Pet God

Starting from "Super Gene", I have been following it for about 9 years. Twelve You are still my favorite author, but my perspective is different. In addition, the old authors I follow all feel that they have exhausted their talents. I am very emotional and hope that you will be better, so I would like to share my feelings and suggestions from my personal perspective. First of all, from the perspective of this book, its biggest problem is the imperfection of data or worldview. Reasonable data and combat effectiveness are a means for readers to measure the world. However, your data collapsed very quickly this time, or in recent books, it is relatively fast. For example, from the beginning of God, you install a plug-in that is not growth-oriented, but directly to the point of completion in one step; Superbase uses imaginative mechanical concepts to deal with challenges. Battle; when it comes to this book, it is the secret method of one - in fact, I admit that there is a high probability that this is the reason why you have not found a remedy. I can even directly guess that this secret method of one is the interference method left by the big universe, a skill that can directly rise to the half-step universe level. However, you just used this irreplaceable big plug-in to perform it directly A wave of invincible drama, which essentially wiped out all the audience's expectations for victory and defeat and the meaning of comparison of combat effectiveness (in fact, combat effectiveness itself is a concept of first suppressing and then increasing. A full comparison between combat effectiveness is the existence of "suppression", so the rhythm of this book is very smooth, and there are even no memory points) , Secondly, it also reduced the manifestations of other external forces, such as pets such as bloodthirsty rabbits, which completely squeezed out his ecological niche. Even if the settings of pet transformers and pet armor were later restored, it would not help. Even the levels, supporting roles, top secret status, etc. All lost their meaning later. This is a huge failure in terms of online novels.       ，，， Looking back on the past, you actually had good answers to these questions in the past. I don't know if your request for leave that year had an impact on you, so let's review the past together here. The first is the sword armor, which continuously strengthens the difficulty of the growth of the protagonist and supporting characters by leveling one level after another and describing the huge gap between them many times, and better sets off the excitement of the protagonist's leapfrog challenge. Then when it comes to God Gene, this book highlights the thrill of hunting, adventure, and search and retreat. But I especially feel that the one in your first shelter that hunts super divine creatures is the most rewarding after years of preparation and training. After that, you will also add some new settings to satisfy the sense of novelty every time you level up a shelter. In addition, it has a very good advantage, which I think can solve your current problem, that is, multiple sets of exercises. ——Why do I think this is good? First of all, it can not destroy the balance, that is, it does not need to explain why one skill can surpass everyone else. Secondly, it can write the growth of the protagonist in a slower and more detailed way (although the later stage of Shelter is still a bit faster, and the time is pressed twice), and this kind of "jogging" can also improve the influence of external forces and express them more distinctively and expressively. Then came gaming, which I think is the pinnacle of your worldview, a perfect fusion of tradition and mythology! It combines the first two advantages very well, such as level division, using the simplest data to divide, and showing the peak by blocking a certain key data point (this sentence seems weird, give an example, for example, all normal methods at the first level can only reach 9 points, and only some special skills can reach 10 points). In the end, it is stuck that humans cannot break through the myth level settings on their own, and it raises time and time again all myth level and above battles without the help of external forces or dominated by humans. The strong character of the force character mainly highlights how difficult it is for a person to have power, and also leaves more space for the past era when a hundred flowers bloomed; and then the slow pace of the eight kinds of skills is once again reaching its peak, which leaves more words to describe other external forces. Coupled with the monster spawning mobile phone specially designed for this external force, and the companion pet setting that corresponds to myths and legends one-to-one, making us familiar yet unfamiliar (strange mainly refers to expecting their performance in this worldview), this has contributed to what I think is the best description of external forces. And you used to be very good at writing dramas about turning defeat into victory. I liked it very much. I personally hope you can pick it up again. I won't give you examples, there are too many, but I always feel that maybe you want to try counterintuitive, or maybe the trend of readers is changing. Your recent books are no longer as amazing as when I read them, but have become mechanisms or more purely numerical competitions. (Anyway, I think) In the past, we fought hard first and then determined the value through the results, persisted through mechanisms (such as bug-like movements), and then obtained information such as testing to see through weaknesses or gaining insights like explosive seeds to establish victory. Are these really outdated? 