The Hidden Path Above the Three Pure Ones

I saw the black guy grabbing the old gun and saying, "You must have been a kind family for many years, how could you bully me?" I was going to bet 10,000 points on you, and if you win, you have to give me 12,500. Sorry, you are so rude and don't accept these many coins from me. This has caused me to lose so much interest, so I deserve 2,500 coins. Before he finished speaking, he pulled out a pair of fists that looked like donkey sticks, and said: I will teach you how to be handsome and punch me twice. The big man and pigeon must be unhappy. How about you just return your life and interest to me and not beat you?

Cao Cao's book is a pitfall. The author's writing style is very good, but I feel that his writing attitude is very hasty. For several consecutive books, he has written in a relaxed manner, and then there are a lot of problems. You need to calm down, think carefully about the subject matter, and work slowly and carefully. The more anxious you are, the worse your writing will be! Looking forward to your next novella!

You bastard, I thought you would stop writing books.

It is recommended that Shen Qian open a single chapter in the previous book to explain it to everyone. The new book is released, and many people may not know about it.

It can be seen that the author is very bad at writing this kind of relationship between boys and girls. High EQ: I used the tsundere writing method of unpopular Internet articles for more than ten years. Low EQ: Times have changed, my lord. After the fat cat incident, everyone has already developed PTSD. Anyone who has a tendency to lick dogs will immediately be warned subconsciously and become disgusted. Even if you add a setting in the early stage and write about where the protagonist's relatives want the protagonist to go before they die, then it is better to simply write about which middle-level star king, star official, etc. The protagonist's ancestors had a favor with before they became enlightened, and passed down a slightly better skill to strengthen the body, have sharp ears and eyes, and think about problems quickly. That is very reasonable. Now that she has strengthened her body, it makes sense that something went wrong in the female lead's training and she was trapped at the bottom of a pit/abyss/cold pool. Then the protagonist is rescued, and after practicing the skills, his face becomes clearer. It is normal for the life-saving grace to increase the initial favorability to 50. There is a gatekeeper left in the audience to fight with the protagonist. It is reasonable for the protagonist to have seen some Taoism in his spare time because of his martial arts. You can even learn from the setting of another book. For example, the gatekeeper is a clone sent by one of the Three Pure Ones. Then the gatekeeper asks the protagonist to come up with a couplet. The protagonist comes up with three more and more good ones, until the gatekeeper is overjoyed and accepts him as an inner sect/named/true disciple. He happens to have handed over the job of gatekeeper but is still fishing in the world. Finally, follow the gatekeeper to upgrade the map and flash people. Isn't this smooth? I just don't understand why the author would use this kind of plot conflict that everyone can't accept at first sight, which I would call a happy enemy setting, to advance the plot. Please, the author, your name is Lao Feixia, not Ji Cha. If you write the latter casually, I believe you can write it well.

After following the third book of Lao Qiang, I can be considered an old reader. I always felt that this book did not have the refreshing feeling at the beginning of the first two books. The background of the story was very confusing, the characters were not very distinct and even a bit twisted, the protagonist's personality was not well established, and the plot unfolded a bit haphazardly. If Lao Qiang is not in good condition, you can slowly think about the later development of the plot. If you continue to write like this, the work will be lost to everyone.

The king of unfinished books, I am anxious to get the results of my new book. The ending of Wu Dalang's book was also hasty and the extra chapters were not updated. The newly opened book is unfinished and this one has a high opening and a low end. The further I write it, the less interesting it becomes.

So, the style of this book is modern immortality + mountain spirits and wild monsters? 🙂 It feels like there are no exciting fighting scenes after more than ten chapters 😜 Can the traditional art of Lao Qiang be given up?

How can I put it this way? I feel like the male channel is like a slave. It's a bit poisonous. I've ordered the first two books, but this one really feels a little bit hard to finish.

Traditional martial arts has become fantasy and immortality, wait and see.