The Great Sui Sage: Starting by Saving Myself from the Heavenly Prison

I felt awkward after reading the first few chapters. The evidence was conclusive and needed to be questioned immediately. Now that there are new logical questions and new possible certifications, why should I be questioned immediately... What's funny is that incense was burned to determine the review time. Besides, according to that law, the question was asked to be questioned immediately instead of Qiu Hou. Why not start here?

I finished the book in one go, and I don't feel that there are many bad points. It's just that the personality of the protagonist is different from the current description in the book. I personally feel that the personality of a top boxing champion in the world should not be so casual, as if he is really like a sixteen-year-old boy. Moreover, many of the foreshadowings in the book are too superficial, just like some original martial arts novels. Especially in the first hundred chapters, you can certainly feel the author's progress. After all, the author said it was his first time writing. At present, this book has a lot of room for improvement, but there are also many hidden dangers. I hope the author can improve it in future writing. I'm just an ordinary reader. If you ask me to write, I will definitely not be able to write it. If I ask you to give me some in-depth suggestions, these are just some of my most intuitive feelings after reading this book. Please forgive me if there is any disagreement.

I've read eight or nine chapters, why do I feel like I'm watching someone on duty?

Chapter 4 is a bit toxic. Don't ask why, the emperor personally witnessed it and sent eunuchs to watch it. The three divisions will interrogate so many big people doing small things under the nose? 😑As long as the pig's feet say that someone is tampering with the stool, doesn't it prove that someone is trying to harm him?

Really great! There are people who can't help but laugh, children who are affectionate, loyalty and pride, and feelings of family and country. The fight scenes are particularly exciting and unconventional. The part where Moon Shadow broke through was shocking and touching... I think this book deserves to be read by more people.

It's been two days since I read the latest chapter, and I'm still not finished. The plot is so tight that I can't stop.

It's okay, why doesn't anyone comment?

Getting to a climax

Not bad, this name is better

Well written, it caught my eye.