😭 Nowadays, I feel that there is less words to describe the aspect of persistence through the mechanism, and it has become a numerical comparison that seems to compete for priority. God forgot, oh, there is also a bit of invincible body control, super basic, uh... I also forgot, fire? Anyway, the beloved "Fudo Myooh (please enter the text, forget 😜)" is a model, and the only thing left is the size 😥. Even if the numerical value is a mechanism, it cannot be your brainless way to fight! But these new books are not without merit. God tried to add gems, games and other elements, and there are also new attempts in exploration. Even if it fails, it is still a practice; Chaoji is the one where I feel that the author has changed the most (not in a derogatory sense), and the protagonist has become "younger" - in the past few works, especially God Gene, the protagonist always gave people a childish and pure uncle. Uncle feels like the previous generation who had no sense of abstraction, who purely focused on improving themselves and making friends with the same pure friends (such as Lone Bamboo), and also gave people a childish to youthful feeling in scenes such as pretending to be slapping people in the face - and then in this book, it seems that he has become a current netizen, trying the whole thing again and again, obsessed with using "concepts" "Nian Shen", and the way of doing things has gradually become anti-routine, etc. This really makes me feel very novel. Although this has eliminated the process and ending of the serious confrontation in the past, and lost the interesting point I mentioned in the previous paragraph, I am not very sure, and even made me very entangled, entangled in whether this is such an anti-logical thinking of netizens. It destroys the current Internet articles, but I can't accept and bring them into the past Internet articles, so I won't comment; then "The God of Love", I actually prefer that this is your attempt to retrieve the feeling of past works, and try to connect them with the current mentality. Although I think it is very broken and imperfect, I give it affirmation. Oh, but there is another little common problem with these books that I would like to point out, and that is technology. What technology means to online articles, especially non-science fiction online articles, is actually a means of using power, that is, human wisdom. When we pick it up, we must affirm the dignity of human beings today (why we are strong), and it is also the influence of materialism (that's how I am anyway) ), but this is extremely contradictory and tiring. Nowadays, novels pursue materialism and idealism (Reincarnation Paradise is an example of this. On the one hand, it has idealistic strengthening, idealistic settings, etc., On the other hand, it explains the origin of everything, and humbly expresses that everything starts from the foundation and builds the foundation. Raising a high platform, there is also the most materialistic and bloody fight at the end. For example, the protagonist's knife can be infinitely strengthened. Is it possible? And it needs to be increased bit by bit with growth, and finally it can be seen by killing everything with the protagonist. This is the best example.) (In addition, I am a book lover of Samsara Paradise, so I have no praise. The derogatory element is there, it's just analysis) (off topic 🤤), you either explain everything, or you don't get too involved in technology. I think it's very good to just have a taste of the game. It has a plot, expressiveness, and wisdom, and it doesn't appear at the end. At the end of Super Base, it is obviously over the top. A machine is used as the final boss. So, can other independent machines appear in the main universe? So what is the meaning of the machine? After all, after playing the game, the omniscience of the machine is denied, the upper limit is lowered, and it is always inferior to others; mass production also destroys the combat power, weakens the difficulty of becoming a universe-level powerhouse, and weakens the competitiveness of the small universe characters who come to the main universe. So I don't think the product of technology should be used as the ultimate setting, otherwise it will become a competition in computing power and energy. (In fact, I have a suggestion to add it to the super base - the Jade Emperor and others transformed into humans in order to, or in order to become the universe level). However, the battle suits in the game also seem to be able to reach the universe level (?), So it depends on how you write the technology. So you are not really imagining that the main universe itself can travel everywhere at the cosmic level, right? So how do the strong men of the small universe perform? Are the good and the bad mixed? I hope everyone is like a dragon, instead of just upgrading quickly (in my imagination, the cosmic level is the final level, but whether the subsequent competition will involve small universes attacking each other or using the unique energy of each small universe to cultivate and compete, I haven't decided yet, it's just an idea, a suggestion). By the way, it's not that technology is undesirable, but our technology is too powerful and there are many illusions about the future of technology. It is almost powerful enough to be omnipotent, while other types of worlds in our imagination are too weak and completely incomparable. Here I will give you an example to analyze a book that I also love very much, "The Mythical Version of the Three Kingdoms" - first of all, it is based on the Three Kingdoms, so even if it often uses technology to win later, it is limited to the times and will not eclipse its idealistic side (weak technology will make it unnecessary, and strong technology will make other things change. It's not necessary, so it's best to write about the embryonic stage). Secondly, the technology in its book is very necessary, because there is a core setting in the book called cloud energy. I won't go into details. In short, its purpose is to suppress the idealistic side of the opposite side and turn the world back to materialism, so this gives technology enough room to be used. And we obviously prefer the modern style, so naturally we consciously block technology, otherwise the combat power will collapse, so we should do it consistently. Of course, if you have to write about it, or if you really want to try it, just write about the embryonic stage, or limit them through human aspects. The upper limit is like the mythical level for playing games. Well, it seems that playing games has reduced the upper limit of the machine, but I don't know if the super base is broken without explanation (I originally thought that the upper limit was the universe level, because my setting is that the universe level is the last level).                                              Well, there is a lot more I want to say, but I have forgotten it now, so that's it for now, some suggestions and feelings, I hope the author will understand. {"NickName":"Twelve Wings of Dark Seraph","UserId":2964373}                                                                                                                      UserId

