What’s Wrong with Superman’s Son Wanting to Be Superman?

This book should be changed to, "What's wrong with Superman's son being quite CS?" "My dad has so much merit that he can never use it up."

The main plot is good and the plot is good. The only shortcoming (I think it is a big shortcoming) is that the protagonist is a bit too playful and too abstract. Everyone likes to watch daily abstractions, but when it is time to be serious, it is better not to do it. For example, in the parts of "Destroying the Doomsday" and "Going to Heaven", the decisive battle is about to take place. The readers are in the state. The protagonist is still doing abstraction, or even abstracting a whole page. This is said to be ugly because the number of words is too low. It's uncomfortable to read The daily abstract writing in this serious background is actually proofed. That's what "Embers of the Deep Sea" is. Daily life can be a little more abstract than the deep sea, but when it's time to be serious, be serious I hope the author can see it

Have you traveled through DC? Something scrawled.

What's wrong with the suggestion that my son change his name to Superman and want to be Superman?

What's wrong with the son who mistakenly thought he was Superman?

I can accept both single and multiple things. The only thing I can't accept is ambiguity and Shura field.

I feel that pig's feet are suitable for copying the comic book Invincible Young Master. If he has super powers later, he can also say that he is a Vitrum hybrid🐶

On the surface, it looks like a fantasy novel because of the systematic data and constant gags. However, aside from the incredible abstraction, the setting and main line are unexpectedly rigorous. It can be seen that the author has a complete outline and concept, and he should be able to write for a long time. Also, I realized that the DC novels where the main character is a villain are actually very well written, so it can't be the clown's conspiracy.

The early stages of this book are interesting. There are many jokes, baggage, and interesting interactions with the Superman brothers. This is the most beautiful part. Later, external forces and plots began to be introduced. It started to get a little confusing. Buttons left. It's vague, big, and totally irrelevant to the plot. The plot development of the story is completely fooled by jokes. Then the protagonist never upgraded. But there are more and more professions and more and more skills, and the author is probably confused. The expression of strength begins to be mindless. The combat power of the characters appearing is getting higher and higher, and they are becoming more and more chaotic. After more than 200 pictures, the performance power has completely collapsed. But relying on the advantages of being a fan. With the performance of the original work and the high combat power, most of them are still funny and still watchable. But then there were too many high combat abilities. The early main line is completely blurred. Character interactions and plot trends have completely begun to change. Top characters began to appear on a large scale and engage in conspiracies. But it's still foggy. Don't push the main line either. There is no branch line either. The protagonist has grown from a smart kid who occasionally played tricks in the early days. He turned into a destructive and crazy naughty kid. The jokes started to become malicious and intentional. If you can't push the plot forward, just make jokes. There are even repeated sentences in a short period of time, with a large number of meaningless adjectives as if they were written by AI. The rhythm has been completely messed up. Overall, it's quite a pity.

Even in the past, a 10,000-word chapter was superior to others. Now, those authors whose titles are 3,000-word chapter and 4,000-word chapter really make me laugh.