I Am a Dragon

1. I really don't understand why it's called Chen Ping'an, and its personality is so similar. With this name, it's destined to be compared with the sword. If you can't compare, you will have to lose points. If you can't compare, this book will be a high-quality book and it won't lack the bonus points. However, taking the initiative to touch other great gods will still attract trouble. Moreover, this is the author's first fairy tale, so he is so confident that he can not use the sword? No matter how you think about it, it does more harm than good 2. The author's advantage is in writing about emotions, but this advantage has not been reflected at all until now. The most important relationship between Jiu'er and Chen Ping'an is so abrupt, why did he suddenly fall in love with it? Just because Chen Pingan is purely honest? 3. The plot so far is very cliche, and some of the plot developments are far-fetched and unreasonable. There are too many characters at once, including the protagonist, the portrayal is average, and the overall feeling is very rough 4. It is the first time for the author to write martial arts, and the advantage is emotion. It is recommended to write a relaxed and low-level martial arts world first. The protagonist and heroines develop the plot while they are learning skills and playing hard, so that the focus is on daily life. If it's a high-level martial arts game from the beginning, and all the adventures escalate, there's no way to invest more in emotional portrayal. And for high martial arts, divine consciousness, super perception, etc., Just let them whisper, small actions and other small plots will look stupid, and fighting skills are also required. In addition, don't bring in high-level characters too early. Once they enter the plot, there shouldn't be too much for the protagonist. After all, there is an elephant and an ant 5. The protagonist's personality is not suitable for playing with emotions, personal feeling. This kind of personality will appear to be more like a virgin, and usually the woman will take the initiative to support him. These are the main points I think the administrator seems to be constantly cleaning the book, but there are indeed many problems with the book so far. It cannot be cleaned, and it will be useless if it is cleaned. Most of the people who read the book review want to complain, and there is not much to discuss about the plot at the moment. It is recommended that you read more readers' comments and review them carefully.

I drew a sticker of Jiuer and Dianniang wearing Chinese maid outfits to celebrate Qidian's 20th birthday!

"Jiuer, why do the fox ears you changed for me look like those of a puppy?" "Hahaha, because what I changed for brother Ping An was to fix the dog ears!"

Let's be a big eater together! ~Jiuer and Ping An reunited after a long absence

Today is my birthday. I have hundreds of likes 😁😁😁😁😁

I finished painting a scene in my heart: Ping An and Jiuer reunited under the moon

Seriously, anyone who spent money to order this book will be taken advantage of! The reason for serialization is to give the author motivation. If I had known, who would read it if I didn't finish it! Reading a book makes me feel like Wang Zibo!

After the book was released in a certain month of a certain year, Zha Liu heard that someone in the world was naming the characters in the new book and made shocking remarks:

I got promoted and have no time to update╯▂╰. Is there any acquaintance who asked the author to retire early.

"Little fox, what gifts have you prepared for the Dragon Boat Festival?" As soon as Jiu'er entered the door, she saw her biggest enemy in Shangqing Kindergarten - Zhu Yaoguang running over and asking her for a gift for the Dragon Boat Festival. "Canyaoguang, I won't tell you." Jiuer stuck out his tongue and ran to the other side. "Brother Pingan, what gifts have you prepared for Children's Day?" Jiu'er looked at Chen Pingan who was reading a book with his short hands. "This, this is confidential." Chen Pingan paused and said with a blushing face. "Hehe, am I the only one who has this gift from Brother Ping'an?" Jiu'er said with a smile. "Yes, yes." Chen Pingan thought that everyone is different. "Chen Pingan, what about mine?" Upon hearing the sound, Zhu Yaoguang jumped up to Chen Pingan and looked at Chen Pingan like Jiuer, holding hands. "This..." Chen Ping'an didn't know how to answer for a while. Fortunately, the class bell just rang at this time. "Teacher Gu, where did Teacher Zheng go?" Chen Pingan's mood suddenly dropped when he saw that it was not Teacher Zheng who came to class but Teacher Zhou leading a stranger. "Teacher Zheng is taking a break. This is the new teacher hired from the Eagle Sect." Teacher Gu explained. "Students, have a good time in class. I have to go to another class, so I'll go over there first." After Teacher Gu left, Chen Pingan and others listened to Teacher Wu for half a class before seeing it start class. "Teacher, you drew it wrong." After listening for a while, Chen Ping'an couldn't help but stood up and reminded him when he saw that the lecture was getting more and more weird and even obvious mistakes appeared later. "What's wrong? Children, don't talk nonsense. This textbook was carefully compiled by Teacher Jiancao and I." Wu Yong, who was talking enthusiastically, said cheerfully. "The direction of the Five Red Flags is wrong. The first star is on the left and not on the top." Chen Pingan said. "I think this direction is better!" Hao Yong said angrily. "Really?" A voice appeared out of thin air. "Grandpa Xue!" Chen Pingan shouted excitedly when he saw Xue Dingyuan appeared. "Ping An, remember what I said, kill to protect lives." After Xue Dingyuan finished speaking, he turned Wu Yong into nothingness with a wave of his hand, along with the things that should not have appeared. "I'm going to take care of something first. Ping An, you guys go to the medicine garden to play. I'll give you a day off today on Children's Day." "Okay, Grandpa Xue." Chen Ping'an nodded excitedly. "Ping An, why are there no classes today?" Mr. Luo asked when he saw Chen Ping An running over with two little girls. "Oh, Grandpa Xue called us here and said he would give us a day off for Children's Day." Chen Pingan let go of Jiu'er and Yaoguang's hands a little embarrassed. "I almost forgot that today is Children's Day, here is a gift for you." Mr. Luo conjured three carrot dolls like a magic trick. "It's so cute, thank you, Grandpa Luo." Jiu'er looked at the doll in his hand and said with a smile. "Haha, as long as you like it, I won't play with you if I have something else to do." Mr. Luo laughed happily. "Grandpa Luo, walk slowly." "By the way, brother Ping'an, what is the gift you prepared for us?" Jiuer looked at Chen Pingan while holding the carrot doll. Zhu Yaoguang could not help but look at Chen Pingan. "Hey, I made it by myself. It's not as good-looking as Grandpa Luo's." Chen Pingan held a gift box in each hand. "Hee hee, Brother Ping An is humble again. This little fox is so cute." Jiuer jumped up and took the gift from Chen Ping An's hand. When he opened it, he saw a red little fox doll, which looked very cute. "Thank you, Junior Master." Zhu Yaoguang looked at the sword fairy in his hand and a smile appeared on his cold face. "This is a gift for you." Zhu Yaoguang put the gift box in Chen Ping'an's hand, and then made a look like you would love to open it. "Where's mine, Zaiyaoguang?" Jiuer curled his lips and asked. "Where's mine from the fox?" Zhu Yaoguang asked. "Hmph, brother Ping'an, this is the gift I prepared for you. Open it quickly and see how it goes." Jiu'er snorted and did not respond but took out the gift to Chen Ping'an. Chen Pingan looked at the gifts in his hands and opened them at the same time. Coincidentally, they were both a little boy holding a little girl, but one of the protagonists was not the same person. "Chip!" Jiuer and Zhu Yaoguang said to each other at the same time. "This is for you." After the two of them turned their heads, they turned around and said in unison. One of the gifts given by the two people was a naive little fox, and the other was a proud-looking Yaoguang Sword Immortal. It was obvious that the gifts they gave each other and the gifts given to Chen Pingan were equally thoughtful. Aesthetics begins with dolls. #Six Day Guardian Children#