Mortals: as Mortals, the System Is Broken!

I wonder if the author has an outline? After reading it so far, I feel that the pace is quite comfortable, and I hope there will be no problems in the future. Keep it up! ! 😎

Chapter 20, still playing house in Qixuanmen

With this talent, you shouldn't need to go to the Bloody Forbidden Land.

After reading dozens of books, basically most of the pseudo spiritual roots, a small part of the second and third spiritual roots, the foreign spiritual roots and a few heavenly spiritual roots are basically missing. I hope the Heavenly Spiritual Root is different. What kind of pseudo-celestial Spiritual Root is described? It won't be a double Spiritual Root by then 😒

You have to have your own opinions, and don't be too deliberate about the protagonist's plot. Basically, this is a success. The reason why most mortals die is because they are talented and have Foundation Establishment Pills but still have to go to the Bloody Forbidden Land. The key is that some go without taking Nangong, and taking Nangong is also a poisonous point.

The writing is so deliberate, you can even guess what the author will write next if you follow what the author writes. It is not about practicing Qi, joining the sect and then going to the Bloody Forbidden Land. In the middle, he builds a good relationship with Han Li and goes through a few moderately strong battles. Then he builds the foundation and goes to practice. It is just that he joins the sect and shocks everyone, builds a good relationship with Han Li and then takes off. If he has an idea in the middle, he can also open a harem.

I have completed more than 20 chapters in Qixuanmen, and I have completed 3 chapters in the entry examination. During the free period, I have completed so many chapters that the iron is broken.

Let's combine the original work with animation. After all, animation has the highest traffic now. Make money? Not shabby

Fighting Qi----Forging Stage (the stage before entering the Qi Training Period, this stage does not exist among mortals) Fighter-----condensing cyclones, corresponding to the Qi Training Period Dou Master-----Early Stage of Foundation Establishment Great Fighter-----Middle and Late Stage of Foundation Establishment Fighting Spirit------Fake Pill Dou Wang------Elixir Formation Stage Dou Huang------Nascent Soul Stage Dou Zong------Shen Transformation Stage Dou Zun------Void Refining Stage Half Saint------Void Refining Peak Dou Sheng------Fusion Stage Dou Emperor------Mahayana Stage

1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, it is sent directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?

All fellow Taoists are welcome to read!

The overall rhythm is okay so far. I like to read fanfics about Mortals and Dou Po, but there are really too few good ones. I hope the author can stick to it.

Pick up my new mortal book

Overall it's okay, but don't always emphasize it. It's best not to emphasize the protagonist's vagueness about the plot.

Uncle Huang is the number one productive force in online writing. Even if you copy and change the name, no one will know that you copied it. The master also wrote about the emperor's uncle who started his career

The writing is very good, come on, I will give you a monthly pass to encourage you. 🤓

When I read Chapter 10, I didn't seem to see what spiritual root it was.

Not bad, keep writing 🤭

Is Minoko stronger or Nanao Ayuki?

Thank you for collecting it and reading it!