Swallowed Star: The Unrivaled Dominator

Personally speaking, the protagonist felt like a native, and his personality was rather roguish. Judging from the title, the author probably intended for him to be a domineering type, but honestly, I didn't see it, haha ​​😂. The first few dozen chapters were the same old formula: an Earth-based start, a few forgettable supporting characters, Hong, Thor, a female lead whose backstory was dragged out for many chapters, and an unappealing system. No wonder your ratings are so low.

The first description of the protagonist's system said that it could only exert four times its power. The author explains. Is it wrong that our efforts can only go so far? But Lei Shen and Hong's use of force was also wrong. They could do nearly ten times more. The system is still not as good as them? Does the system know the correct way to exert force in the universe?

I read the synopsis and rejected moral blackmail, but what kind of moral blackmail is there in the world of Swallowed Star? This is a world where personal combat strength determines everything. No matter how many alien races you slaughter, no one will criticize you morally!

It's hard to keep up with the main character; I really dislike the protagonist who keeps spouting "I" all the time, he's so sleazy. You're amazing to have obtained the Nine Tribulations Secret Manual so early. The Mountain Hermit wouldn't have given it away if he hadn't found a satisfactory successor. She doesn't seem like a time traveler at all. Forget it, she's not my type.

Any work that focuses too much on Earth tends to be poorly received.

Having read up to chapter 49, I have mixed feelings. There are quite a few inconsistencies. The "golden finger" (a powerful advantage in Chinese fantasy novels) is unclear and ambiguous; it's just a simple "it's recharged again" and that's it. In a one-sided victory, there's never an instant kill; there always has to be a back-and-forth.

My assessment is that if your protagonist is to be arrogant and seem fearless, then make his overpowered abilities bigger. After all, the confidence to be fearless comes from having real strength—not just being able to save your life, but also being able to smash your head in if you dare to challenge him.

Is the main character a native? Where is the author? Why wasn't this clearly stated?

Now, any grade that starts with Earth is dragging down my grades. I skip over Earth's starting point; I know how to write it even with my eyes closed.

The introduction alone suggested it was a bit weak, and sure enough...