
I Became an Immortal in Journey to the West
我于西游做天仙
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- 494k Words
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- Cultivation
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- Male
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- Mythic Cultivation
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- 2y ago
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I just ran away, but I couldn't figure it out and came back again, so I had to give a bad review. I won't say that this thing is trying to sell it like a sheep, but the key is just one word, chaos. The above can be said to be a world view, and you can write whatever you want. After all, every book has its own setting! This is not a judgment. Even if the title of the book says Journey to the West, it is not easy to judge the book based on the setting of Journey to the West. But the setting you wrote earlier will become nonsense once you meet the protagonist. Whatever the protagonist wants to do, the setting must make way for him. As long as the protagonist wants, he will be able to do it. Everyone is blind. As long as the protagonist thinks, everything he comes into contact with must serve the interests of the protagonist. It is completely illogical. Originally, I looked at the previous setting, plus the protagonist comes into contact, thinking that the protagonist will always grow, and it is not just escaping and hugging. It is originally written as Journey to the West! Pulling up the Seven Saints, and then raising the banner of revolution, can also be seen. It is written, alas, it is indeed not just running away and hugging the thigh. He not only runs away and hugs the thigh, but also adds to follow the crowd, bully the weak and fear the strong, hypocritical and perfunctory. I thought about becoming stronger, but what I wrote before turned out to be bullshit. I did not become someone else's dog, I just became a cheating dog, a slave to power. Not to mention more, the protagonist is rubbish, the logic is gone, and the intention is not lofty enough, so what else is there to watch? Bullshit?
Can you read the original work of Journey to the West? I beg those of you who wrote Journey to the West to understand the world view of Journey to the West! ! ! Being a monster basically guarantees that you are a bad person. If you don't do bad things, do good deeds, and accumulate merit, even spirits will ascend to become immortals. The twenty-eight stars are all spirits practicing to become immortals. But if they descend to earth privately and do bad things, they will become monsters. Therefore, in the world view of Journey to the West, as long as someone is named a monster, he must be bad, it's just how bad he is. Secondly, the talk about the dispute between Buddhism and Taoism is really disgusting. Journey to the West implements the idea of the unity of the three religions from beginning to end. It only needs to be written at the beginning of each line, I advocate the unity of the three religions, and I am still fighting here.
What the hell, as a demon king, you want to steal money from an individual, punish your subordinates for such a trivial matter, the demon king who wrote about your sister is not domineering at all, punish his own subordinates when the heavenly soldiers come to fight, and the fighting process is linked to the sky.
Personally, I think deciding where to sit depends on your thoughts, and whether you can do it or not depends on your strength Let's ignore thoughts and just talk about strength. Because you have become a monster, you can protect your shortcomings and even conflict with the human race. The ideal is very full and the reality is very skinny. Do you have the strength to be a demon king who is against humans? There are so many big guys from the Taoist and Buddhist families in the human race. One is younger and the other is older. Sun Wukong is so awesome, but in the end he was kicked against the steel plate... Does he have the strength to compete with the human race now? No, since there is no such thing, then just develop slowly, make friends from far away and attack close by, dominate the demon clan internally, and make good friends with the human race externally. In the end, you will have capital. No matter which path you want to take, this is the best route. Secondly, it is not a bad thing to learn from the human race to restrain their subordinates and establish order. The more barbaric and undisciplined they are, the more they will be defeated by the human race. If they can really go against the will of nature, this novel world has long been owned by the monster race, and they still have to learn the tricks of the human race in order to become bigger and stronger. Think about the example of Fengshen Jiejiao. Jiejiao can be said to be the strongest organization of the demon clan. However, as a result, they were unable to restrain their subordinates and gave them all away. If you have to learn to change and blindly obey your nature, you will never be able to fight against the human race if you cannot get rid of the stubbornness in your heart. The true temperament of the demon can be retained, but the viciousness and stubbornness are not necessary. I hope the author will write a demon clan with a human heart and lead the demon clan to take a different route. Human thoughts and demon talents should be the protagonist's strongest golden finger. The book written in this way is the most interesting, no matter from the perspective of three views or logic. Only relying on golden fingers to defeat hundreds of tricks, such a protagonist is just a cheat to become a spirit, and it is also ruined at the beginning.
Two sticks vibrate the sky
Why can't you cultivate the physical body through cultivation? Do Qi-refiners only cultivate the soul? Then after attaining the Golden Immortal, you can still be immortal. Why can't the physical body be strengthened? Daluo Jinxian can play with the timeline, so why don't the Qi-refiners strengthen their physical bodies at all?
What did you write? Dou Mu Yuanjun was beaten by a monkey? Do you think too highly of monkeys? This is a bit too arrogant to write now. No matter what kind of protector or immortal way, if you can live for such a long time and have such a high prestige, how many of the so-called golden immortals you wrote about can be under your command? Then why is he called Doumu Yuanjun? If it is written like this, is it necessary for Heaven to exist? Just a monkey, jumping up and down, no rules
Humans are human beings, and monsters are monsters. It is impossible to treat you as a companion or as a pet just because you are being treated as a monster. If you don't sit up straight, you're looking for death.
I don't understand the point of writing about demons? Humans eat all living beings in the world and enslave and slaughter all living beings in the world. Why can't all living beings in the world eat humans? Why can't people and property be robbed? Since you wrote a demon as the protagonist, you have to think about the demon. If you don't dare or don't want to write, then you write a human protagonist, but why do you choose a demon with a human heart? I don't understand what you are writing
At the starting point, most of the Journey to the West fans are writing about the ancient novels under the cover of Journey to the West, which is not bad, and it can be regarded as maintaining the vitality of the classics (although Journey to the West does not need it). However, the second hypothesis is the second hypothesis, and the conspiracy theory is a conspiracy theory. It's really different from the original work. Some people in the comment area are eager to demote Sun Wukong as useless. I think this behavior is a bit disgusting and excessive, using the "truth" from the literature I don't know where to smear the original character.
When writing about Journey to the West, don't focus on The Legend of the Gods and The Great Desolation. This type of novel is almost boring to read. Journey to the West is the plan of heaven and Buddhism. The worldview of Journey to the West is that the Jade Emperor is the highest rank. After the battle power of the saint Hongjun is revealed, he finally fails. Many people who write novels insist on adding saints and Hongjun. Is it necessary? In the end, it can become a nondescript ancient novel
If you really want to be a human, then go through reincarnation and become a human being. Humans are not like human beings or monsters. What the hell is that? To put it bluntly, the people in the world of Journey to the West are completely different from you. One is made of mud, and the other is evolved from a monkey. From a species perspective, they are completely two species.
What is written is incomprehensible. What's the point of occupying a physical body to practice and telling others that you are not yourself? It's better to restart without being concerned about cause and effect.
The character design is not good, the author should try again
Excuse me, writing a Journey to the West must have something to do with the prehistoric times.
Hahaha, no way, others are Golden Chapter Three, you are...
This is a disgusting thing. When you become a monster, all you can think about is the human race. 😰😰😰 How on earth can this kind of evil book be reported and removed from the shelves?
Give the protagonist a picture
The entire Journey to the West is about the issue of organization. . .