Secretly Raising a Little Golden Crow

Dragon set post The following examples: Name: Du Yu (required, may change according to the style of the work) Demon soldier: Bow (required) Demon pet: Little Fire Fox (optional, optional Self-created, or assigned by the author) Demon Skill: (optional, can be created by the author, or assigned by the author) Spark Splash: Spray a flame ball to the target area, the flame ball will explode after contacting the target, burning the enemy. Fire Cloud Tail: Swinging with its tail, it spreads out layers of fire mist, hiding itself in it to confuse and intimidate your enemies. *Genuine readers will be given priority*

Women's clothing reminder

Ayu, have you seen that the fiery pine and cypress city that you longed for in your writing has come true.

Hello everyone, I am a rookie. Today I'm going to talk to you about my personal favorite author, none of them - Yu. Speaking of parenting, everyone must think of his masterpiece - "Nine Star Poisonous Milk". With this book, I was elected as the science fiction best-seller among the Twelve Kings of Internet Literature in 2019, and subsequently successfully signed a contract with the great master. This book can be said to be at the forefront of the trend of online writing. In 2019, readers who are tired of traditional fairy tales and fantasy have no new books for a long time. Prior to this, Zhuzi's "The King, Spare Your Life" created a new writing style - relaxed and urban. Different from the traditional fantasy fantasy of blind cultivation and upgrading, "The King, Please Spare Your Life" is full of fresh and interesting jokes. The book "Parenting" can be said to have caught up with the wave of Internet literature. It has been on the fast track from American comics to apocalypse, and its achievements have been outstanding. The prosperity of the Internet is whipping everyone with a whip called development, urging everyone to move forward. In the era of fast food, excessive anxiety, and overwhelming pressure of life, readers crave a relaxing and enjoyable reading experience. For example, I myself followed the recommendation and found "Nine Star Poisonous Milk" after watching "Cultivation Chat Group" and "Your Majesty, Spare My Life". Of course, not every work and every author can seize the opportunity and take off in the spotlight. The success of parenting depends not only on the general background, but also on its own uniqueness. First of all, it is the most praised positive energy in parenting: three positive views, friendship and love are stronger than gold, and full feelings of family and country. The protagonist is loyal, persistent, and keeps his promises. In parenting, there is no disgusting scheming, people are honest with each other, and there is something called "love" flowing between the lines. For example, Shadow Crow in "Nine Stars Poisonous Milk" is willing to sacrifice himself to fight for a glimmer of life for the team; what the national team coach said to the protagonist Jiang Xiaopi: "Comrade, come back alive"; after becoming famous, the protagonist helps his teammate Gu Shi'an return to his hometown in fine clothes and untie his knot... Some people may think that the feelings of family and country are very empty and big, and I have nothing to worry about. But he does exist. Just when you turn on the TV and listen to the news broadcast every day, "It's a mess abroad, with intrigues and intrigues all day long. Looking at the world, the scenery is better here", a sense of pride, a pride beyond expression arises spontaneously. Yes, this is China, our country! Our science and technology are advancing day by day, and our national strength can be enhanced day by day. China is where our confidence lies. This feeling is particularly strong after watching "Nine Stars Poisonous Milk" and realizing the responsibility and responsibility of Chinese soldiers. The snowfield may be vast and the wind and snow are blowing; or the magma may be flowing across it, and it may be scorching; or it may be shrouded in darkness, and it may be silent and lonely; or there may be ferocious beasts lurking, and dangers lurk; or it may be foggy, confusing people on the road... The night watchmen always stick to their posts, for decades, to protect the safety of one place. Some people may say that this is just a fabrication. How can anyone in reality endure such pain and suffering? It is true that the characters in the novel are fictitious and exaggerated, but this spirit is undoubtedly worthy of recognition. It is heavy in the lightness, and the feelings of family and country are mixed in the light humor. While laughing, I also learned a lot. When asked if it was worth it, the night watchman's answer was concise and powerful: "It's worth it!" They said that countless people and infinite distances are all related to me. Lucky like you and me, we are both Chinese. As said in "All Quiet on the Western Front": "The will of the dead is not for revenge, but for no more." Peace is an eternal topic. Ahem, I just finished the college entrance examination, and I have a strong sense of Chinese composition, so don't mind. Secondly, what I personally prefer is the writing style and poetry skills of parenting. (Of course, we don't insist on claiming that we are accomplished in poetry.) From the optimistic comfort of "Everything except life and death is a scratch", to the helpless sadness of "A seven-foot body, already given to the country, why should I be honored!", From "A true leader, even if he dies. Go, the will left behind will also unite people together." The tragic feeling, to the emotion of "I must know that when I was young, I took the clouds and promised to be the best in the world." This shows the depth of Yu's literary heritage, which can instantly touch your heart in such a fast-paced era. Speaking of which, apart from "Dragon", this is the first book that made me copy sentences and paragraphs into my notebook while reading. The