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Chunqiu Bi has talked about things at home. Your previous two books were ruined by the characters. They don't have the open-mindedness of those over thirty years old. They are just like a loser, fantasizing about a goddess. This book is good for a while. I hope you won't make the same mistake again.

I feel that it is enough to write a female lead and a second female lead, but then they forcefully add drama in the later stage, saying that the female lead cannot have children, and then a secretary pops up without enough soul, which is like superfluous and a bit incomprehensible. In the end, it does not say what happened to the male lead and the second female lead. I am a bit speechless. Personally, I feel that the first part of the story is very good, but the latter part suddenly becomes messy.

Realistic themes, starting from scratch, ambition, a man cannot lose power for a day

1. The profession of chef is too niche. The protagonist has a major in cooking and started working as a cook after graduation. After being reborn, he started his own business by opening a roast duck restaurant, so the sense of immersion is not strong. 2. The starting capital was 500,000 yuan borrowed from a female classmate, and this female classmate was a wealthy daughter who had never been in love, and she was also the class beauty and school beauty. She held hands and hugged the second time they met, and even went home with the protagonist the third time. Yy is too much. 3. With such conditions, one has to tread two boats Book lovers who are willing to read genuine books may not all be high-end, but they are definitely not low-end. The protagonist's family background is so poor and he lives in a rural mud house; his major is so poor, his life experience is niche, he starts a business selling roast duck and is so simple, and the heroine is too unmatched, so he has two boats.

This should be it

Chasing two people at the same time, and then you can't do it the way you are, isn't this a scumbag from the beginning?

This book can actually be renamed. How about calling it someone's YY?

I think the core of the exciting points of rebirth novels are as follows: 1. Make up for regrets: such as relationships, family (bankruptcy, divorce, bullying), saving patients, etc. 2. Dimensionality reduction: use the thinking and insights of the aftermath to gain career or emotional development. 3. Showy operations: gray area means of making money, or previous successful experiences; such as grabbing subscription certificates, selling trophies, cheating (fraud), soliciting sponsorship, dating platforms, sexy underwear, etc. The author's book barely satisfies the first point and makes up for regrets. Does opening a roast duck restaurant require twenty years of chef experience? And even if you have 20 years of experience as a chef, can you definitely make a fortune by opening a country roast duck restaurant? (Initially, we planned to open a store in the countryside, then open a store in the county town, and then open a store in the city) Roast duck restaurants, Liangpi shops, Zhou Hei Ya, etc. Are all diligent businesses. Entrepreneurship is done by the boss and his family, which requires hard work. It is undeniable that some bosses do drive Mercedes-Benz and BMWs and live in luxury houses, and most of them just make ends meet. Let's talk about developing with the female protagonist. On the one hand, the male protagonist is a professional chef graduate. His parents are in rural areas of the county (with working experience). His earthen house is messy and dilapidated. He sells roast duck in the countryside. He has an average appearance and drives a motorcycle (motorcycle three-wheeler). On the one hand, the woman's parents are high-ranking city officials, she is a city school teacher, drives a luxury car, can easily spend 500,000 private money, is a school beauty, has a bachelor's degree, and has no love experience. To be honest, I can't even figure out what kind of yy it is to make the male protagonist and the female protagonist have feelings at this stage, and let the female protagonist lend 500,000 to the male protagonist to start a business.

You can still feel the taste of diaosi in the lines. The protagonist repeatedly talks about wanting true love, the kind of love that doesn't care about his worth. It turns out that Zhen Xin's family background is very good. Without a certain social status and wealth, it is impossible. When she met her mother earlier, Zhen Xin didn't even dare to admit that she was a schoolmate. Qi Meilan had always wanted to see the protagonist's store before deciding whether to make friends. These two people are not in line with the original intention of the protagonist, and the protagonist himself has always wanted to pursue true love, but in the end he still messed around in the middle. It was really uncomfortable to watch. He said he didn't care about his worth, but he always emphasized his family background and worth. The whole story is full of lack of confidence. A reborn person doesn't see the vision and structure of a reborn person, and I don't understand why he came up to open a roast duck restaurant.

Perfect Goddess

I have been spending money to pursue this book, and now I feel like giving up. Going back and forth between the two women, complaining, and writing about nonsense, this one got married, the other got hurt, this got divorced, and the other got along. Emotions Do we spend money to see this kind of nonsense? Are you tired? Are you making yourself uncomfortable?

