Traveling at the Same Time: Great Love to the Heavens

Nowadays, people writing fan fiction are too rigid. The original novel is like a historical record, while the fan fiction is like traveling through the real world. Fans need to dig out the content that is not recorded in the original work, and have relatively high requirements on reading comprehension. For example, they need to learn to choose between contradictions in the original work and write in their own style. If you don't have your own style, no matter how many novels you write, you'll still be stuck in the same place.

Try not to write about cultivating immortals. I think the previous book "Mortal" was directly persuaded to quit. Try to choose a system with similar combat power or a more inclusive system, so that it will not collapse.

It's bad luck to see Lu Mingfei in such a small state. Then a bunch of supporting characters are like a plague of bad luck, they talk nonsense every day, and they always have the three-piece package of youthful pain, forced stupidity, and self-deprecation.

Some readers asked me why it took me so long to write about one world? Because I think this is the style of Tong Chuan Liu Yuan Dian. I remember when I first read Duke's book, he traveled through 99 worlds at the same time. He was also the kind of person who would write dozens of chapters or even more for a story, tell the entire plot, and then switch worlds. I am self-aware and know that I cannot reach the level of that boss, but I am also more accustomed to that kind of narrative style. I can't write in a style that switches worlds three or four times in the first dozen chapters, and only writes three or four chapters for each world. So far. Douluo does have a plot of twenty or thirty chapters, but I have cut out about 10 chapters and deleted tens of thousands of words in the manuscript. Anyway, the ongoing story of Douluo World still needs a few days to wrap up and wrap up this episode. Then it will be transferred back to the world of Naruto, where dozens of chapters will be used to tell a complete event. Then the third world will be introduced, and then a cross-narrative will be carried out to advance the main line, and then a new world will be introduced. This process. This is probably the case. Of course, I will also have some new ideas or insights during the update process, and changes may occur. After all, I am not a mature writing master. I've made a lot of mistakes before, but now I'm just learning while eating. When I first started writing this book, I just wanted to write out some of the stories I thought about. But I didn't expect that the results this time were unexpectedly good, much better than I originally thought. This made me very stressed, and I started to have trouble sleeping at night. I have been deleting, revising and saving manuscripts in the past few days. First of all I will stick to my own design, but I will also listen to some useful suggestions. Thank you to all the friends who have supported the book since its inception until now, and also to the new friends who continue to join. Thank you for your support. ദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧

The protagonist had better have a brain. Don't be like other authors who always overwhelm the protagonist, which is too stupid.

The author's writing power is not enough. After a few chapters, the plot layout of Naruto Douluo Dragon Clan is actually good. The characters of the several protagonists are also distinct. It seems that whether they are strong or not is temporary, and whether they are handsome or not is a lifelong matter. But the writing is not strong enough. For example, in the Dragon Clan chapter, after reading the whole chapter, are there any big problems? In fact, there are not, but there are no memorable points, and there is no deep sense of involvement. There is no special feeling after reading it, it is very light.

It is said that Douluo is like a sewer. Soul masters need to kill beasts and obtain rings to upgrade. Breathing fire requires soul skills, but this is precisely its most powerful point. It is not written much in the novel, and no one pays attention to it. If you want to practice to become stronger, you have to practice in the winter, practice in the winter, and practice in the summer. The proficiency will become lower in the middle. If you don't have the understanding, you can't understand the heaven-level skills in front of you. Douluo does not need it. Soul rings and soul skills do not need to be practiced. They can be used with just a thought. The difference between a ten-year soul skill and a hundred thousand-year soul skill is only whether your physical fitness can bear it, and it will not regress just because you have not practiced for a period of time. It is of great benefit to ordinary people with insufficient qualifications and understanding, and even geniuses who are not so evil. This kind of beggar's version will never regress and is the most 🐮

Quickly change the world, the Dragon Clan chose a few pictures and they were nothing to see.