poetry skills of parenting are also inadvertently reflected in his works. Next, let me open my notebook and give you an example: "The moon is snowing and the night is frightened, and the little soul soldiers are on the way. The three levels ask each other one by one, and the name of the green mountain is reported." This quatrain may seem ordinary, but as long as you savor it carefully, eh, it is not that strong... Just kidding. Although this poem cannot be called a stunning masterpiece, it perfectly fits the content of the original work "Lord of Nine Stars". The Snowy Night Terror in the first two sentences is a unique soul beast in the snow realm. It can be regarded as a kind of horse. It is also the natal soul beast of everyone in the protagonist's team except the protagonist. The little soul soldier refers to the protagonist's team. In just ten words, he outlines a picture of walking on a snowy night under the moon, which is really vivid. The three gates in the third sentence refer to the three city walls of Baituan, Qianshan and Wan'an in the work, which guard the tranquility of the northern border of China. In just five words, a group of people have traveled hundreds of kilometers without any moisture at all. Isn't this considered a conscientious author? The Qingshan Army in the fourth sentence refers to the number of the army where the protagonist's team is located. The Qingshan Army once had a glorious and tragic history, but it suffered heavy losses due to the difficult task, and the situation is no longer what it was last night. The protagonist team has inherited the legacy of the Qingshan Army and is about to expand territory and make contributions on the battlefield. "Repaying the name of Qingshan" vividly demonstrates the pride in their bones. You must have read the above paragraph and understood it. If you don't understand, I won't say more. Other poems about parenting are also quite excellent, such as this one that won the championship: "The beautiful woman's sword and halberd are entangled with snow and frost, and the north wind moves the horse out of the Songjiang River. I have not picked up laurels on the top of the mountain, and I don't want to look back at my hometown!" A kind of heroic feeling of picking up the stars and the moon and winning glory for the country arises spontaneously, is there any! Finally, one of the necessary conditions for success is a solid foundation and market-tested routines. This point is actually ignored by many readers or authors, but if you count the books with names in the history of online literature, they are inseparable from the author's solid foundation and the readers' routines that they will never tire of. Let me give you a personal experience. I told a classmate about "Nine-Star Poisonous Milk", and no matter how dazzling my talk was, he still dismissed it: "How can anyone read this kind of routine article?" I was very angry at the time, but after thinking about it carefully, I realized that the routine was not the reason for the success of this book. Simple and clear settings, extensive skills borrowed from various games, and familiar routines for upgrading and killing monsters... These routines that have been tested by the market have been given a fresh shell by the parenting writers, attracting more readers and retaining more readers. Maybe some readers will despise this routine as deeply as my classmate (of course, I have no ill will towards these readers, this is the reader's freedom), but most readers will pay for the routine. Why? It's simple, because it's fun to watch! Internet writing is popular literature, and pleasure is the highest pursuit. Things like writing style are just a foil after all. Maybe some people prefer to read creative articles. After reading articles about parenting, they feel that it is not difficult. I can do it too. But please understand that a good idea does not mean a good story. There is an insurmountable gap between imagination and practice. Unless you are the kind of gifted writer who is destined to make a living and write a hit book, a lot of writing practice, a solid foundation and market-tested routines are always indispensable on the way to writing. Through the hit "Nine Star Poisonous Milk" about parenting, we can also summarize some universal rules in the Internet literary world, which will be of certain help to latecomers. As the wandering Toad said, "It doesn't matter how many shortcomings an online article has, as long as the advantages are outstanding." Many people complain that parenting is poorly finished, its combat power has collapsed, and its worldview cannot be justified. However, in the end, this book was ordered for 40,000+, and the highest order was 60,000+. The results are enough to explain a lot of problems. In fact, there are only four words: flaws do not cover up strengths. When reading Shuangwen, it is destined that you don't need to pay too much attention to details. "Nine Star Poisonous Milk" is essentially a fantasy book disguised as science fiction. If the author pursues the perfection of the world view too much, he will lose the author's own expertise and the charm of the work itself. Parenting can be said to have reached a peak in terms of character creation, daily jokes, emotional expression and upgrading of monster-fighting routines, and unexpected driving, and this is where the charm of this novel lies. It is impossible for an author to successfully avoid all poisonous points, just as there is no perfect thing in the world, but as long as it is a little outstanding, it can attract readers and achieve certain results. This is still applicable today, and it will be the same in the future online writing market. I hope this article can give you a deeper understanding of parenting and his works, and also bring you some different understandings. At the end of this article, I wish the new parenting book a great sale! I am a novice, see you all in the next column!