Be careful

The protagonist has been a chef for so many years! He actually started a business with roast duck and stewed vegetables, and wanted to open a chain and sell them online. The author thought too much. The limitations of this business are too great. Firstly, it is too dirty and tiring. I can't bear to handle white ducks, not to mention killing and plucking the feathers myself. Secondly, it is difficult to find employees. The employees who visit the store every day are not happy. Roast duck is even more troublesome. The temperature and heat of each stove are too many and can be copied. Moreover, most of the roast duck masters are former I'll learn it for a few months, then run away and open my own store. Third, if you open more than five stores, unless your business licenses are different, or if you are a chain store, you have to apply for a big license. After you get it, the state requires you to be a food processing factory, and you have to apply for various certificates. Employees also need to be trained for Class A and Class B certificates, and management personnel also need certificates. Moreover, food processing factory certificates are very difficult to obtain, including fire protection. There are many, many, many certificates, which is very annoying. . . ! There are many, many more. If I say too much, I will shed tears! Also, if everyone eats this stuff fresh, who will eat your vacuum packaging online? If someone wants to eat it today, they have a lot downstairs, and how many days will they wait for you while shopping online? There's something wrong with your brain! Making a chain must be easy and easy to copy! For example, the braised chicken with rice is a real skill. .

Abandoned, slipped away. It's ok, but the two heroines are fine with a bowl of water. I feel sorry for Qi from the beginning to the end. If you don't get married, you still have to drag someone to give you a child. If you get divorced, you won't even consider her. These two children should not have been given to you. There is no shortage of suitors. Is it necessary to be unhappy without the protagonist?

How can I put it? It feels like the beginning is extremely poisonous. I don't know how I came up with this plot. At the age of 24, I still confess my love to my high school classmate through text messages. Book friends can imagine for themselves that in addition to having a very good relationship with each other in high school, they also have impressions of other classmates. These two goddess-level people have no impression of you at all. If you send a text message to express your love, I will give you a chance. I think it's normal to delete it directly. To others, you are just a stranger online. Give you a chance.

The author hurry up and promote the heroine, and the pace is faster. Slowly

Comparing one's feelings, a woman agrees to the protagonist's pursuit for reasons of efficiency and success rate, but at the same time she also accepts the pursuit of multiple other men, and dates and gets intimate with them from time to time. She plans to choose the most suitable one among these men to get married. What does the author think of this woman? After reading the chapter where I meet Mother Luo when I am sending a midnight snack, I can be sure that the protagonist is a scumbag, the kind who is both serious and independent at the same time. The protagonist wants to have love and marriage, but is unwilling to be wronged. You must know that relationships require compromise and management, but the protagonist is extremely arrogant and might as well be a straightforward scumbag.

The owner of a local chain of roast duck restaurants, the first time you get to know him is when you go to his store to buy roast duck. When he drives an Audi to hug Xiaomi, you can only eat ashes behind his car. He still dares to look down on others. Do you think it's funny or not? And the only reason he dared to look down on others was that he had seen big bosses earning hundreds of thousands a month in other novels, but his monthly income was not even a fraction of theirs.

It's great to like so many female protagonists😍😍😍

Sister

Reality is more absurd than fiction. Have you ever seen an entire building occupied by mistresses and managed in a military style?

I haven't read it since Xin and I divorced without making any fuss. I didn't expect it to end in just twenty pictures. The author should also know that it is difficult to deal with this kind of thing. Why? Because scumbags are bad girls, don't miss it, good girls should be cherished, it's so unfair and unworthy of Qi Meilan, and she will be a pure scumbag later.

Otherwise, it will ruin the fan base too much.

Rebirth 2003 is so well written, it's not out of date even now, but it's a pity that it's getting worse and worse now.

The writing is indeed getting better and better, but it's easy to lose it in the later stages.

The author, Tongdao Xu, writes very well. The kind of period writing is very immersive. The rebirth of the wildfire era (not the wild era) is also good. Unfortunately, people nowadays like to write about dog licking, novices, and stupid articles. The general environment does not allow writing. I don't know what is wrong with this era.

The author's name reminds me of Mu Zimei. . .

These two chapters have been revised well recently. They are much better than the routine of Wen Chao Wen. Come on, the author.

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Zhen Xin is grand, invincible, Yu Jie, yyds I suggest the author describe it in depth, hehe😬