Watching the Immortals Fall

Ji You saw Kuang Cheng, whom he hadn't seen for a long time, in the palace. Since the last farewell outside the city, although the two of them were both in the imperial city, they had no time to meet each other. Ji You had already entered the inner courtyard, while Kuang Cheng didn't know what he was busy with. However, Ji You, who came with the head coach today, saw Kuang Cheng standing in the front row and knew that he was no longer the same person. In today's court meeting, the old emperor commended Kuang Cheng for the evil cultivator not long ago, promoted him to the rank of Sixian Supervisor, and commanded him to command the Shengjing Defense Force. Then he ordered a cleanup of the inner court forces and further investigated the participating forces behind the evil cult. Tianshuyuan reported on the evil cultivators they found and summarized the news. After going to court, Kuang Cheng and Ji You came to the teahouse in tacit understanding. Kuang Cheng invited guests to dinner, and was encouraged by Ji You. After all, he was promoted. After the dishes were served, Kuang Cheng looked at him and said, "Brother Ji is now the headmaster's successor?" Ji You smiled when he heard the words: "Yes, he is just following the headmaster's affairs and asked me to be a personal witness. It's not as good as brother Kuang, who is now the commander." Kuang Cheng waved his hand, then raised his glass and touched it with Ji You: "The emperor wants to take over the Xianmen clan and suppress their power. They are not involved with the important ministers in the court, but the emperor is not trustworthy, let alone no one can use him. Kuang is just used as a martyr. " Upon hearing this, Ji You immediately pressed his hand solemnly on Kuang Cheng's wrist and looked at him: "Brother Kuang, don't forget what I said, don't really..." Before he could finish speaking, Kuang Cheng put down the wine glass in his hand, pressed his wrist with his hand and said, "Kuang said, Kuang is not stupid. , Know your own sense of proportion." Ji You nodded when he saw him like this, then looked at the sword beside him and asked, "Brother Kuang, is this?" Kang Cheng followed his gaze and looked at his sword and said, "This is not for investigating the case. Kuang followed suit. Use some fur to defend yourself." Ji You's eyes lit up when he heard this, and he immediately became interested, and then asked: "Who is Brother Kuang following?" Kuang Cheng glanced at him and replied casually: "Because of the emperor's order, I have been following General Ye Sheng to investigate the case. To prevent Kuang from being put in danger, he taught Kuang a few moves in his spare time. It's nothing." Ji You laughed loudly when he heard this, and then said: "General Ye's swordsmanship is not just taught by a few random moves. He regards Brother Kuang as his successor." Kuang Cheng shook his head and said. He said, "Brother Ji is joking. Kuang is just a scholar, not comparable to someone from the military camp. He is regarded as a descendant by General Ye." Ji You heard this and thought about it, so he changed the subject and asked, "Can Brother Kuang deceive someone's granddaughter?" >When Kuang Cheng heard this topic, he immediately said: "Kuang has been running around investigating cases every day recently, so he has time to make love. Brother Ji, on the other hand, hurry up and become a teacher." The two of them are like this. Whenever they meet, they will urge each other, and then they will ignore the topic by saying a few words to each other. After drinking for three rounds, Ji You said, "Brother Kuang has been drinking a lot lately." Kuang Cheng waved his hands and said nothing. Then the two stood up and walked out. Ji You said, "Brother Kuang, I think your sword is pretty good. Let's spar some other time?" Hearing this, Kuang Cheng raised his head and glanced at him, and then said incredulously, "Brother Ji, are you fighting all over the world?" Ji You looked at him with a question mark on his face, and Kuang Cheng immediately said, "I actually want to torture a certain scholar from Kuang." Ji You laughed loudly when he heard this, and then said: "Brother Kuang, how can you be considered a scholar? Today the emperor allows you to command the army, and you have a sword guard to test, so you can be regarded as a martial arts practitioner." Then Ji You thought for a while and continued: "What is that called, oh, sword cultivator! Sword cultivator Kuang Cheng!" Then they both walked out of the teahouse laughing loudly, and went their separate ways.

The last urban master who thought he could handle Xianxia was called Liu Anhua, also known as Liu Anhua, and then he pulled a big one. Now the eunuch has deleted the book. Getting started with fairy tales and fantasy seems simple, and anyone can write it, but it is too difficult to write brilliantly. There are too many veteran authors who are confident enough to turn to fairy tales, and then be taught how to be a human being.

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This book is so sweet. The author repeatedly uses the same routine: Ji You disappeared, Ji You, a private cultivator in the country, was in trouble, the wallflower turned against him, the aristocratic family and the fairy sect took action, Ji You slapped the family and the fairy sect in the face, the wallflower turned against the family again, Ji You disappeared again, the male protagonist almost killed the fairy sect, But whenever something happens, someone will jump out and ridicule, and then the male protagonist will also be slapped in the face, which has been repeated for more than 400 chapters. The most amazing thing is that the ones who were slapped in the face are still the same group of people. The princess and the Lu family have been slapped in the face seven or eight times, and they can still jump out. Even fools will know that they are afraid. It is too simple.

I listened to the book in the Himalayas. I really couldn't bear to spend five yuan to come back and complain. Is this really a book written by a great master in the past two years? Tang's has no boundaries. This kind of male protagonist is not good. The villain jumps in the face and the protagonist slaps the face in the plot. I really knelt down. The plot is endless. What monster comes to Beijing to trample a child to death. The male protagonist comes to the rescue. It's really unbelievable. It's too vulgar to live here. Open your mouth and shut up. Private study in the country. If I see a rural person studying at home for two years without taking the entrance exam to the Department of Mathematics of Peking University, and after finishing the job, he will be admitted to graduate school and make academic achievements. I will kneel down. Is there really a rz who will mock him as a country bumpkin? I understand that the author wants to change, but the plot is really terrible, it is all supported by the heroine

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Author, you'd better publish your book 🍅. It's so poorly written that you can give it to us for free.

The mysterious Riddler Dean who knows most of the key information and props but only has a presence in about 5 chapters and is unfamiliar with the male protagonist until his death; it is obvious that he can appear at any time in the middle and late stages of the plot and crush the world, but he has to wait until the male protagonist breaks through - he dies for almost ten chapters - returns and breaks through, and is finally killed by the male protagonist. The ultimate villain who is a god who is killed in the plot of ordinary brothers (it reads like it was added at a later stage); the male protagonist who frantically creates weaknesses for himself even though he knows his goal is to be the enemy of the whole world, and hides his strength by pretending to save the weaknesses rather than punching in the face to advance the plot and has failed several times. I wanted to forcefully write a harem with a big heroine, so the characters didn't seem to be on the same layer. The story of how the heroine and the two harems met each other was like the author sending out girlfriends, and the characters were both a cool fairy and a genius. In the end, relying on the male protagonist was like taking a pure medicine to gain wisdom. To put it bluntly, I read the heroines in the novels written by Xiaobai, Xiaohuang, and even NTR, and the heroines were more natural than this. Target character design of the male protagonist: (Minzhi Mingan → Aristocratic Family) ❌ (Minzhi Mingan → Himself) ❌ ( Minzhi Mingan → Aristocratic Family → Himself) ✓

The more I write, the more it sounds like a girly video!

If you don't write a good novel, but just write a supporting role, can you become more prominent? The reader will be disgusted at the end 😰