The Immortals I Raised Are All Demonesses

If we just accept the daughters of two Taoist friends, the early and later stages will be easy to write, and the main plot will be obvious. The ending is probably a normal world invincible with several harems. But! If the daughter of Taoist friend Tuogu is continued to be accepted in the future, the author will create a genre and continue to accept Tuogu flow. But it is better in the early stage, but it depends on the level in the later stage. The ending is the saintly director of the orphanage. So, does the author want to settle down smoothly and remain unknown for the rest of his life, or does he want to create a genre that will make him famous but may not be appreciated halfway?

Investigation report: "Number" - 330 Investigation object: "Taoist Tuogu: Eternal Life Begins from Raising a Demon Girl" - Male Protagonist - [Luo Fanchen] Investigation Result: [Reincarnation (Awakening of Su Hui)] Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: Time Travel Investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know the time-travel situations of travelers in this world in advance, and volunteers to provide observers with fast time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——Wanling Feast Zhenjun Stay on August 10, 2025

After two hours of searching at the starting point, I finally got the money. It's awesome! It's the best food in this track, and the female character is quite in line with my xp, so I secretly mentioned it out of selfishness and turned it into a fairy grass. I'll give you all six monthly passes. By the way, don't accept Luo Qianqiu, emm m, I don't accept it, but some people will complain about the female author. You can make up your own mind. For me personally, I have a really bad impression of this character. The image of an old woman who appears, the subsequent cold-blooded planning and evil intentions, and the old-fashioned tsundere contrast are all not very pleasing to me.

Liangcao Author's Notes Compared with the previous book, Liangcao has made a lot of progress. It is a very qualified harem novel. So far, the emotional descriptions of the two heroines of 400,000 words are very good. The follow-up heroines, whether they are too powerful to forget their feelings or the dead trees to bloom, are also exciting to see how they will be conquered. But there are also some flaws, such as the plot of the supporting characters, which is a matter of opinion. For example, the two brothers who are traitors, to be honest, I am not interested in their plots, and I did not have deep feelings after reading it. Xiaocui Aniu actually spent a lot of words describing it, but it has been discontinued so far. The follow-up may not have much impact on the plot. In the end, it may become two dispensable characters. However, the author may have arrangements to keep it secret. Then there may be another problem, and that is the number of heroines. This is a problem that many harem novels suffer from. The inability to control the heroine's role leads to the production of passerby heroines, or there are too many heroines. In the end, in order to average the heroine's role, writing too many roles will make readers lose interest. I feel like there are actually quite a lot of female protagonists compared to the progress of the plot. Sisters, Pavilion Master, Ruoxue, Qianqiu are still the protagonists and have not even established the foundation. After the map is changed in the future, there will definitely be more and more female protagonists. It depends on whether the author can control it. It can be regarded as a warning to the author in advance.

This writing style is clearly in the light novel genre

One thing to ask is, has the author forgotten the setting that the demon girl's breakthrough bound to the Demon Girl Record will return her cultivation level? Now the protagonist has begun to take the special path of collecting five elements of spiritual objects to break through the realm.

Author, your rhythm is too familiar. The updates are not on time at first, then I say I am too sick and anxious to update, then I say the outline is not well written and cannot advance the plot, then I publish a single chapter announcing the eunuch, and then all my monthly votes are in vain. 😥

The author is good at writing about women, but the plot is a bit cliche, and it always makes people unhappy.

Ancestor of qi training, master of foundation building, powerful of golden elixir, and senior of Nascent Soul. Now the low combat power level is getting higher and higher

Don't always write about how Mo Xue is annoying :-(. Occasionally, you can take it as a joke and laugh out loud. The sword bones are not naturally developed. If you keep doing this, the heroine will give people the impression of being an iron lump. Isn't it good to be light and soft, or slender and slender? You have to make it look like the bones are covered with skin...