#Internet Writing Hole Filling Festival Wishing Season#Qingshi

I have read all the author's articles, three of them, but not much of this one. Each book has an elderly female character who is single, good-looking, and has a close relationship with the male protagonist. But every book is not with the male protagonist, Big Cat, Professor Si, Yang Qingqing. I like them very much, but not being together has become my biggest regret.

I think the novel should decide in advance whether there will be a female protagonist, how many female protagonists, and whether there will be any emotional lines. I like beast-controlling novels very much, and the pet beasts in this book are also very good. In the early stage, there was a momentum of three female protagonists but I tolerated it without writing it. However, at the end of 75%, there should be a lot of important content. As a result, the emotional drama of the three female protagonists started to be edited. Moreover, this book has a problem from front to back, which is that the depiction of pet beasts is too few and too single. Many times, a certain pet beast is not described in more than ten chapters. It becomes more serious in the later period. As a result, the emotional line of the three female protagonists has to be written. I couldn't bear it anymore, so I gave it up.

After reading a thousand chapters, I have a lot of feelings, especially the part about the young master breaking through the gate of the Holy Saint. What shocked me the most was this poem: The land is vast and the country is in mourning. The sky is blue and the wind is singing sadly. The towering Kunlun, look back again. Looking across the mountains and rivers, I can't see my hometown. Great Xia has fallen, why is it a hometown? The seven scenes, corresponding to the seventh floor of the Shadow Gu Tower, also strengthened Qingshi's protective heart towards Du Yu step by step. According to this plot setting, it should be no problem to write eleven or twelve chapters. Few people will even think that the author is bad, and the magnificent plot will definitely make people hooked. When I saw the author summarizing it in poetry, I admired it very much - it was so wonderful to leave so many set plots and not write down the "word count" in detail, but only to write the bones and not fill in the flesh. It leaves the reader with a lot of room for imagination while avoiding redundant plots. It is really wonderful. As for why it is said to be redundant, from my understanding, it is precisely because the protagonist of the book is Du Yu. This plot (and the various experiences of Qingshi) neither has anything to do with the growth of Du Yu's own strength, nor does it promote the improvement of Du Yu's mind (at least the relationship is not that big). In Du Yu's growth process, it is not worth devoting too much space to a special book. Moreover, the most critical and important part, that is, the experience of the seventh level is indeed described in detail. I really appreciate the detail here. I admire it. Also, the plot design here is so wonderful and touching, can it be written as a side story? I look forward to it. Jpg It can be said that it is quite rare for online novels to be so carefully crafted and pay attention to the structure of the author. Most people write about trivial areas, which often makes people ignore the main plot thread. As a result, the whole novel becomes more and more scattered, and ultimately it is difficult to gain interest. Although Xiao Jinwu has its shortcomings, it is much better than most novels, which is really not easy. (I'm going to complain here. Although Yu's coding speed is so slow that I want to send him a razor blade, but can everyone stop scolding Yu at the end of each chapter? I have read a chapter with great interest, but the last chapter review ruined my interest. It is really annoying) I also noticed that this chapter also puts more emphasis on a very important element in the book: Songgu Pagoda. When I read this chapter, I suddenly realized that this is not only the "place where the dream begins", but also the "root" deep in the souls of the master and the disciple. Maybe Yang Qingqing's thoughts were changed by Du