Dominating All Worlds: Starting from The Unofficial History of the Martial Arts World

It can be seen that the author is trying hard to imitate Gu Long's writing style, especially in the latest chapter. Unfortunately, without that writing style, it seems nondescript and embarrassing. The author might as well write in his own writing style. After all, writing about Gu Long's fandom does not necessarily have to be written in Gu Long's writing style. Gu Long's writing style It's not just writing a few stories that are not only good, but most people can't grasp his writing style at all. The story is obviously very attractive, but he insists on imitating others, and the result is nondescript and annoying. The author should put more thought into making up the story, and just write in a normal writing style.

The protagonist has a variety of unique magical skills, plus cheats. There is no one who only practices one kind of martial arts. Is the author overpowering the protagonist, or is the protagonist just too useless?

The beginning is good, the writing is good, and it is very interesting, but after the destruction of Renyi Village, the plot really takes a sharp turn, completely stallion style. Especially to Zhu Qiqi, he said that he would not force her, but then pretended to have a relationship with Zhu Qiqi. In ancient times, what was the difference between ruining a woman's integrity and forcing a woman to do it? I just want to watch a martial arts fan, hoping to see heroes fighting for supremacy and heroic spirit. The protagonist starts off well, but suddenly turns into a sleazy one. I'm really disappointed. Personal opinion, don't spray if you don't like it 😅😅😅

The golden finger of the protagonist, even if he cannot defend himself righteously, he should not resort to evil deeds. Gu Long's novels are very idealistic. No matter how much martial arts practice and deep internal strength this kind of person has, he will never be the enemy of Xiao Li's flying knife. In the world of low martial arts, you can't even stick to your heart, and the flaws in your soul are so big that there are no limits. When it comes to the middle martial arts and high martial arts like Huang Yi, it is estimated that killing him is no different from killing a dog by a small master. Either write about Jin Yong's world where internal strength is king, or write about Gu Long's idealistic world which can only appear nondescript.

Why do you feel that this protagonist is both responsible and established? More and more pulled

A villain but also a bit of a virgin, naughty

The protagonist is dead? I found that the protagonist seemed to be dead, as if there was no such person. I thought it was the protagonist who defeated the future, but it turned out that Mrs. Ye Di defeated the future. The fun of the fan fiction is nothing more than the appearance of the saint in front of people and the beauties of the original work. It is not that you translate the original work. The point of fun is that you are not involved at all. If you don't take action in the siege of Laoshan, you will still not take action in future appearances. You might as well die and let the original characters continue to act.

I'm still waiting for everyone's feedback to see if I want to pursue it! What attracts me to this book: The early part of the Happy King where I was struggling to survive, and I had to be careful in order to survive, which is more vivid What I gradually stopped reading later: 1. When I got to the peerless double pride, I felt like a licking dog, and I had to show off my IQ to lick the two women. 2. Personality: the protagonist's The feeling of his character to me may not be as good as that of a hypocrite like Yue Buqun. How can he conquer so many villains in Gu Long's works? Anything can happen in Gulongjianghu. In order to survive, the waiter may poison the food and then feast on it, and die together with the so-called master. In general, the portrayal of the protagonist is relatively failed. There is neither the domineering power of Li Chenzhou who dominates the world, and power is the fist; nor the refreshing feeling of strategizing.

He didn't kill decisively, he only saw that he couldn't walk after seeing a woman.

There should be no distinction between third-rate masters and second-rate masters, just like Jin Yong and Gu Long. You can only know who is stronger after playing against him! Can a third-rate player outperform a second-rate player? If you can't beat it, then it's just a matter of comparing yourself to someone else. If you can beat it, classification is meaningless.