The Ninth Under Heaven

I really don't know where this ranking came from, and where these monthly tickets came from. The logic is confusing, and the protagonist looks like a retard. If it weren't for the book shortage, I would have given up on the third chapter. I insisted on reading the sixteenth chapter, and I vomited. A piece of garbage: identification completed.

I watched Qi Shao from Qi Shao, which means Qi Shao can become a masterpiece with a rigorous plot, diverse plots and rich emotions. If Lao Wu had written three parts of The Strongest and Abandoned Lesser, it would definitely be N times better than writing the subsequent Gate of Creation and The Ninth Strongest in the World. There would definitely be many more loyal fans and loyal readers than there are now. Unlike the current readers who have watched it all the way from Qi Shao, their hearts are a lot colder. A good hand is played in pieces, and the results are getting worse year by year. Without Ye Mo, I estimate that many, many readers would have given up reading Lao Wu's books long ago. The content feels like it's being copied. After reading The Ninth World, it will be the last book I read for Lao Wu. Lao Wu, you won't be able to retain people if you continue to write like this! I can't even keep my beloved.

It is a very orthodox cultivation novel, but the plot is too cliche. Cultivation - fight against injustice / avenge friends and provoke the boss - escape - revenge - ascension - fight against the injustice and provoke the boss... If you can't fill the hole, you will ascend first. The past grievances can be solved by saying that it is difficult to return to the upper world. This process is indeed a bit cliched, and the relationship scenes are not very good either. My girlfriend disappears all the time, and my friends keep changing. Most of the cultivation part is at the level of searching for treasures - enlightenment. It is best for the next book to have a clearer structure. Stop flying and fighting monsters all the time. Add more descriptions of life and emotions. Don't be too deliberate about the protagonist making friends. Fix the emotional line on a few people and deepen the description. It can contain the situation and describe the protagonist's personality.

He becomes more and more rubbish, everyone around him ends in tragedy, he spends his days chasing people, his logic becomes worse and worse, and he gives up.

Every time I write it, it is carved out of a template. Can you write more about Ye Mo to regain his favor? Ye Mo has such a domineering image in the minds of readers, but now he is beaten as soon as he comes out! Can you not ruin Daye Mo's image in the minds of readers? When you are done with it, give up the pen. If you don't write it well, don't let the protagonist of Qi Shao appear. It'll be fine if you cripple it, but Ye Mo can't cripple it.

The content of this book is average, the plot is not smooth, unpleasant, and has no feeling. The suspense is not good, and the IQ is average. After reading more than 100 chapters, I found it was too watery and unattractive, so I gave up the book.

The plot is so bad, it seems perfunctory at first glance, you are a coder. This guy gets more and more sloppy the more he writes, and he doesn't have the attitude to write! I don't even spend money to read his novels now. Spending some traffic to read them is already giving him face! I suggest you stop writing, change your career, buddy, and wash your hands in a golden basin.

Lao Wu's book is good to read. I personally think it is successful because of two things. First, it is a solitary character. Even if the protagonist has a few friends in every world, he still can't find anyone with whom he can talk to him sincerely. Even if he can, he seems unwilling to say it. It seems that no matter how big the world is, the protagonist is always wandering alone, fighting between life and death, constantly looking for new opportunities to make himself stronger, just for his own destiny, and the destiny of the people he loves is not controlled by others. I think most people who read novels are lonely people, no matter how deep the loneliness is. Lao Wu's books happen to resonate with readers' loneliness, and this resonance of loneliness transcends age groups. I feel that Lao Wu's books can be read by people of any age, and can also be read by those in their seventies or eighties. The second is its grand cosmic world system design. There are three thousand leaves in one realm and three thousand realms in one page. No matter how extreme you practice in one realm, there will always be someone stronger than you if you break through this realm. Every time n, it happens to attract us tightly. It has been seven or eight years since I first met Abandoned Young Master, then met Dandy, Xingwu, then Good Fortune, Mortal, and Ninth. Every night at midnight, I would take out my phone to read a chapter or two. This has become a subconscious habit. This is also the final work of Lao Wu. Once upon a time, it was difficult to make a difference. I always hope that Lao Wu can extend this project a little longer and connect the Star Dance series together to create a unique universe and world system of Lao Wu. That would be perfect. So, as the day goes by, go slower.

