Mortals: Start with the Heavenly Bones

I always felt that it was preaching or talking to myself too much. Chapter 7 or 8 only talked about the undercover "Goldfinger" timeline. In fact, it was almost shown in the first chapter. Chapter 7 or 8 was written abruptly.

Can the author have more female protagonists? And don't be original😁😁

The protagonist's thoughts are the author's thoughts. Don't engage in some intellectual manipulation in order to force the plot. The protagonist is now faced with two choices: joining the seven sects or becoming a casual cultivator. Being a casual cultivator has no access to foundation-building elixirs and exercises, and is not suitable for dogs. It means that the original Dayan Jue Spring of Spiritual Eyes, There is no chance of teleportation array. What is more realistic is that Gushuang Puming did ask you to come to the seven sects as an undercover agent. He knows your identity and your life is in the hands of others. He always pays attention to your information. You want to be a casual cultivator. If you don't join the seven sects, isn't it a rebellion? This is not a way out. For you to be undercover, you have to be more useful and perform better. It is no big deal. You have to have a high status to provide key information to be worthy of being used. Pure is troublesome. In the end, you still have to join the seven sects. As for the fear that Xiang Zhili will find out about the physique of seizing the body and refining the body to incarnate pure He is suffering from paranoia due to persecution. It is unrealistic. Seizing the body does not increase his lifespan. Can he be allowed to ascend to the spirit world? It is estimated that Seizing the body will be dead before he can practice to become a god. Refining the incarnation is purely redundant and does not help at all. There is no opponent in the human world, and there is no Xuantian Spiritual Treasure that is useful. Join the seven sects and have one in the Immortal Ascension Conference. , Senior Brother Lu can get two or three for absolute foundation building by planning, and it is not the spiritual root qualification of the old demon. If he does not participate in the Blood Forbidden Land, he will retreat to the Spring of Spiritual Eyes for two or three years, and then Lao Xiang will leave. After all, he is here to find the Ascension Node, and he cannot stay for a long time. He will devise a chance to arrange a technique. , You can run around and mess up the sea of stars without being threatened by Gu Shuangpu. When I return from having a baby, I won't eat beef. It's not up to you to decide whether to destroy Gu Shuangpu. If you are stronger, you can repay the kindness of the Mulan people. Why do you have so many choices? Don't engage in some plots just for the sake of a quick inspiration plot. It's very intellectually depressing.

How could such a birth not be banned? As a time traveler, you have a bullshit feeling about your family and country. The best strategy is to quickly build the foundation and then befriend Han Li and teleport to the Chaos Star Sea for development. Banning it from such a distance is useless. Don't keep talking about licking Han Li. During the insurance period, there is no need to risk gambling on the cause and effect line. The alien spirit root is also familiar with the plot. As long as you have some brains to practice, you don't need to use plug-ins, at least until you have enough resources to transform into gods. Everyone who has read the original work of Mortals will know it!

As a person who listens to novels, I feel like it's grinding.

Really good at water. Chapter 3 explains the plot of more than ten chapters.

The author wrote the novel without thinking and made random changes. If seizing the body didn't work in the spiritual world, those high-level monks would no longer have to fear the great catastrophe. If they couldn't survive it, they would just continue to seize the body indefinitely, wouldn't they be able to live indefinitely? There are also two holy beasts on the grassland who went to the lower world to escape from danger. It was clearly stated in the original book,

Good guy, too much nonsense

I only read the introduction. Was the protagonist Fenglinggen sent out to be a spy? Mu Lan was so bullied by Tu Wu and Tian Nan that she sent Fengling Gen out to be a spy.

Is the protagonist afraid of being gifted and seizing his life? How much life does he have left? It's like your body can ascend.

Come on, write well, don't lick Old Demon Han and let him come and lick you. Get the Heavenly Thunder Bamboo in advance, and get the Chuanshun Formation in advance and repair it. Run away to Luan Xinghai and let the Old Demon play slowly in Tiannan. Later, when you come back, let the Old Demon come to lick you. If you want the Heavenly Thunder Bamboo, let him exchange it for the mutant Wind Thunder Bamboo.

Damn it, you actually wrote the mortal Jiaolong article, how dare you be an eunuch?

