Huddle in the Doomsday and Become an Immortal Alone

After reading about chapter 150, let me talk about your thoughts after reading it. Let's talk about the advantages first. First of all, the pace is tight. As a human being in an environment that is close to the end of the human race, the plot arrangement of this book is relatively reasonable. The protagonist and the enemy are not found to be slow to react, not smart, or tactically contemptuous. All the decisions seem to be reasonable and traceable. To put it bluntly, there is no plot to subdue one's wits. The second is the emotional drama. The emotional development between the male protagonist and Ling Tong, the main female character in this part, is relatively flat and gradual. It should be considered not toxic, I don't pay much attention to emotional scenes. But so far, I think the emotional drama in this book is above average among fantasy novels. It's a joke again. The author can arrange some small ideas in the plot from time to time (or speechless points in the eyes of some readers), and the book friends mentioned in this chapter are also very cooperative, resulting in a lot of interesting comments. The reading experience is relatively good. The more obvious advantages for me are basically the above three. The following are the disadvantages, or the poisonous points in my eyes. Actually, the way to suppress the combat power is inappropriate, which leads to the appearance of a deus ex machina plot. The background of this book is to travel through tribulations and overhauls to travel through other worlds. It is reasonable and necessary to suppress the combat power. Otherwise, it is easy to fall into the dilemma of either having a hasty ending or changing the map frequently to make people feel uncomfortable. Many excellent works with eye-catching early settings ended up unfinished because of poor control of the rhythm. But there is also a method to suppress combat power. (The following may contain spoilers, so don't read if you don't like it) The way this book suppresses combat power cannot be said to be unreasonable, it can only be said that it does not suit my reading habits. In the book, the protagonist's own cultivation level is not improved very fast, which is normal. After all, it is time travel and not reconstruction, and everything must be done step by step. But there is much more to say than cultivation. The common people talk about "three hundred and sixty practices", and it is "possible" (I think it should be) to cultivate immortality with "hundred arts of cultivating immortality". Not to mention some niche skills, just talk about weapon refining, alchemy, Gu refining, soul refining, poison refining, escape techniques, formations and other techniques that are commonly involved in immortal cultivation novels. As a tribulation monk, the protagonist should have considerable attainments even if he has just dabbled in certain items. This should have been (in my eyes) an effective way to solve the problem in the early stage when the cultivation level is still too low to confront powerful enemies head-on. However, in the face of the ensuing crises, the protagonist's response method is to use certain means to forcibly improve his cultivation level to overcome cleverness. This method is actually reasonable when combined with the identity and background of the protagonist, but it has an obvious flaw, which is that when the combat power gap between the enemy and ourselves is huge, it will give people a sense of powerlessness and even despair that is difficult to conceal. How should you solve the dilemma when you are accustomed to using force to defeat cleverness when you encounter violence that is unattainable in any case (based on the current plot setting)? The author chose to add temporary settings to give the protagonist a way to overwhelm the enemy's power. I discovered this when I saw the climax of Chapter 150 or so. In the early stage, there were also plots where the protagonist solved the problem through some methods, but these were basically explained in advance, supplemented by the protagonist's inner activities to show that the protagonist still had means. But by this plot, the protagonist's methods explained earlier have been exhausted, and the detailed description does not show that he has a complete plan. As a reader, everyone thinks that the protagonist is in a desperate situation, which makes people feel a strong sense of depression and there is nothing they can do. In order to solve the dilemma, the author had to let the protagonist come up with a temporary method to further improve his combat power. This kind of deus ex machina plot is annoying and unpleasant. It is not extremely unacceptable in itself, but combined with what has been said above, the protagonist has multiple extraordinary methods to improve his strength but basically do not involve "cultivation of immortals and hundreds of arts" (only simple weapon refining and soul-related methods are mentioned in the book). When faced with crises, he can only choose to use force to overcome skill and even mechanical deity. It still makes my reading pleasure drop again and again. I regret that I put down the book at this plot. To give you an example of a clever way to deal with combat pressure in my opinion, I won't mention the title of the book. A certain novel is also in a similar situation. It is also the background of the end of mankind. The protagonist has a traitor, and it is a very powerful traitor. He can improve his cultivation and combat power through some actions that ordinary people can easily do, and obtain resources, etc., And the combat effectiveness is improved considerably. In this case, the author has set some "features" for the protagonist's cheat (which in my opinion cannot be considered defects). Under the restrictions of these characteristics, the protagonist has to give up some or even all of his normal human nature if he wants his powerful cheat to reach a super high limit. Therefore, under normal circumstances (the foreshadowing chapter), the protagonist can integrate into the plot with a level of combat power that exceeds that of the surrounding supporting characters. When the crisis seriously intensifies (the climax plot), the protagonist will not be trapped in a desperate situation by relying on his plug-in, and can even fight back. In other words, the storyline is not depressing to the point of despair. When encountering a crisis that cannot be solved by conventional means of breaking the situation, abandoning humanity in order to increase combat power may not be accepted by some readers, but it is completely considered a reasonable development of the plot and will not lead to a deus ex machina situation. To sum up, it is a pity that I thought I found a novel that suits my taste, but it turned out not to be the case.