After reading a few of them, it doesn't feel like a beast-control novel, it looks like an online game novel.

It's not satisfying to watch, the plot is too slow, the protagonist's combat power is also slow to grow, the pets can only say how powerful they are, but they can't show it, there are too few battles, and there's not much fun.

Just watched it, it feels good. Found another book of grain and grass

Here we go again, level 1 strength has escaped the attacks of level 10 monsters who are good at sneak attacks. You just like to write and do some abstract operations.

I thought the sword armor written before Twelve was amazing, with a large amount of super divine genes. Although the results after that were not very good, I feel that the author has been writing books seriously, and his story is worth reading.

The author of the book I read when I was a kid has also published a new book, so did the author also lose money by opening a stock account?

Twelve, we can't write a book and play Game 2

The real content of this book is about downloading dungeons, controlling beasts, fighting monsters, upgrading, old 6, having fun, and refreshing articles. If you only want to watch pet training and pet battles, then I suggest you lower your expectations and watch it. 🤭

Basically the same type. Not very interesting. I have read several books written by this author. Generally speaking, the plot is too open, and the author is afraid that the male protagonist will be offended, so he has been suppressing the male protagonist's combat power in various places, from plotting, to pets, to opportunities. I read "The God Gene". The reason why I put it away after reading half of it was because the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist was ambiguous, but there was only one, and then the battle force was so overwhelming, and most importantly, I didn't like the author's indifference towards pets. Especially the last point, each author's book is particularly special, and so is this book. To be honest, if you have a pet, take care of it.

This book gave me the impression that it is a fantasy and enjoyable novel. It is very enjoyable and enjoyable. There is some control over beasts, but it feels like it is incidental. Most of the people your book title attracts are those who read the beast-controlling novels, so the click-through rate and retention rate are not good? If so, I suggest you try changing the title to something similar to God Gene and Playing Games. If not, just pretend I didn't say anything. Finally, if I hadn't seen the author's name, I probably wouldn't have clicked in to read this book 🙂

The path of sword armor is the craziest; the path of super-god genes is the longest; the path of I just want to play games quietly is the best; the path of re-evolution from God is the shortest; and the path of super-base evolution is the messiest. The path taken by the Divine Taoist Saint can only be said to be incomplete and too immature; the path taken by the God of Chong is full of shadows of his predecessors, and the road ahead is still unknown. I look forward to it, looking forward to it going further and having an infinitely bright future!