Yu. In short, the moment she finally said "that's my home too", I was quite surprised, because as mentioned before, Qingshi lived in Shatang Mansion, the boundary of the sea, before moving. Songgu Pagoda seemed to be just a place for her to relax and relax, and she did not have a deep emotional bond. I don't know if this is because Qingshi has always regarded this matter as a secret buried deep in his heart, or because Qingshi realized and strengthened his belief in this seven-story ancient pagoda, or the author temporarily changed his mind, but the previous content remained unchanged (naughty)? But for Du Yu, the status of Songgu Pagoda is unquestionable. This is his root, and it is a place he is unwilling to abandon no matter how high he climbs. This place not only witnesses his growth, but also promotes his growth. I guess, this place must be inseparable from Du Yu's sainthood. (I was too sleepy in the middle of the night, so the following content has no main theme. I just said what came to mind) I never expected that Yu Hui would use poetry to summarize this story. Writing poetry is so difficult. I feel like I can compose a thousand-word story in just a few lines of poetry. I delete, delete, modify, and tinker. It feels like I am doing useless work a lot of the time. The sentences I rack my brains to come up with will soon feel bad. I delete and rewrite, but I have to do this, otherwise I may not even have half a sentence... I wonder how long it took Yu to write? I feel that the last word in the seventh and sixth acts is too heavy, which is not good. If it were me, I would change it to Da Xia is falling, where does your heart fall (or go)? Yu ends with the word "township". Perhaps "township" is very important to Yu and to the whole book... Yes, this word is very important to all Chinese people. Qianzhang, thank you for your companionship since Qianzhang. This year has brought me a lot of happiness and a lot of growth. I remembered again the sentence I wrote down on the draft paper when I finished "Lord of Nine Stars" before the college entrance examination - I am lucky enough to walk with you in my third life. Maybe Little Golden Crow is not the type of novel that I like the most and want to read the most, but it also brought me many different experiences and allowed me to see different people and things. In short, I gained a lot. This small article should be regarded as a gift of a thousand chapters to Yu. Yu, you have to know that some people will read your works carefully and be healed and touched; some people will experience the warmth and coldness of the world in the world you describe, empathize with it, and occasionally gain enlightenment; some people will open the novel at midnight, and then they will get out of hand, writing until three o'clock in the morning to pour out their thoughts... Keep writing, there are always people waiting for you to update, not only to get happiness from reading, but also to get more happiness in life after reading. Congratulations to Xiao Jinwu Qianzhang, sprinkle flowers ✿✿ヽ(°▽°)ノ✿✿

Let me complain, I have ordered and read all three books of Yu, two of the Nine Stars series and Golden Crow (I haven't finished Golden Crow yet). The biggest drawback is the state of being suppressed. Although the plot arrangement is reasonable, the state will always be suppressed. Both Xiaopi and Tao Tao suddenly rushed to 2-3 major realms in the later stage to reach the highest state and then accepted the inheritance of the giant, and then finished it within 20 chapters. Du Yu is currently in the state of being suppressed. The three protagonists all have cheats, but they all improve very slowly in the middle. I hope to change it. If the plot is longer, it is acceptable to slowly improve in the middle. Don't rush to several big realms in the later stage. It will be very depressing in the middle.

75% Ago, I couldn't put it down and couldn't seem to put it down. But after that, after the Hanshu in this world was eliminated, I couldn't stand the book anymore. I read it lazily and skipped many chapters. I hate this feeling of seeing the end at a glance, so even though I didn't read it carefully, when the story is over, it's a good story.