I forced myself to read nearly 400 chapters through the filters of 90% and Renxian and I couldn't stand it any longer. The following comments are only some of what I have seen, and are based on the platinum level. Let me talk about the good points first. The character creation is as stable as ever. The important characters except the protagonist are all standing up, and they are worthy of the platinum status. But the protagonist is the only one who is very awkward. His behavior is logically confusing and he wants to mess around. In fact, he is in charge of all major events. The human army Fang Chunchun is lying down to win the dog The theme of "huddle" is gone, and "alone" has to be stabbed in the back. From what I have seen, the cultivation methods have been gradually taught. The protagonist seems to have a plan for one person to obtain the Tao of chickens and dogs and ascend to heaven (only a guess, hope for correction) In terms of settings, in order to cater to the theme of doomsday, the way of immortality has been greatly reduced, resulting in many settings and plots about cultivating immortals that feel very casual. The Mahayana period with a life span of three thousand years is considered rare in the world of online literature. What is even more humorous is that the Mahayana monks in this work cannot survive the upper limit of spiritual practitioners who only have the strength of the God Transformation stage. (The youngest spiritual practitioner lived 18,000 years) For this kind of Water Mahayana, it took the protagonist a hundred years to cultivate it before the story began, and in the end he has not succeeded in ascension. It is really difficult to believe It is like the genius NPC in other online novels. He has some ability, but is just a pack. Among all the extraordinary protagonists, the conditions of the protagonist of this work are at the lower end. In short, most of the problems in this book lie in the protagonist and the setting of cultivating immortality. It is difficult to imagine that this book was written by a mature old Platinum. (It exactly corresponds to the author's mentality when writing the article, Ningba) (If you are a loyal lover of immortality writing, I suggest you not read it) By the way, finally, the author has mentioned many times that he does not want to stay in the comfort zone and wants to try a new track. I wholeheartedly agree and express my understanding, but this is not a reason for readers to pay for the cost of trial and error. Honestly write a light-hearted and joyful fantasy novel that readers love to read. The author himself can make some achievements, so why not? As for other themes, can't you practice writing in secret and then serve them up for everyone to eat?

I have to say goodbye. The early foreshadowing of the Blade Beast, the Psychic City, the Military Region, etc. Have almost been revealed. The suspense left for me is gone, and I have no desire to continue reading. Even if new maps are opened later and new foreshadowings are laid, it is still a new book for me. I have to say that the rhythm of the first hundred or so chapters is very good, and the emotional descriptions are occasionally touching. Overall, it is very good. The author has strong writing skills, but the plot framework needs to be further considered.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​                                           Is a method that has to be used by the demonic way. Doesn't the righteous way have no other methods at all? A disciple who goes down the mountain to fight with others can only use flying swords and talismans? Can this defeat the devil? The righteous path is to cultivate immortality, but the evil path is not to cultivate immortality? Isn't the difference just that the means are different? When it comes to how many creatures a certain demon has slaughtered in order to cultivate treasures, or to devour the essence, blood and soul after killing to upgrade, it is the method of the devil. It's not that you have to use magic methods to recruit souls Also, the protagonist has to use magic skills every time an enemy comes. I don't see any powerful means for the protagonist as a righteous Mahayana. The Mahayana period, as the pinnacle before becoming an immortal, wouldn't it only include an increase in energy level, but not even a little understanding of the law and the use of spiritual power? In addition to being used to absorb and achieve breakthroughs in cultivation, spiritual power cannot be used to temper the body. If the realm cannot be broken through, there is no other way to strengthen oneself, right? I feel that even the remnants of the Mahayana should not be like this Isn't the title of the book called Huddle in the End of the World and Become an Immortal Alone? Seeing this, I think it should be called the rebirth of the apocalypse, and using immortality to fight against the invasion, but it didn't show up, and becoming an immortal alone didn't see the point of cultivating immortality. Then write that the psykers end up fighting, and the pillars wake up and fight the pillars. At this time, the protagonist Nascent Soul becomes a god. As a result, stronger blade beasts and spiritual practitioners come from outside the universe, right? The framework is made large but the focus is on the end of the world. How much space can this write about becoming an immortal? Oh, I understand. I came here to watch "Becoming an Immortal", and the author caught the "apocalypse" to write it, okay? I'm going to look at other things. I'll wait for the author to update a few hundred chapters before I come back to see what's going on

I have ordered all of Gui Gui's books, and I can be considered a long-time fan. This book has a tight pace, interesting world view, and vivid characters. These are all advantages, which attracted me very much. But starting from the first few dozen chapters, I felt it was getting a bit boring. The world view is almost revealed. I spent the whole day fighting blade beasts and psykers. It's not that I can't fight, but the plot is too step-by-step and not that exciting. It is a plot that Guigui thinks is very important. It may be important in terms of plot structure, but it may not be good for readers. The previous book also had this problem, that is, Gui Gui was too obsessed with writing out all the plot lines arranged in his mind, but it was almost uninteresting in attracting readers. From the perspective of the characters in the book, these plots may be very important, such as the development of mecha sword arrays, but from the perspective of readers, they feel that it is not that exciting. Cultivation of immortals is not like cultivating immortals and farming. Moreover, Wang Daochang's fighting method is a bit monotonous, and it is indeed a bit repetitive if he always uses magic skills to cheat. Anyway, this book has changed from one of the most anticipated works that I must read every day to a work that I have read several chapters but am not interested in opening. Of course, this is entirely my own opinion, and it's normal to have different opinions. It's just that I'm on the verge of giving up the book now, and I still feel a little emotional.

