The Night and Day Wanderers

Such a good book ranks ninth on the new book list, and it's a great starting point. Take a look at what the others on the list are talking about, just a gimmick, and then start writing. There is no plot, twist, or rhythm at all, and I can't even name it. Who is reading those books? Really good articles are ignored. I don't believe that a normal person who has eaten delicious food can still look at things that taste like crap. I don't believe that there are so many reading software and so many people have not developed aesthetic standards. The rankings have reached such an extent.

All comments are like human and machine, I dare not read them

The front is really beautiful, but there are a lot of plug-ins in the back. My sister is the boss of the Night Travel God, Master is the boss of the 7-pillar incense, and the hand of the god is spread. The weird blood well has also turned into a wishing bottle. If you want to know about murder and sacrifice, you can go back in time if you have an obsession with clearing the wrongs. If you encounter questions, you can also ask the encyclopedia in the painting. Now the Bone Elder Guild is still very close to the protagonist. A weird story turned into a cool story, a good start was wasted, the gap is too big, right?

I can't understand why such a good book isn't popular! As a 30-year old bookworm, I have checked the list hundreds of times, but there are still no books I can read!

Chapter 105 has been read. After it was put on the shelves, it felt worse and worse. The rhythm of driving high and going low. The inexplicable Jiangzhi and Long Aotian... Are not as fascinating as the opening chapter. Ask your book friends, is there any improvement in the future? Is it worth reading on? As of Chapter 105, I already don't want to read anymore.

There is currently a big logic bug in this book. The protagonist, who was so bad in his previous life, has become so good after his return, and no one else in the Zhou family class has any doubts about it. This cannot be explained by a sentence about experiencing life and death and achieving enlightenment.

It's rare, it's rare to refresh a book and come up with a good new book. I almost forgot that the last time a decent new book came out was in the Year of the Monkey. Generally speaking, although the subject matter is a bit small and follows the path of side-by-side Jianghu craftsmanship, the storyline is complementary and integrated. The background is chosen in the early Republic of China. In the story, it is a collision period of [old and new eras], where technology and tradition go hand in hand. Writing, judging from the twenty pictures so far, I can say that the last one is pretty good. This book has something good, I hope it doesn't end badly.

I suggest the author delete and rewrite all the chapters after a hundred chapters. It felt like a lot of historical stories were crammed into my mind in a short period of time, and then I started to skip reading. Then the Stone Buddha, the five gods, Miss Qiang, Peng Hou, and Tianzun all came. Then the book changed from folk weird to fantasy? I don't know how to write two million words🙂

When I saw 208, I couldn't stand it anymore. The first 100 chapters, until the protagonist fakes his death and is resurrected, are top-notch. Both the atmosphere and rhythm are very comfortable to watch, and the foreshadowing is also good. From changing the map to becoming a wine-cooking monk, the level has been declining, and the overall style has gradually changed from folklore and weirdness to a cool novel for novices, but it is okay to read it as a refreshing article to pass the time. Several foreshadowing hooks also make people want to keep watching. Looking further back, I almost lost my sight. The part about killing Lu and the Archmaester of Pain hardly makes any sense. Blood Well has gone from being a big threat in the early stage to becoming a cute and cheat-like character, and then he starts to use various props from others. The early setting is: basically seven sticks of incense are the ceiling in the human world, and eight sticks of incense are already demigods. As a result, the protagonist has less than 200 chapters, and he kills two incense sticks, five sticks of incense, and six sticks of incense, all of which can't be seen. The folklore, weirdness, and suspense of arresting people in the early stages are all gone. The setting directly involves the Lord of Mysteries, and all the channels and powers are revealed, without any of its own characteristics. I even have a suspicion: Is the starting point now "producing novels" on the assembly line? There are masters who develop imagination and come up with settings;

This book would be better if it wasn't so big. The main character feels invincible and he's number one in everything. This kind of script is a bit inferior, and the main character is too much.