Cultivating Immortality and Longevity, Starting as a Fisherman

Around chapter 100, I said that this book didn't need so many alternate identities on Earth; it was a major mistake. This kind of formula was novel for the author's first book and suited the setting of that book. Now, firstly, this formula doesn't fit the setting of this book, and secondly, many people have already used it.

The biggest problem in the modern world is that, like in the previous book, the author still arranges for the protagonist to be the mastermind behind everything and to fabricate myths everywhere. The problem is that, in my opinion, the protagonist doesn't actually need to do that at all; the protagonist is actually doing something meaningless.

The big shots in the cultivation world devised a "Wandering Stone Plan." This plan was based on a secret realm, using the best ley lines as array plates, the best spiritual veins as energy sources, and nuclear fusion golden pills as the driving force. All the top experts worked together to transform the secret realm into a stone that could not be digested by the evil god.

Now that I've read this far, I've noticed something. Something's been bothering me for a while now; has the author even decided which direction they're going to take in their writing? If your focus is on the cultivation world plot, then your writing style is too bizarre.

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Gun-wielding monk

The novel can be described as having a promising start but a disappointing ending; it begins brilliantly but becomes a mundane, repetitive narrative later on. It's nowhere near as good as the original "My Little Kingdom." The protagonist's display of divine power in front of people on Earth is only good at the beginning, and the cultivation in the immortal realm seems like a typical light novel…

I just don't understand. Isn't it good to stay in the cultivation world? There are cheat codes and spiritual energy there. Why do you insist on going back to Earth? What does Earth have? Nothing! What the hell is the point of going back? What can you do besides showing off?

The more complex, the worse. Just write about two or three factions with different identities. Why insist on creating so many identities everywhere? What's the point of having so many identities if you already have power? Once you've created them, you just abandon them. Your disciples will always be useless.

This book is neither entirely honest nor entirely honest; it claims to be all-powerful, yet the protagonist is constantly creating trouble across the entire planet using multiple identities, all thanks to a "low-IQ" aura. Especially the part about genuine and fake cultivation—it feels like a miniature world, the author seems unable to escape this trope.