Read Chapter 138. We probably know what route the protagonist will take. I was attracted by the title of the book and the previous book "Senior Brother" by the author. The author's writing is quite good, and the writing style and plot are relatively smooth. However, it always feels that it does not match the title, or in other words, it has been separated from the title by now. The words "mixed" and "independent" in the title made me think that this is a protagonist who takes a solitary route in the end of the world, or is a steady and cautious type, and the introduction is also "extremely misleading". The sentence "This is none of the poor people's business" seems to support my idea 🤤 But, the book is written to 138 In Chapter 1, the protagonist has become the center of the whirlpool either actively or passively. He has put a lot of things on his shoulders. Many things that he did not need to take care of because of his "unsmooth Taoist mind" have caused a lot of troubles. Moreover, the incidents and conflicts are very frequent and cannot be stopped at all. Then he is constantly suppressing the level, which makes me feel that the protagonist is very passive. As a person who aspires to become an immortal, the actions of the protagonist are a bit disconnected to be honest... The above shortcomings are all minor. They are all caused by my preconceived notions and then seeing the protagonist who does not conform to them. The main reason is that the title does not match the article, which attracts readers with different preferences like me 🔨. The whole book is very good, but it is not to my taste. As of now, book friends can compare it and see that it has seriously deviated. I hope the author can change the title and the introduction 🌹 I think the title introduction should at least show the tone of the work. The title and the article have completely different meanings. Only personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like it, welcome to discuss 🤝

When I saw Lingtong injured, I really couldn't hold on anymore. During that time, there were suddenly a lot more romantic dramas, which I actually didn't like. In addition, the author was used to this multi-female writing style, so he packed in too many female characters in a short period of time, and they all had the potential to be female protagonists. The result is that the original first heroine Lingtong spends most of her time playing soy sauce and lacks memorable performances. The new female supporting characters appear intensively with their own characteristics. So where is her own charm? So, when I almost ignored this person, I suddenly arranged a large emotional scene. Firstly, I felt it was a bit abrupt. Secondly, I had no expectations or even disgust for the sublimation of this relationship. It was very painful to watch. I had to divide a chapter several times to swallow it, until I couldn't swallow it anymore. The author once said, if you don't write about women in male videos, why should you write about them? I don't agree that good male videos don't have to be arranged in a routine with how many beauties surround the protagonist! As a great author, why do you still maintain this writing perspective? Don't understand! Furthermore, it feels like a formula. The important female supporting characters must be a cold lady, a tsundere and big-breasted lolita, and a strong woman who is dedicated to her career... Especially the tsundere and big-breasted lolita. I can understand the other ones. After all, there are only such useful settings. When the big-breasted lolita appears, it is full of Japanese school cartoon deja vu. The good-for-nothing male protagonist is surrounded by girls with red, yellow, blue, purple, and black hair. It is a bit too deliberate! Too deliberate! I feel that since I have chosen to challenge the subject matter innovation and do not want to stick to the comfort zone of Xianxia, ​​why can't I also innovate the writing method? I feel like I have seen this set of female character templates before my senior brother! After all, everyone mainly reads the plot, and the emotional drama is just the seasoning in this kind of novel. If it were more than ten years ago when I first started reading online novels, the harem novel would be really attractive. But now, I just want to watch the main plot and add some emotional interaction. And, to be honest, emotional drama is really not the author's strong point, and maybe that's why it was so painful for me to watch.

What can I say, it's quite interesting I just don't know if it's because the protagonist's promotion is too slow, or if the author can't figure out whether it should emphasize the sadness of the apocalypse or the stronger feeling of cultivating immortals. The protagonist, who has a background that is all-powerful, often seems quite powerless, and it is difficult to handle things and sudden encounters well. It obviously has the tragic plot of a doomsday novel. But to be honest, this is not the post-apocalyptic immortality novel that I (specifically me, I don't think anything bad about the author, please don't go online) are looking forward to reading. I really want to see the protagonist unable to suffer. There are a lot of abusive protagonists out there. What I want to see more is near misses, or in other words: the protagonist should have a sense of strength and security, rather than the feeling of taking risks all the time in the article. Of course, this is just a personal feeling. I do not deny the excellence of the book itself, it is indeed beautiful🙂

A reincarnated Mahayana monk with good food.

Both the title and the introduction reflect the protagonist's self-centered attitude. Other things and people have nothing to do with me, and he just wants to ascend to immortality. Although I feel less self-conscious at the beginning, the writing is still passable and makes people interested in reading. After reading it and putting it on the shelves, I felt that the author was writing about market trade. Isn't this just an ordinary person who got a complete set of Immortal Cultivation (incomplete version) and used a few small spells and charms to survive in the apocalypse? His experience, psychology, IQ, and abilities are all ordinary people. Something happened to Ling Tong, so he looked ugly again, his eyes were red, and he was so angry that he looked like he was being killed. Shi Lai was caught off guard. Ling Tong and the protagonist had not known each other for a long time. Also, I don't understand the explosion. It doesn't show how powerful it is after the explosion. I just feel that this explosion is a far-fetched method. I can't stand this shit anymore. The above opinions only represent personal opinions and my own complaints. If anyone likes this book, please don't scold me. Everyone has their own preferences. For me this book is history.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing 424. How can I put it? The early stage is really good. By the eighth time, The Cage on Muyun started to feel a bit uncomfortable. The villain summoned a meteorite and the protagonist was forced to burn his soul. It didn't give me the usual feeling of pleasure when fighting the Blade Beast. Jiu Mu changed the system directly and couldn't stand it anymore. The feeling of chasing books in the early stage was still very good. Thank you for seeing me again.

I just read the novel without reading the author. After reading 100 chapters, I realized that it's about getting back to the point. It's a completely different subject matter from my senior brother. The writing is so good. The master is the master.

I subscribed when it was half price, and I regretted it after reading the beginning. What kind of rubbish plot, with a gangster just getting clean at the beginning? Is this something written by a human? It's just a brain hemorrhage

After reading Chapter 155, the protagonist is both reckless and a bitch. It's because the technology is hidden by oneself, for fear that the enemy will get it. Then when you see the enemy, go up and do it. The key is how can a technical talent be stolen every day? The enemies are all S-level and are attacking us. As our most senior scientific researchers, how can we only have so few people to protect us? Do you have to go into battle in person every time?

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This book is not like what you wrote, it is too substandard 🙂.

The protagonist is really not messy at all. He is either fighting or preparing to fight.