I endured reading more than 40 chapters, but I really can't stand it anymore. Maybe I am not the target group of this book. Just looking at the story is like keeping a running account. So-and-so was born a waste, studied medicine hard, his family was wiped out, gained a golden finger, brought family secrets, accidentally traveled, happened to meet his previous life, inherited his identity reasonably, and started Start upgrading, kill small minions instantly, attract big minions, use medical skills to collect resources... Upgrade, fight monsters, upgrade, fight monsters... The plot is basically illogical, and the plot is very stiff and forced, such as asking the protagonist who meets him for the first time to give a birthday gift; the villain with the largest underground arena has never seen a woman? Because the male protagonist comes to give her a birthday present and he needs to kill both her parents? There are too many plots with such illogical logic, and the plot is completely forced.

Is this the strength of Qidian Platinum Writer? This is the first time I've written a book review in so many years of reading. I won't say much, I can do it.

I've only read the first hundred chapters, and I really can't stand it anymore. The more I read, the more embarrassed I am! The logic of the plot is confusing. It feels like it was written by a junior high school student. Whatever you want, a passerby will provide it. The earth is a technological society and it is written like a martial arts world. The character setting is too superficial and not suitable for old bookworms. The plot is very embarrassing. I hope it will get better in the future. I will give up now.

This book is Lao Wu's worst book, bar none. The two useless books on Star Dance Nine Gods are better than this one. The Bandit Saint is even more evil-minded. He will snatch this thing today and that thing tomorrow. Changing Blue Star to a famous person is the most disgusting thing in the world, as if there is no one in the Five Elements Universe worthy of his respect. After scaring away Du Mo, he claimed to be the best in the Five Elements Universe and took away Du Mo's holy position. It felt like the Gate of Creation was a joke. Finish this book quickly.

I got stuck on a chapter yesterday and didn't publish it! Plus at least two tonight, that's three chapters! It breaks out. If it breaks out, it will be four chapters 🤭 Brothers, kick me up.

There is a kind of memory called the strongest abandoned young man, a kind of passion called the gate of creation, and a kind of waiting called the ninth in the world!

I caught up with this today. I thought I was looking forward to it, but in fact it's disgusting. The editor has done his best. It's actually normal, but don't be too far-fetched, okay? Otherwise, it would be disgusting! And, don't guarantee the evening festival!

Hello, Lao Wu "Lao Shi", can you write some in-depth literature or cool writing? Don't write novels like fast food. Even elementary school students can't stand it. What era is it? Smart phones have been around for more than ten years. I have to make up for everything. MD is treating it as if he is a fool. It's all tmd nonsense. I'm ashamed to be in the company of… Waste of time

I've just finished reading the whole book, and the part that feels very stiff is that the heroine seems to have been added forcibly.

The ratings of these three books were: The Strongest Abandoned Master 9.6, The Gate of Creation 8.5, And The Ninth World 5.6. The writing of Number Nine in the World is really bad

The old rules every day, 13 recommendation votes, and 5 monthly votes every month. Although Lao Wu's book is about to end, I am still persisting to see if I can get a vote king this month.

After just treating Hu Qianli, he went to the Ji family to save people 1. The protagonist, who has been living for several months and cannot afford to rent a house, saves people for millions of dollars. I don't know what the author wants to express. Why not eat minced meat? This is not the way it is played. As for the fact that life is worrying, a few pills are given to people for free at every turn (mostly using non-renewable resources from the continent of birth, so I won't talk about such "little things") 2. Hu Qianli can obviously be asked to help him connect with the Ji family, but neither party mentioned it. This has lost even basic social etiquette and common sense. 3. Continuing to read, I found that in order to recommend myself to Ji's family for treatment, the protagonist secretly went in, and asked the author to activate the golden finger to add various coincidences... To be honest, I have read many novels with this kind of logic. I have learned a lot today. With such a plot development model, this book can only be abandoned...