Excellent product, but it does put too much emphasis on something, so that the conjecture and psychology in paragraphs are too watery. The emphasis can be changed in another way.

This book assumes that spiritual skills require physical transformation to learn, which makes the plot less expanded. My understanding of spiritual arts is to imitate the supernatural powers of monsters and beasts, with great instantaneous power. Before Yuanying, it was stronger. After Yuanying, even if it is a magical power or spell, the masters in the books after Yuanying mostly use magic weapons. A golden elixir is just an instant spiritual spell. Other spiritual spells are more powerful and faster than spells. The natal spiritual technique uses a kind of spiritual material to add formation patterns, which is more suitable for poor grasslands. It is equivalent to a powerful beggar's version of a magic weapon, but it has multiple functions. Normally, the Nine Nations Alliance has been at war with the grasslands for many years. It is impossible for local monks not to imitate spiritual arts. If they do not imitate, they may spend a lot of time and have no magic weapon that is convenient and easy to use. During the Qi training period, there are people who use Nongyan Jue, and many of them can't level up a bunch of pill-forming foundations. If you don't study the secret techniques and spells, you won't get any results at all, right? The Raikage Raikage in Naruto is quite suitable for transformation into spiritual arts. It has defense and can train the body, the attack is not low and it can accelerate. It is a powerful spell during the pill formation stage. The five Hanyan monks in Xiaoji Palace can help people upgrade to become gods. It would be reasonable to get three Leilinggens to help people upgrade their Nascent Soul and increase the probability of 20 to 30%. There is no need for the elite disciples of the Yellow Maple Valley to rush to the Sea of ​​Chaos Stars immediately. It is not too late to control the teleportation array and upgrade to Core Formation in Tiannan. You can also buy more local specialties. The relationship between the elite disciples and the sect can be better. Helping Lei Wanhe create a cultivation board for Lei Kai and asking the Murong brothers to study the localization of Lei Kai. Then find a Leilinggen monk to help Huang Maple Valley get Lei Wanhe into Yuanying. This can also be regarded as the cultivation of elite disciples in Huang Maple Valley.

The protagonist does not want to expose his special physical condition and leaves the country of Yue. In order to save Xin Ruyin, he was directly exposed. There are no restrictions or restrictions on them, and they are not allowed to take the oath of inner demons. Just relying on their conscience to bet their lives, Shinroku. So why bother leaving Yue? Just let Xiang Zhili search for the soul.

There are already 30 photos of "Ocean, You Are All Water". I'm not interested in reading them anymore. Just stay in the bookshelf.

All book reviews are bad reviews. The author must continue to criticize and stick to his own opinion╮(¯▽¯)╭

The author adds more and more! You are really Braille, making it very difficult for us readers. Even if I want to give you a monthly ticket, it's hard to give you a monthly pass. Extra updates are the way to go.

Mortal Candle Dragon Kaitian, won't you update it?

Yeah, yeah, you are a magic weapon, you still have to forcefully get involved with Han Li. I hope I won't write a frustrated article. When trading, see how the bad author handles it. If you can't handle it well, just run away.

The advancement is too slow, there is no suspense at all, just like wandering around Tiannan, those battles are flat at first sight. You have the noble special effects of transforming into a god, and it is impossible for others at the same level to beat you. Anti-inflammatory still has a three-year contract. After writing thirty chapters, I still don't know what the protagonist wants to do. There is no sense of crisis in the protagonist. The protagonist's character is not likeable, and the undercover agent does not do undercover work. Is he a traitor or a prairie traitor?

No need to read Chapter 33, the entire chapter is devoted to introducing the exercises.

Original, well written, supportive

It's a bit interesting. Mulan's spiritual skills are the beginning. I will write more about various spiritual skills in the future. The other fans are all enhanced versions of the old devil's routines. It's boring to read too much.

The beginning of the Mulan people. . . . Interesting

Can the vitality of heaven and earth be used to cultivate elixirs? Can it be used to upgrade spiritual objects such as ores?

It's a bad batch, and it doesn't look good to have a single heroine.

I finished writing the last book, but you ended up being a eunuch. You are not kind, the author

Why did you choose Xin Ruyin as the heroine? Why not choose Sister Nie, the tea-blowing fairy, or something else?

I hope you will take a look and save it, thank you very much!