Now that I see it, I can't stop reading it. I keep up with it every day. I believe this book will be another masterpiece that can surpass "Senior Brother"! Expect!

Ever since it was put on the shelves, I don't know whether it was for the purpose of updating or for other reasons, but the sense of context in reading the book has become increasingly fragmented I don't know if it is because the outline has not been completed, which leads to too much repetition of the content later on. There are so many chapters, but instead of unfolding the plot of cultivating immortals and upgrading, they blindly emphasize the so-called external threats and their handling. Then we can only guess that the subsequent plot will be more fragmented and disconnected. In the current plot that people are reading, the content before Chapter 90 has a good control over the distribution of each part of the plot. The detailed description and abbreviation have achieved a relatively harmonious unity in the text and the time context. For a single plot (such as cultivating immortals, psychics, emotional drama), the design effect is sometimes highlighted and sometimes simply skipped. But chapters 90 to 120 are more troublesome. The description in this part is completely messed up. It feels like the author has changed people and rewritten the book with the background of the previous 90 chapters. Also, I would like to see everyone's opinions

The setting and rhythm at the beginning were very pleasant to watch, and I fully subscribed to the quality of "Brother". But when I saw around 350, I really couldn't stand it anymore. It was a bit anticlimactic. I wonder if it was because I didn't win the game that I shifted my focus to other things.

It's still the problem with that gangster. When you open the comment section, you don't kill that gangster and you forgive him. A deformed environment creates deformed people. The whole environment is like this. That gangster is relatively good at the bottom. It's not bad compared to the previous Hong Kong gangster movies. Why don't you criticize those movies and so on, and what's the use of focusing only on the gangster himself? I can't see something behind it. The author himself said that there will be punishment for the gangster, but it will definitely not lead to death. (I say this in the hope that readers can maintain their own understanding when reading and having fun, and not be affected by some distorted thoughts. Let's encourage each other)

I think there is a big difference, low magic ~ medium low magic, which may refer to the extremely low density of spiritual energy in this world. As long as it exists in mineral form (spiritual core), the blade beast is a biochemical puppet embedded with a puppet formation (spiritual circuit), which is used by spiritual practitioners to plunder and extract resources to produce spiritual stones (blade beast spiritual core) And spiritual practitioners abandon the physical body, use psychic circuits to store consciousness and host souls, and obtain another form of immortality

Refining

I just got the subscription. I have said important things three times. It looks good. It looks good. Please add more chapters. I will finish reading the following chapters in two days. I am a little afraid to read anymore. I hate chasing updates. The first day I like Tongtong.

Reverse Time Travel, Cultivation to Immortality, Doomsday I have read more than thirty chapters. There are many novelties. The protagonist is a Mahayana practitioner who is over a hundred years old and has no knowledge of the world. Because he has been practicing alone in his previous life, he can actually be regarded as a teenager, so he lacks knowledge of human nature and is easily shocked by others. There is an element of cultivating immortality. The protagonist comes from a certain cultivation world (probably), but he is not a local anyway. He fused the local corpses and read some local memories. There are also reverse wear elements. There is also the end of the world. Okay, another genre has been created! Let's start with Brother Yi!

I see a lot of understanding guys in the comment area, so I'll explain it a little bit here. First, the subject matter of this book. It is an attempt at a new theme, reverse travel + doomsday + immortality. It should be difficult for you to find a second completed book with the same theme for the time being (I didn't find it anyway). I won't say any layman's words. My creative philosophy is to keep exploring. If this book hits the street, I may write a work that I have created on my own. But to be honest, the Abyss Alone Space Opera has an average order of 17,000 to 17,000 from 3,000 on the shelves. The copyright of the fairy father's attempt to double-cross the father and son is also more than 20,000. They are all small classified works with high completion, short update cycle, and no traffic support. There is still some way to go before they become popular. So I will not repeat my successful routine just because I am short of money. I like to explore areas that others have not explored. This is a writing concept that took shape ten years ago, when the trend of online writing was to attack homogeneity. Now you are blaming an author for trying to innovate? Actually, before I used this vest, I was one of the first pioneers in the field of original light novels in China. The first fairy tale work was "Take an Angel to Cultivation as an Immortal." Later, I became the pioneer of the steady flow. So, those guys who are pointing fingers and saying how this subject matter is. Don't come here to show off your shallow knowledge of Internet literature. There is no book that everyone likes. If you don't like it, just don't read it. Maybe my next book will be to your liking. You think so? Second, why double opening. Two reasons. First, after writing the plot of Wei Na's shooting, I was completely inspired by this book and couldn't hold it back. My double-booked works include "My Senior Brother is Too Steady" and "Walking Alone in the Abyss". Old readers will naturally know the quality. I clearly know the importance of inspiration to me, and I would be very sad if I didn't write this story, so I just opened it up. In fact, the main story of the Immortal Father has been written, and the chapter on the Conferment of Gods is being added. Second, control sugar. I have no other hobbies except coding, animation, and playing games. I am a homebody and don't like to go out. The high sugar content required for coding and the high pressure of my creative brother during his solo journey in the abyss made me weigh more than 300 pounds in a few years. My blood sugar exploded, so I had to control my sugar. The only thing that can make me forget to control my sugar hunger is immersive writing. So I intentionally schedule enough writing tasks for myself. Believe me, controlling sugar and losing weight is extremely uncomfortable. So, those of you who deliberately set the pace, don't force me to spray you when I'm having a sugar tantrum. I am an elegant author and cannot scold readers. Another: I have lost 34 pounds by controlling sugar.