I feel deeply about the super god gene, which created a huge and splendid world for me when I was young. The sincere feelings and infinite concept god gave me the courage to persevere in the most difficult days. I still remember Han Sen winning his wife in the game, accidentally entering the Lilliputian Kingdom, and touching the god with my baby. Leaves, keep upgrading the shelter, kill monsters in the ice and snow shelter..., It turns out that the world is so wonderful Playing the game is also very good, the setting is very strong, but there is a feeling of being boxed in, the memory is still fresh, listening carefully, suddenly extra months, sleeping for a long time to improve the combat power 🙂

I like to read cool articles, but this is too straightforward and brainless. Let's not talk about the skills and pets at the beginning. The protagonist's opportunities are barely acceptable. He is willing to go deep behind enemy lines to cut off the queen for his teammates. The heroine suddenly gives it to the protagonist as if he is in heat. Wang Lian's reversal and reversal are also abstract.

Those old authors are indeed a bit out of step with the times, and their thinking was all about writing books 10.20 Years ago! What's the cheerleading spirit about? Such a weird setting for Lezi, but you also wrote it in Lezi's style! It's great to write normally, but you have to have weird settings! The awakening talent is the Classic of Mountains and Seas, which allows the secret spirit to evolve into a strange beast from the Classic of Mountains and Seas! If you want to be more curious, you can add mysterious elements to your talent, turning your secret spirit into something indescribable! It's better than the nonsense setting of Soul of Cheerleaders!

It's also a white article. When reading Chen Dong's book, it might cost 2 million to 3 million and it will feel boring, but when I read this B's article, I won't. It's also rice. It's as poisonous as rice, which makes people feel tasteless but they can't get rid of it. The same is true for the god gene, and the same is true for playing games. I'm probably sick.

The author will write another book called The God of Genes. It would be great to rest on his laurels. It would look good with just a little change.

It used to be pretty good to watch Super God, but now it's getting more and more boring. Old wine in the same old bottle. Change the bottle but not the wine. The same routine will be used forever. Infinite matryoshka dolls. It's boring. I just quit it.

Looking at it all the way from Shen Gene, every time the Twelve books are written to the end, there will be a feeling of shortening the content and ending in a hurry. Shen Gene's empire universe has not been written at all; the game has been constantly stopped, and a lot of pits at the end of Light Speed have not been filled; God has seen the end at a glance, with only four hundred chapters; Chao Ji enters After entering the Immortal Courtyard, I only wrote more than two hundred chapters before ending; in this book, The Beloved God did not start writing about the secret realm of the sky at all after entering the secret realm of the sky. I felt that there was still a lot of setting and content that could be written and improved. The result was a familiar rushed ending, and a finale in which the demon child was betrayed and destroyed. Twelve's books always give me a feeling of being smooth at the beginning, superb in the middle, and sloppy at the end. It's such a pity 😭

The introduction and beginning aren't very good, but it's actually pretty good.

I used to stay up all night chasing these two books, but unfortunately it's getting worse and worse.

It seems that Twelve really won't update the book, so let's say goodbye.

Not enough, not enough at all. I finished reading the 200 chapters I had saved in two days.

It seems that after obtaining the 12th King of Heaven, I feel that the trajectory of my life has changed. The author may also have his own life. It's different from before. It's impossible to reorganize and write like before, but I still hope to keep updating 10,000 words a day.

Come back soon12, the child is crying because he has no books to read 😢

It's almost a year, when will you publish a new book?

When will the new book be released?

Twelve, there are only three months left until I take a year off. When will you come back?

12When will the new book be released? Many great authors have released new books.

The first time I came into contact with Super God Gene, there was no concept of online literature at that time. I always read comics. Later, I watched Anjing Playing Games and never clicked on the author. Later I found out that it was the same author as God Gene, so I went