Hogwarts: Me? Fight Voldemort?

The writing is smooth, the rhythm of the plot is very good, and the content and character fit the original work. It's like the person is in the book. It even feels like Rowling is writing it herself. It's so powerful.

Can it be refined

Reader: Author:

Well written, the main character should be hanged, damn the capitalists

Logic and reduction: The novel has an outline of 100,000 words. It took a long time to prepare before starting the book. There will also be some oversights, but most of it is written with reference to the original novel and Harry Potter Wikipedia. There shouldn't be big problems with prices, characters, and plot details that few people noticed in the original work. Occasionally, there will be problems due to my negligence. I hope to get corrections. Combat Power: This book focuses on daily interactions, and combat power is not the key element. The purpose of suppressing combat power is to keep the character's mentality healthy and complete, and to ensure that the logic of behavior does not deviate from reality. Moreover, a layer of restrictions were implemented in time, and the strength of the golden finger is still very high. To sum up, "suppressing combat power" is the result of comprehensive considerations based on plot, character design and other aspects. This does not affect reading, and there is no unpleasant plot caused by "suppressing combat power", because the plot development is not mainly based on showing off and slapping people in the face. If you have any other questions you can share, please reply after seeing them.

Female supporting role? Ah? Ah? Ahhhh?

It's on the shelves. Do you want to do this? Either update this plot more, not everyone likes it

I feel like the effeminate Malfoy loses a lot of people.

Come and take a look at the author's women's clothing😏

Why do the protagonists in the latest films need to be made impatient?

This is an unexpected start. Why not? Small horse and big cart

Hey hey hey🤤

I feel that Malfoy's magical talent is about the same as Harry's. I haven't read the original novel, but in the movie there is a scene where Harry followed Malfoy using the invisibility cloak and was discovered and beaten by Malfoy.

There is a saying, Voldemort is not difficult to kill. If you kill Harry Potter and crush Harry to ashes, he will not be resurrected.

Why is it weird at the back? The fitness potion has 10 tons of thrust. One moment, she is working as a nanny, and the next moment, she is ruthless and decisive in making money. It's all torn apart.

Why is it Watsons again? Can't it be original?

As for the reason why I had the surgery, I still feel a little regretful. This book may be biased towards those who have fun and make trouble, but in this HP easy-going track, it can be considered a good work. I will share my personal viewing experience below, which only represents my personal experience. 1. The atmosphere of the novel itself and the context of the story are quite good. There are no problems in plot connection or story description. This is much better than many HP novels. 2. I think the performance on this humorous and relaxed track is quite good. There is no problem with the portrayal of the characters, and the portrayal is also in line with the characteristics of this track. ——＠_＠—— The following is what I feel is a little bit unpleasant. 1. Malfoy drank the potion and turned into Hydra. How do you say this? Although Leziren viewers will think this is a very good point, in fact, most HP fans will be more repulsive when they see this. After all, this is a male video. And becoming a female-oriented Malfoy means that he will have fewer "minor villain" roles like the original book or movie, which will reduce his appearances, which is equivalent to abandoning Slytherin-oriented stories. Although there are many viewers who like to read Deha CP, the performance of the two CPs in the book can be said to be incompatible. I don't know if the author is a little afraid to write, or for some reason, which leads to a bit of separation here. 😠 2. Founded a personal organization and special medicine. In the first four years of his study career, Jimmy created his own personal organization and developed some special potions, such as the sex change potion mentioned above, and the strength potion. In the development and operation of the personal organization, although some elements of Hermione and others have been added, it can be seen that this is just the beginning of the organization and should be expanded in the subsequent plot, so there is nothing to say about the organization. The aspect of potions, just like the transformation mentioned above, is a more embarrassing point. Now that it has been launched and implemented on a personal level, although the effect has appeared, the character used has also changed to a certain extent. It does make people feel a sense of fragmentation, or is it slightly OOC? 🤔 Although the author can give a very reasonable explanation for the above point of view, I think it is actually acceptable. After all, the field of Harry Potter fan fiction has been going on for many years. How can it retain the audience without some special work? One more thing, I am a HP fan. In fact, most of them should be in a diving state. They only watch and do not comment. For example, some very controversial points will pop up, such as: heroine issues, curriculum issues, magic concepts, etc. Of course, if you write very, very well, there will definitely be a lot of comments and collections. But the current situation is just like most Harry Potter fan works. This is normal popularity, and I don't think there is any need to be discouraged. I also started to follow the book slowly from around chapter 80. The entry point of this book and the control of the fun points are still there. I believe that many viewers were quite happy when they saw the fun points in the early stage. In the middle period, which is the third or fourth school year, the author also did a good job. The fun cannot last forever. The plot of thirty or forty years must be dealt with in some mature ways. I think this is a qualified work direction, but I also hope that the author will not be discouraged. If this book can continue to be written, I also hope to see an end to this book, but I still have to respect the author's personal intentions. If I open the next book, I will definitely do it. Finally, I would like to thank the author for the joy he provided me. Thank you for your creation, I will work hard in the future~

Hey, I've already decided on Parrot, so I'd better go back and write Infinity.

I am the host of the audio version of this book, and after receiving this book I decided to continue it. Referring to the outline given by the author, I removed some modules that I was not good at writing, and finally wrote it to the finale, which probably lasted hundreds of thousands of words. Currently streaming on Himalaya. Some of the characters are AI, I hope it's not too disappointing. If there are brothers who want to read the text version, emmm, I really don't know how to paste the text over. Let me study the computer version someday... The anchor has worked hard to fill in the holes, at least the logic should not be too different. However, there are not as many memes as the original author's. Above.

Hermione's birthday is September 19, 1979, so she turned 12 a few days after entering school. It's okay to treat her as 12 years old when she entered school. But why is she 15 on her third grade birthday? (It seems that there is also a mention of age in the second grade, which is also one year older) Originally, it is understandable to change it to a virtual age, but the next sentence says that you can get married at the age of 16... Then you can't forget it like this.

I remember that in the original novel, Tonks didn't like her name. She always asked others to call her Tonks, so she wouldn't say things like "Call me Nymphadora" to others.

Please give me more updates, author