"Name?" "Fu Jian." "Where are your adults?" "... I'm the only one left." Looking at the child in front of him who looked to be no more than six or seven years old, the young man responsible for applying for registration fell into silence. A nameless rage rose in his heart, and he wanted to rush into the battlefield and tear those bladed beasts apart, but in the end he could only swallow his anger. Released his clenched fists, Chen Ming shook his head at Fu Jian, and said hoarsely: "Sorry, we can't have you. We adults are not dead yet, and it is not our children's turn to go to the battlefield." Fu Jian lowered his head in disappointment, said nothing more, turned around and left the recruitment office with a red sign. 'It doesn't matter if you don't want the army, I can do it myself! ' Fu Jian encouraged himself, his lowered face full of stubbornness. "Hey Fu Jian, Fu Jian, wait a minute." Chen Ming put down the marker and register in his hand, and jumped out from behind the table. Fu Jian looked back at him, feeling a little confused. Shouldn't you accept him? Chen Ming knelt down and looked at Fu Jian's dark pupils, and said seriously: "The army can't want you now, but if you really want to become a soldier, you can go over there." Chen Ming pointed to a building in the distance, which looked like it had just been built not long ago. "That is the newly built youth training camp, which can also be regarded as our reserve force. In addition to daily physical training and the use of various firearms and equipment, there will also be commissioners who have been removed from the front line to explain how to deal with different bladed beasts, but..." Fu Jian asked: "Just what?" Chen Ming closed his eyes, took a deep breath, and looked at Fu Jian's serious look, as if he saw himself ten years ago. Ten years ago, his father died in the line of duty. His mother could not bear the blow and passed away soon after. The huge family fell apart in an instant, leaving him alone. Someone once gave him a chance to inherit his father's legacy, and now he also wanted to give the young man in front of him a chance. "Once you enter the youth training camp, you can no longer voluntarily quit. Either survive on the battlefield or... Sacrifice." "It doesn't matter, I'm not afraid." Fu Jian nodded vigorously without any hesitation. "Okay, take this." Chen Ming took out a dark red card from his jacket pocket. It had the number 06712 on the front and an exclusive QR code on the back. This is a recommendation card issued by the army some time ago. The function of the card is very simple. Children holding the card only need to undergo simple registration to enter the youth training camp for training. It is said to be a recommended card, but what behind the card represents not only skill teaching and survival guarantee, but also the foreseeable blood and fire, which is the inheritance of fighting will and the light of hope for the survival of civilization. "The youth training camp will open in a few days. You can pay attention to the situation there. When it opens, you can register with this red card." "Okay, you go back to eat quickly, I have to go to work." Chen Ming touched Fu Jian's head, stood up and walked to the recruitment office, waving his hand gracefully. Under the glow of the setting sun, Chen Ming and Fu Jian walked opposite each other. Their shadows stretched and lengthened after a brief contact, like the transfer and continuation of some kind of idea. …… Under the scorching sun, a group of children in various clothes, ranked according to their height, stood neatly in the open space in front of the youth training camp training base. Fu Jian stood at the back because he was very fast. In front of him was a tall girl with a ponytail. A middle-aged man wearing a camouflage military uniform with a resolute face stood at the front of the team, his majestic eyes sweeping over the faces of each child as he walked back and forth. "I don't know why you came here, and I don't want to know this. I only know that this is a youth training camp, a reserve for frontline warriors, and the main force that will face blade beasts in the future!" The middle-aged man pointed to the door of the youth training camp training base and said word by word: "Now you We haven't crossed the gate yet, and there is still room for regret. If you want to quit, please stand up and hand in your red card. Someone will send you back to a safe place. " "I only give you a minute to think about it." After saying this, the middle-aged man turned and left, disappearing from Fu Jian's sight. Without the instructor's deterrence, commotion began to spread among the crowd. Some familiar children asked each other about each other's plans, and some closed their eyes and remained silent. Fu Jian saw several people looking hesitant, as if they wanted to give up, but under the persuasion of their companions, they did not leave after all. The girl in front of Fu Jian suddenly turned around and asked him: "Are you leaving?" Fu Jian was stunned, and he did not expect that someone would take the initiative to talk to him. Before his mind could turn around, he had already said: "I'm not leaving." The girl got a satisfactory answer and turned around without any hesitation, and the tip of her swaying ponytail brushed the tip of Fu Jian's nose. Um... Looking at the girl's back, Fu Jian suddenly realized that his answer didn't seem important. Maybe the girl, like her, only has herself left. She just wants to gain some recognition by asking him casually. It is best to stay, and leaving has nothing to do with her and will not affect her choice in her heart. One minute passed quickly, and the instructor appeared in front of everyone, nodding with satisfaction. "Very good, you are all good!" Taking out a list, the instructor continued, "Now I will check the list of personnel. Those whose names are called will be called. Enter through the youth training camp gate in order and go east. Someone will distribute basic supplies such as clothing and accessories over there." "Zhang Huanying." "Here we come!" "Wang Mingqi." "Arrived!" "..." "Xiao Qiang." "Arrived!" "Fu Jian." "Arrived!" (To be continued)