What I expect the protagonist to do in Naruto is to unify, not to hold the chuunin exam. In the world of Naruto, power is king, and politics is only an auxiliary after unification. If you do this now, it will be useless.

The tone set by the Dragon Clan is not very good. It's not cool enough. Wenqing is also not stable enough. You can go to Douluo Hokage. By the way, do you have any curses? 😁😁😁

Naruto is really too long, so it's not necessarily necessary to finish Naruto before writing about other worlds, right? It can be mixed with a little flavor from other worlds.

Why hasn't Naruto come to an end yet? There's no need to write the entire plot in one go.

Dragon Clan, please end it as soon as possible. It's too boring if you don't cause trouble.

No, buddy, Naruto isn't over yet? You are the same person, not the same person as Hokage?

The first thing I feel is praise, and what I seek is destruction. Born with both civil and military talents, but others cannot keep up with him, the world will be destroyed when he uses his talents. But does this suppress your own power? No, this talent was given to me by the world. If you just don't use your power, will you be ashamed of the world's love for you? So don't inhibit, don't suppress. Go all out, even if it completely destroys the world. Until the world is born with a lover who is strong enough to bear me. For some reason, I have a murderous intention towards everything in the world. When I grew up, I looked up information and found out that this is a protective measure for the human body. The flowers are in full bloom, but you can't help but pick them. The costume is beautiful, but I can't help but tear it into pieces. It is precisely because of extreme love that the intention to kill is born. It is precisely because of the intention to kill that it shows love to the extreme! This is the same as sitting on a cliff, staring down, and wanting to jump down. If you don't love yourself to the extreme, how can you want to die? Death to the most fundamental underlying rules of everything. The love of others is closely related to the feeling of destruction. I love her and am willing to destroy everything for her. But when others destroy me for what I love, can I deny that this is not love? So love is protection, protection is destruction, and destruction is love.

When will this dragon clan end?

I've finished reading it. It's pretty good among Jiujiu Liu. It's just that the writing in some places is too thin, like it's written in water.

When will the world change? I haven't ordered a single chapter of Dragon Clan yet.

Please end Dragon Clan as soon as possible. I feel like I should lose a lot if I continue reading.

I fucking want to see the protagonist kill all the Star Dou Forest.

Just don't play Wood Release. Wood Release is purely because of Asura's numerical value 😅

Dragon Clan, none of them are easy to write or read, or there is nothing to write about.

Spells have become more popular recently, so you can try to fight Nuo in the next world. The main character's spell can be copied from the sequel Bull Head, the spell is light, and the spell of killing intent can be obtained in space. The three super specialties are in the decisive battle in Shinjuku.

When the scrap flows out, so does the genius flow. It's my turn to suppress the invincible trend in the world!

The writing is really good Sometimes you really need to say something sexy The problem is that the dirty talk is a bit awkward There is no coolness at all If you can change this problem, the impression will be much better

This Star God is not the Star God of Destiny. I am talking about the Star God of the Taiyi Universe in the Blue and White Society's cosmology. He ascends to the tenth latitude and achieves perfect wisdom. He is a Star God at the super-super-super-single level.

I'm a little curious about eating Tsunade? Although it is a bit unethical, according to the domestic close relatives, it is already the fourth generation to get married. According to Naruto's world view, same-race marriage is quite common (it feels inexplicably exciting)

In the late Ming Dynasty, one could write about hunger and mourning

It is best not to write more than fifty chapters in a world in a time-traveling novel, otherwise it will become a fanfic, let alone just a plot. Even if you have to increase your combat power to end the old world later, you are not afraid, because the combat power of the time-traveling is to serve the plot. There are many people behind Feng Chaohuang's book, but the strength of the protagonist is still there In the normal stage, to put it bluntly, it is to set up a plot and then set the combat power to the peak of that plot, so that it will not be exhausted or collapse quickly. As for those shared settings, just ignore them and use them when it is changed to the advanced world later, and then skip the novice village and enter the middle plot.

The writing is quite good. If you update more, you will be rewarded. I'll give you the remaining tickets first.