Building the Foundation of Douluo, Roaming the Heavens
斗罗奠基，浪在诸天
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- 1.1M Words
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- Myriad Worlds
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352Chapters
74Monthly votes
3.8kRecommendations
43.7kFans
13 ch/weekPace
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Author, if you're going to write about Zhu Tianwen, just finish off Tang San in this competition, then defeat Shura, and Zhu Tianwen will be invincible. Stop being so annoying and tedious. You've been writing for so long, and there's still no climax, just blandness. What are you doing? Tang San is clearly disgusting, that's exactly what I wanted you to write about.
Why are so many writers about the heavens so brooding over nothing?
Why do you have to keep thinking about "Under One Person"? Even writing "Dragon Raja" would be better than "Under One Person".
It's well-written, but some parts are written in a nonsensical or disjointed manner. For example, in the latest chapter, Xue'er, you also know that in some fantasy worlds, there are spirit chefs and medicinal cuisine chefs. And you also don't keep the chapters open, which is very upsetting to watch. You didn't even use the quotation marks in the dialogue correctly. You can break the chapters into several more sections. Overall, it's well written.
The first three chapters confirm that this is a self-indulgent story, constantly filled with nonsensical settings and wish-making.
Just kill off Bibi Dong.
I hope they stop fawning over Bibi Dong, that little fairy. Let her die already. Don't take in this ingrate. It's disgusting to watch. There are so many good women in the myriad realms. Why do they have to pick on this kind of trash?
The author went to great lengths, spending tens of thousands of words in the first few chapters to build up the protagonist's impressive background and foundation. You didn't need to go to so much trouble; you could have simply summarized the protagonist with four words: "May all your wishes come true."
After reading all this, you still haven't solved Tang San's problem. Goodbye, you awesome person.
Is it not divided into paragraphs? Is such a long paragraph appropriate?
The 6-year-old protagonist especially enjoys being in front of powerful figures such as Title Douluo and Soul Douluo. Often Eyes darting around Touching his nose with an awkward smile muttering to himself Moreover, due to extreme inner emptiness, one is basically unable to keep secrets.
It's all nonsense, and it barely advances the plot.