"Damn it, how did these blade beasts get here!" The heavily armed soldiers held machine guns and fired wildly at the blade beasts that suddenly emerged from the ground. "I have reported the news to the superiors. Support will arrive soon. What we have to do now is to annihilate them as much as possible here and protect the people behind us." "You kid again I'm showing off here, what do you think? My wife and children are in the city, and I have to keep these damn blade beasts out even if I'm trying to save my life!" The sound of fierce gunfire was mixed with the sounds of soldiers shouting for communication. Chen Jisheng deceived his brothers. The call was put through, but the Sixth Military Region was also attacked by blade beasts, even on a scale far greater than theirs. After just a few words in a hurry, the call ended abruptly. Now in the entire hinterland of mankind, bladed beasts emerging from the ground are attacking raging everywhere. Those in better condition are still resisting tenaciously, while those in worse condition have long since had no survivors. This is a premeditated invasion of civilization. The blade beasts on the coast attracted the attention of high-level human beings and made them mistakenly believe that the blade beasts came from the sea. A large number of armed forces were dispatched to the coastal city to build a defense line. Just as human civilization stabilized its position from the sudden attack and gradually suppressed the cannon-fodder blade beasts on the coast, a large number of mimic blade beasts and basic blade beasts followed the pathways drilled underground by the earth-boring insects and penetrated deep into the hinterland of mankind. …… At the Joint Defense Force Command Center, Commander Zhang Jingteng punched the table hard and cursed the quintessence of the nation. Just now, another city sent a signal for help. So far, traces of blade beasts have appeared in almost every city. The guard strength in the city is far from enough to deal with the tide of blade beasts launching sneak attacks from underground. Those blade beasts on the front line seemed to know how to cooperate, attacking the human defense line regardless of the cost, using their own lives to hold back the human fighting force. Because of this, the blade beasts in the hinterland of the city cannot be cleared away in time, but this is not what Zhang Jingteng is most worried about. Although the number of blade beasts is extremely large, the human artillery reserves cannot be underestimated. The positional warfare on the front line has actually gradually stabilized. But these bladed beasts suddenly appeared in the rear, making Zhang Jingteng feel a little bad. The currently known blade beasts include cannon fodder basic blade beasts, larger high-priced blade beasts, violent female worms, and ground burrowing worms that open underground passages. Without exception, the fighting methods of these blade beasts are very primitive, but their bodies that are as strong as steel and their powerful vitality allow their physical attacks to roll towards human positions like a tide. The firearms and artillery fire of human civilization and the biological body of blade beast civilization are like two colliding torrents, which can barely maintain a certain balance. But what if there is a blade beast that releases poisonous gas? Zhang Jingteng had to consider the possibility of this situation. If those bladed beasts that penetrate deep into the human heart can release poisonous gas, it will cause great damage, and even the entire human civilization may overturn in an instant! Zhang Jingteng was anxious in his heart, but he had no good way to deal with it. He could only keep issuing orders, asking the defense forces stationed in major cities to stop the blade beast at all costs, and at the same time dispatching a small number of armed troops to support. 'You must, you must hold on! ' … Pingnan City. The 127th Regiment stationed here is on the verge of destruction. The mutilated corpses of countless soldiers and the remains of blade beasts lie on the ground. Scarlet blood and dark green blood merge together and flow slowly. There are only a dozen people left in the entire 127th Regiment, including the second battalion commander. Their defensive positions have long been destroyed by the blade beasts, and they can only huddle back to back to deal with the blade beasts attacking from all directions. "Batalion Commander, retreat, we are the only ones left, we can't hold on!" Liu Dabiao didn't say anything, he just silently pulled the trigger of the heavy machine gun in his hand and fired at the hole where the blade beasts were pouring out a few meters away. Of course he knew that they couldn't hold on, and he also knew that the humans were in chaos now, with bladed beasts emerging from the ground launching sneak attacks everywhere, and there was no spare power to support them. But they are soldiers. From the moment they put on this military uniform, they had no option to escape. Behind him are tens of millions of unarmed people. Even if he dies, he must die at the forefront of blocking the blade beast! The young soldier's eyes were full of despair, and a few tears could be seen on his blackened face. Liu Dabiao knew him. He was a newcomer who had just graduated from the military camp a week ago and was assigned to Pingnan. He was a child from the north and had not yet adapted to the environment when he came here. He had not even visited Pingnan City... If nothing else, he would not have a chance in the future. Liu Dabiao looked at the young man who was clearly talking about wanting to run away, but his body was trembling with fear, but his hand holding the gun remained steady. He smiled. Perhaps they will all die here today, but they died to protect the people and to resist alien invaders. They died without regrets and they died with glory! "Don't say such depressing words, one head saves one life, even if you die, just kill a few more bladed beasts for me!" "Hey, then let's compare who can kill more!" "Who is afraid of whom? Don't be able to beat me when the time comes. Crying! " "Fuck you, I'm sure I'll kill more!" "..." Under the command of Liu Dabiao, the remaining dozen people gave up their defense. They strapped explosives on their bodies and charged into the edge beast pit without hesitation. One by one, the figures continued to fall, and the remaining people continued to move towards the goal. Finally, under the cover of others at the cost of their lives, Liu Dabiao, who had broken an arm, and the recruit staggered into the cave. Boom! The violent roar collapsed the pit and stirred up dust all over the sky. This tragic land fell into a brief calm. But only a moment later, an unknown gray-purple mist floated out of the pit and floated over the city. The incomplete moon was engulfed by thick clouds, darkness spread silently, and gray-purple mist spread rapidly. Wherever the fog went, the building facilities were not affected, but animals suddenly fell to the ground unconscious one after another. They struggled for a while and then lost their breath. Then, there is their owner. In just one night, corpses were everywhere! (To be continued)

