they burst into tears and said to a blond freshman, "Ji Kang is a great man. He has more courage than me! He dared to say that the Sima family is a bastard and that I am not as good as him!" (I made up this paragraph. Of course, this conversation probably happened. Emperor Zhaowu was indeed a imperial student in Luoyang.)

The first book is what gets most readers hooked. How many readers will you have if you write a new martial arts novel, whether it's Lu Zhishen or Lu Zhishen? What a pity, although the author writes well, he doesn't listen to everyone's opinions! It's okay, the first book is a stunning work, I believe you will come back after repeatedly hitting the wall!

I'm writing a movie about Water Margin. The early stage of Water Margin is really good. Water Margin plus martial arts. Nine Sun Magic Power➕Lu Zhishen. Dragon and Elephant Prajna Skill➕Wu Song.

Lao Feixia, listen to my advice, if you write Red Mansions, it is really not a problem to get a lot of orders. There are very few good writers on Red Mansions, but the market is huge. You can definitely control it with your writing style. If you polish the plot a little, it will be easy to take off.

Sigh... This is how hard things are in the world. I originally wanted to criticize you for having a beginning but no end, but thinking about it, it is difficult for me to maintain enthusiasm without achieving results. I can only say that I really like Master Lu, and it would be a pity not to write about it.