Dreamboat, Your Image Is Falling Apart!

This is my seventh time writing a book on Qidian... I'm really struggling to manage 4,000 words a day. Sigh, writers on this small website for eight years are all at least 20,000 words a day. I'll show you 20,000 words a day once this book is published.

Actually, if you just further avoid the pitfalls of the first book and improve some of the plot, we'd buy it even if you rewrote it entirely.

Old Zhou's books are incredibly good in the early and middle stages, but I got tired of them in the later stages and couldn't get into them anymore. This comment is from an account I created after changing my phone, which has 15 days of free access to his works.

Lu Lin

Everyone says Qiao Linlin is promiscuous, mainly because she has no boundaries with men and likes to be in the spotlight. However, firstly, her flirting with other women's boyfriends stems from her father's betrayal of the family, leading her to want to manipulate men for life to avoid being hurt like her mother. This is also due to her own personality.

Having read up to chapter 150, from the initial amazement to the current calm, I felt compelled to say something, so I wrote this piece based on my own thoughts. This is the first book I've read by Lao Zhou (Zhou Xun), and I'm also reading the one Li Yuanzhe is updating intermittently next door.

To be honest, double rebirth is a difficult story to write. After figuring things out, does the female lead really need to cling to the male lead? She could achieve success on her own; the fact that she got divorced already says it all. But since it's Zhou Xun's book, the rest of the plot is pretty predictable. 😏

This was my first time seeing something like this, and I was shocked, blown away, and then I got hooked! 😭😭

Su Qing is definitely the female lead. So far, I find the character relatable; I quite like her. She's devoted, traditional, chaste, and has a girlish temper. Initially, she's exasperated by the male lead, but later realizes she can't live without him. Her divorce was meant to make him understand her importance, but it ironically makes her realize his importance herself.

If your mind is in turmoil, slow down. I'm not used to reading your book where there are so few typos in each chapter. A slightly slower pace would be acceptable, but the pacing of this book became a bit strange in the middle. Even after all this time, I still remember the personalities of the female leads in my idol's novel, including Su Qianqian, Jiang Qing, and Qiao Linlin.