[20 Years before the Fortress Era] On the edge of the plateau, there is a training camp. Young children, oh no, they should be called reserve forces now. From the moment they join the youth training camp, they are no longer flowers in the greenhouse. Instead, they are put into the steel furnace for smelting, and will rush to the frontline battlefield at any time to slash the blade of the blade beast. Yang Ming looked at the group of children doing physical training on the playground, his eyes searched, and soon settled on a child with dark skin. Fu Zhenyu's son, Fu Jian. After falling from the Donghai City Research Institute to the northwest plateau, Yang Ming, who learned of the death of his best friend Fu Zhenyu, began to inquire about Fu Jian. He has devoted most of his life to scientific research. He is unmarried and has no children. Originally, Yang Ming planned to take care of Fu Jian as his own son, but before he came to find him, Fu Jian had already applied to join the youth training camp and became a member of the reserve force. So Yang Ming gave up protecting Fu Jian in the greenhouse, and took the initiative to apply to become one of the instructors in the training camp, responsible for teaching blade beast related courses. "Old Yang, we are watching the recruit training again." Yang Ming nodded and looked at the approaching chief instructor Du Yongqiang, who is also the supreme commander of this training camp. "What is the current situation on the front line?" After a moment of silence, Du Yongqiang shook his head, his voice filled with weakness: "Where is the front line? Almost all the coastal cities have fallen and become nests where blade beasts breed." Yang Ming was dumbfounded. At the meeting of the Pan-Blue Star Alliance to Resist Alien Creatures, which was urgently established three years ago and hastily disbanded, the scientific research team he represented once pointed out the threat of blade beasts and warned all countries to prepare. It is a pity that the six months of peace made them let down their vigilance, and what they got in exchange was the complete defeat of the human camp. This is a premeditated invasion of civilization. The bladed beasts on the coast acted as targets to attract human attention. When they mobilized a large amount of military power to invest in the seaside area, the mimic bladed beasts appeared strangely in various cities, releasing a large amount of poisonous gas and wiping out 50% of the human population overnight. Thanks to the fact that humans have been actively fighting among themselves, after the initial defeat, the remaining humans organized themselves in different regions and used the weapons in stock to protect the lives of ordinary people Under the pouring of firepower at any cost, humans once had a certain advantage in local battlefields, and even came up with the idea of ​​​​wiping out the blade beasts and conquering their homeland. However, as time went by, they discovered a bad news. Blade beasts can evolve! The progress of human technological advancement is far less than the speed of blade beast evolution. The bladed beasts bathed in artillery fire have evolved over and over again, and their bones have become hard enough to withstand pistol shots. In close combat, their blade limbs can even cut off sabers developed by humans. Fortunately among misfortunes, they are still unable to withstand the power of nuclear weapons. However, firstly, the nuclear weapons reserve is limited, and secondly, the radiation caused by the explosion will also pose a great threat to mankind, if nuclear weapons are used recklessly to clear the ground. That will only have one consequence - before humans are wiped out by the blade beasts, they will die from nuclear radiation first. Yang Ming wanted to ask more questions, but Du Yongqiang's phone suddenly rang. "Hey, what!?" "Okay, I understand, he is next to me, we will go there immediately!" Du Yongqiang hung up the phone, and without even bothering to explain, he pulled Yang Ming and ran out of the military camp. There was a helicopter parked there, and it had started to start at this moment. Its wings cut the air and made a harsh noise. Yang Ming, who was confused, followed Du Yongqiang onto the plane, and then had time to ask him what happened. "Meeting?" "Yes, the order conveyed on the phone just now is for you and I to rush to the headquarters in the northern plateau immediately to attend the meeting." "But the specific meeting was not mentioned on the phone." Yang Ming frowned, and suddenly an idea flashed in his mind, and he thought of the plan that the head of the institute and his teacher Yuan Zhenning had said. Fortress plan. As the name suggests, it means abandoning the urban buildings on the ground, integrating all the resources and power of human civilization, and building a defensive fortress underground. Once this plan was proposed, it caused widespread discussion within the institute. Most people did not agree with this pessimistic and negative shrinking plan. What's more, integrating the resources and power of human civilization is easy to say, but people's hearts are different. Moreover, the blade beasts had just revealed their traces at that time and did not cause many casualties. Those politicians were still thinking about how to benefit from the war. This kind of plan to change the existing structure will naturally not be recognized by them. But things are different now. The poisonous mist released by the blade beasts when they raided the human hinterland wiped out 50% of the human race, which indirectly wiped out those politicians who put their interests first. Humanity's current situation of comprehensive defense is just suitable for launching the fortress plan! Amidst the buzzing vibration of the wings, the helicopter quickly approached its destination. Yang Ming and Du Yongqiang were allowed to enter the spacious conference room after a brief inspection by the guards. The conference room was already two-thirds full, and among those who came early, it was obvious that they could be divided into two camps. Research scholars and military generals. They are also the organizers of the human forces that are currently dividing the world against the blade beasts. This undoubtedly further confirmed Yang Ming's guess. Yang Ming waved to Du Yongqiang and sat beside a few acquaintances who had worked together in the research institute to exchange information with each other. More than half an hour later, the conference room was already full, and a tall man with a resolute face, wearing a blood-stained military uniform, stepped onto the podium. "I am Jiang Tianlin, the former general staff officer of the Second War Zone, and one of the initiators of this meeting." "The main purpose of calling you here today is to hold a resolution vote. Please ask Academician Yuan Zhenning to introduce you to the specific situation." Following his words, an old man with gray hair but still strong energy walked onto the podium with a notebook. With a simple operation, after connecting the projection screen in the conference room, Yuan Zhenning called up a map. This is a world map of six continents, but unlike ordinary maps, the surface of this map is covered with dense scarlet light spots. Among the large swaths of red, countless small blue light groups were divided and surrounded. "These red dots represent the blade beasts, while the blue ones represent the human side. Maybe the team led by some of you has achieved a lot of results, and you even want to counterattack the blade beasts and regain the old land." "But you have far underestimated the growth of the blade beasts. All you have seen is Blade beasts are cannon fodder used to consume human beings' vitality. " "Newer varieties of blade beasts have begun to be born in those poisonous fogs, such as this one." Yuan Zhenning switched to the photo, and a huge figure that was enlarged and restored appeared in the center of the picture, still somewhat blurry. But the point is not the size, but that it actually has wings made of bones! This is undoubtedly huge bad news for humans who still have air superiority. Fear spread in my heart, and the conference room became a little noisy. Yuan Zhenning switched to several photos taken by the investigators at the risk of death, showing them the terrifying growth of the blade beast. "So how should we deal with them now?" A noncommissioned officer couldn't help but ask. Yuan Zhenning knocked on the table and projected a document. "This is the only possibility for human civilization to continue amidst the raging blade beasts - the fortress plan." (To be continued)

