Earth's First Lord

From the very beginning until now, the quality and reading experience have been getting worse and worse. I've noticed the following reasons: First, chapters are always published before they are properly revised in order to meet deadlines. Secondly, even after the founding of the Baiyujing Kingdom, the name Baiyujing was frequently mentioned, without being referred to as the Qianxia Dynasty.

It's getting less and less interesting. So many civil and military officials have joined the protagonist's territory, but every time there's a rescue or a fight, it's always the protagonist who's the first to step in, or he's the only one fighting. If you're writing a historical lord story, reduce the protagonist's screen time and focus more on historical figures, strategists' schemes, and the generals' battle scenes.

This setup is absolutely ridiculous. Before recruitment, they're incredibly powerful, but after recruitment, even the smallest fry can easily defeat them. They finally level up, and then some random nobody appears and they're at the same level. It's utterly absurd, ridiculously absurd!

I really couldn't continue after reading chapter 143. After checking the table of contents and comments, I realized the comments were much more interesting than the novel itself. It feels like what other readers have said: this is a mindless lord-themed game novel with an incredibly fast pace, like an assembly line.

I couldn't continue reading after chapter 160; it was completely uninteresting. If you're going to emphasize individual martial prowess, then don't write a lord story. If you're going to write a lord story, then focus on the war and the troop deployment of your subordinates.

Having witnessed the attack on the Gate of Calamity, I can only say that while the author's writing is decent, the dismal sales figures are understandable. Who is Lü Bu? Although not a protagonist, his fame and martial prowess are second to none. Just because he's not the main character, despite his apparent strength, he's merely used as a foil to highlight his power against nameless underlings.

You guys must be really hungry, making it sound so good, but I couldn't even finish five chapters.

Praising the Ming and criticizing the Qing, a typical dynasty fanatic. As a modern person, I can only say that, apart from the Spring and Autumn Period, the Warring States Period, the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms Period, and the end of dynasties, these were periods of great chaos.

Seeing Wu Song and Hua Rong in the synopsis instantly killed my interest. Is this all the kind of low-level characters you know? China's thousands of years of history have produced countless towering figures, worthy of being called ancestors! Whether real or fictional, there's so much to write about, yet you insist on picking out these insignificant supporting characters! It shows how shallow your knowledge and how low your appreciation level is!

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel the author should just stick to writing a game-themed novel. A lord-based farming story focuses on customs, systems, and management. Your book is a typical online game leveling and loot-hunting novel; the territory is a burden for the author, as you haven't written a single thing about it.