The author doesn't write about love, but he shows mercy everywhere, whether it's detailed or rough, or rough or rough, it's just a general ration.

After reading the first dozens of chapters, it feels like a vernacular narrative. It's like writing like this: I woke up in the morning and felt hungry, and then I wanted to eat, so I went out to find a restaurant, ordered XXX, then after eating, I paid the boss and went home. Just this feeling, very strange. There are few characterizations and character descriptions, and the plot doesn't feel like it has any ups and downs. For example, when the father is killed and flees, there should be a small climax, but the author finishes it like a narrative. It tastes weird! Let's see what happens later.

The endings of these three Lao Wu books are quite unsatisfactory. Lao Wu himself said that he rushed to the beginning of the Ninth Project. Later, after Zixiao turned into Heaven, he insisted on continuing to write the next realm, which seemed to be a continuation of the story. I don't know why he didn't fill in the holes and write something similar to the day after tomorrow. The vast chaos side was still very emotional when they saw Su Su and others. They said that Yingzhu and Qionghua disappeared together and the hole was not filled. Lan Shuzai should have accepted it by default. This was good. Beiwei had disappeared after escaping in Tianwaitian. Why not arrange with Yimo to reunite with everyone in the creation universe. Although Zhen Xiaobing, who was born by fate, was the son of Night Demon and Bingyu and inherited the pseudonym of his father Ning Xiaoma, he did not appear in the ninth mile. Ye Xiaobao was also suspected of being experienced by Night Demon in the ninth mile, but there was no mention of it. When it comes to creation, it is obvious that mentions of the strongest are all covert. Ninth mentions that the first two games are basically aboveboard. Apart from me, I believe that many readers also read it for the feelings of the Night Demon. They all did this. In the end, I didn't write more about the reunion that I talked about in the future and the perfect ending of the trilogy, instead of using the template and writing a new compressed map. The last few hundred thousand words are really bad, and it will also hinder the fourth part later. In the ninth chapter, Lao Jiu did 500 episodes of Brother Chu. In the front, Jing Mo double-eyed Luo Fei, and Mo Yuxuan was very cool. It turned out to be a minor role. Yu Xuan didn't mention it after she entered the God Realm. She and Xiao Shuang were both Taoist nuns, so they were cut off due to personality conflicts. Nong Xiuqi felt that it was arranged by the readers at the time. As a result, she hadn't seen her daughter for thousands of years, and she hadn't seen her father until the end. Shen Ziyu was unmoved and Ning Qingxue couldn't find this person, but the line about his second wife Cao Xi was well written. Although it was short, the time the two spent in the wilderness was comparable to the time when Ye Mo and Su Su got married in the village of Qi Shao Li. The plot was very similar, but it was sublimated because Cao Xi was born and told that the enemy had left. In the ninth ending, I was criticized unjustly and Cao Xi was not picked up. In Gaiden 4, Xiao Shuang was good. Qing Ru's pit was filled to my satisfaction. Lao Wu was still very serious about Night Demon. Shuang Shuang didn't die in the ending of fate. The writing here is still very touching. After sighing, Shuang Shuang still has a lot of writing space. After realizing his mistake, he gave her a chance and handled it well. It will also be a good story. Ye Xing's appearance was quite abrupt, and he didn't say a word to Ye Mo afterwards. Although not all holes have to be filled, as the third part of the trilogy, his responsibility is not just a book. If there is a fourth Lao Wu that can have the passion of that year, I will definitely order it all.

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When I was young, I loved to pursue my dreams. I pretended to fly forward all the way, pretending to travel through thousands of mountains and rivers. The routine remained the same and made people vomit.

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