(The original text contains little description of Fu Jian's emotional aspects, so I personally made a certain processing and design [making sugar!]. The heroine was named Xiao Qiang, which means the warm and romantic red rose~) Bang! A marking bullet hit the corner of the wall, leaving a pool of scarlet paint. Fu Jian gasped for air with lingering fear. It was just a little bit close. If he had reacted a little slower, he would have been eliminated by now. Fu Jian calmed his breathing and raised his hand to look at the watch on his left hand. The upper left corner of the dial displays the current time: 17:49. In the center are light spots scattered in different places. Each light spot represents a student and is also an opponent. It has been more than three hours since the simulated shooting competition started. More than 60 students have been eliminated, and there are only less than 20 people left in the field. Fu Jian is one of the seed players that the instructors are optimistic about, and his performance is well-deserved. He alone eliminated 19 people, and he basically eliminated his opponents with one shot. The accuracy of his marksmanship is breathtaking. 'Looking at the angle of the bullet marks, the opponent should be setting up a sniper attack on... The fourth floor of an abandoned building. ' 'The gunfire just now will definitely attract the remaining people to come over to investigate the situation. If I keep hiding, the sniper will also escape. ' 'If I can get the sniper in his hand and find a commanding height, I can easily harvest the remaining students without having to run around. ' 'High risk and high reward, go for it! ' Fu Jian gritted his teeth, tensed his muscles, counted down to three, and then stepped out from behind the container. As expected, the student hiding in the building and setting up a sniper fell into the trap. Three rounds of bullets were fired at Fu Jian in a nearly perfect shape, almost blocking all his movement directions. But Fu Jian was unhurried. His legs were rooted like iron trees. He twisted his waist and used an iron bridge to avoid the bullet at the top. Then he suddenly exerted force and turned sideways in the air, avoiding two bullets again. Stimulated by adrenaline, Fu Jian was highly concentrated and performed two difficult movements in succession. His muscles were already at their limit, but he gritted his teeth and squeezed out some more strength. Fu Jian rolled forward, instantly took out the pistol from his waist, and fired three shots in succession in the direction he felt. You give me three shots, and I will give you three shots in return. But the opponent obviously does not have Fu Jian's abnormal physical fitness and reaction ability. He only dodged one of them, and the remaining two hit one in the chest and one in the left shoulder. "What a pervert." Huang Yuchen smiled bitterly and shook his head, with disappointment and admiration on his face. In their training camp, Fu Jian can be said to be the top three perverts. This kid seems to be born with a ruthless spirit. When he first entered the military camp, he was still a weakling like a bean sprout. But in just one year of training, under his high-intensity squeezing training, Fu Jian suddenly transformed from a soft and weak pretty boy into a muscular man who looks thin in clothes and takes off his clothes. In fact, looking at the rankings alone, Fu Jian only ranked first in physical fitness, but he was also firmly in the top three in other categories. He is a rare all-around genius who is not partial to subjects. The other two people, one is Chen Zhongying, who was born in the military. He has received military training since he was a child. His physique is much stronger than that of a genius like Fu Jian. In close combat, no one can resist his three moves if he catches the opportunity. The other is a girl. Xiao Qiang. As one of the few girls in the training camp, Xiao Qiang's shooting talent can be said to be unparalleled. While others were still spending a lot of bullets to develop their gun sense, Xiao Qiang could already achieve a blind shooting hit rate of 97%. She ranked first in the shooting rankings all year round, beating Fu Jian, who was ranked second, by more than 200 points. . The tactical boots made a gentle friction sound on the stairs. Fu Jian limped to the fifth floor, turning a blind eye to Huang Yuchen who was slumped against the wall. He reached out to put away the sniper rifle on the ground, and turned around to find the next sniper point. "Fu Jian!" Huang Yuchen called out to Fu Jian. Fu Jian looked back. Huang Yuchen winked at him and reminded: "As a friendly reminder, I took this gun away from Xiao Qiang, and she is nearby. You'd better be careful, don't lose in the hands of a girl." Fu Jian nodded silently. Xiao Qiang, it is indeed a bit tricky. If he were to compete purely with her in marksmanship, Fu Jian would not have any idea of ​​winning. If she was not in good condition, it would be a draw with her. But now it is a simulated shooting competition, which can also be said to be a real CF competition. The competition is not just about marksmanship. Suppressing the tingling sensation in his left leg, Fu Jian carried a sniper rifle on his back and walked towards a smaller but connected building complex diagonally opposite the building. If nothing else, someone should be rushing here by now, just in time to wait and wait. After entering the room and cleaning up a little, Fu Jian lay on the window sill on the third floor and stuck out the barrel of the gun. The position he chose was definitely not as good as the one chosen by Huang Yuchen simply in terms of field of view, but the advantage here was that there were enough distractions and sniper positions, and he could still maneuver among the buildings if he was discovered. It would not be possible to be discovered and killed directly like Huang Yuchen. If I had been as powerful as I am now, maybe my parents would not have died. Fu Jian's hand clenched unconsciously, and his fingertips penetrated deeply into the flesh. He would never forget that afternoon. His parents died in front of him, but he was powerless to do anything. Blade beast! A figure appeared in Fu Jian's peripheral vision. He instantly suppressed the anger in his heart and looked at the person through the sniper scope. Xiao Qiang! ? (To be continued)