Journey to the West: Catching the Hundred-Eyed Demon King at the Beginning

In the scene where the Bull Demon King turns into a melon farmer, Huang Li is still confident when he is caught stealing melons? Several spiders are still working together, what the hell? You walk to the street and see that there is no owner of the fruit shop, so you just take the fruit you want to eat and leave? After being discovered, the apprentice quarreled with the boss, and the master said, "It's wrong for an apprentice to take something without telling you, so I'll pay you ten times the compensation." Is the author wrong? After studying Taoism for so long, reciting the Heart Sutra for so many years, and experiencing worldly affairs for more than ten years, you still don't know that taking without telling is considered stealing? When the master didn't stop the education from the beginning, but instead stood up and made peace with the boss when the apprentice was caught stealing?

The author feels spring and makes the protagonist, a golden fairy, feel spring too

I am completely disappointed when I see this. As good as the writing is in the front, the writing in the back is as bad as it is. Starting from the part where the Bull Demon King turns into a melon farmer, there are many surprises in the following, and there are many paragraphs like "Journey to the West". There are so many poems in one chapter, and the feelings of the seven female disciples. The good guy killed them all with a heart sword and so on. I thought what happened to the Huang Li described earlier, and what kind of big plot is there to turn into a black man? What is the result? A heart sword has been cut off, and the relationship with Iron Fan Fairy is also written in an awkward way. What does it mean that after being together for a long time, a layer of window paper is missing? The transformation was so abrupt, it really got worse and worse. Later, it copied large sections of the original work of Journey to the West, inserting a sentence about the main character in the middle. According to what you wrote, I might as well read the original work. I was really disappointed. That's it. I originally ordered it all because of how good your previous writing was. I believe you, but you ended up feeding me a big lump in the back.

I'm really convinced. Why do I like writing about the Peach Blossom Tribulation so much? I've written about it four times. It's endless. It's so disgusting. I keep suppressing my realm. A ginseng fruit, Zhenyuan Great Immortal and other powerful preachers have not yet formed an elixir to become an immortal, and I have experience in becoming an immortal. What is this? My level has plummeted 😅

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Protagonist Lu Zhao: An indigenous person in the Jamfu world Gold Finger: Huangliang Immortal Wood, which allows people to enter Taoism in dreams, randomly experience the past and future, and even travel through the modern era (mainly to read the script). Current time point: 150 BC, the 7th year of the reign of Emperor Jing of the Western Han Dynasty. Timeline: Currently, the monkey is serving as the Monkey King in the sky. A hundred years later, he will cause a riot at the Peach Festival and return to heaven. In 8 AD, Wang Mang usurped the Han Dynasty and made trouble in the Heavenly Palace. He was trapped under the Five Elements Mountain until 639 AD, which was the thirteenth year of Zhenguan, when he began to study for scriptures and was rescued by Tang Monk. The lower realm of Dapeng was suppressed in the same year as the monkey. It swallowed up all the people and animals in the lion and camel kingdom, and became sworn sworn friends with the two demons, the green lion and the white elephant. The rest will not be mentioned for now. If you are interested, you can leave a message in the comment area. In addition, I saw that some readers felt that the timeline was confusing, maybe because they confused reality and dreams. Reality has always been during the Western Han Dynasty, and dreams were either in the future or in the past. They were erratic and could experience anything. Including seeing the original work, studying under Wuchao, etc., Everything happened in a dream and has nothing to do with reality, so we must distinguish it clearly. By the way, did I really write so cryptically (scratching my head)? Finally, if you have anything you don't understand or feel inappropriate, you can write it down below. I don't set a comment threshold. I will reply as soon as I see it. Whether it's a discussion, a question, or a comment, as long as it doesn't involve personal attacks, I or other readers will not be banned. Discuss rationally and pay attention to quality 🙂

One of the most disappointing books, no matter how much I loved it at first, I hate it now

Will you spend money to watch Journey to the West later?

I don't want to read it even if it's free, the later writing is so disappointing

I don't know why, but I always feel that there is a big difference in the writing style before and after. The writing in the first part is smooth and flowing, and the wording and sentences are really good. The second part has the feel of a normal cultivation novel. You can read it, but I always feel that it is much inferior to the previous one.

I have read Chapter 17 so far. The quality of this novel is really good. What masterpieces are you reading in the comment section? Isn't this enough?

It started to feel disgusting, so I forced myself to suppress the protagonist.

Aboriginal, so jumping, so abstract?

The quality is quite high. Fellow Taoists, don't be fooled by the reviews. Come in and take a look.

The idea is good, but the plot is a bit slow

I didn't understand what the new chapters were about. I picked up a lot of magic weapons at Wuzhuang Temple and got acquainted with them. Later, I was taught a lesson by the Bull Demon King, both forehand and backhand. I didn't mean that I had to kill the Bull Demon King in reverse, but it was too frustrating, right? Do you still choose to fight hard when you know you can't beat him? If you choose to slow down the progress because you feel that it is difficult to write Reverse Journey to the West after finishing it, then it is really difficult to criticize. I won't update it for the time being, and I'll check out everyone's book reviews later.

Don't you want Princess Iron Fan? I won't watch it if there is no heroine

These newly updated chapters are not good to read. The book written by The Disciple of the Bodhi Sea feels like a cultivation novel. The sense of fragmentation is too strong. It doesn't have the fairytale flavor of the opening chapter. It's crazy.

He could easily kill Dapeng, but was beaten by the Bull Demon King? This combat power...

Wrong? ? Your seven apprentices were cut off by your sword?

Today's book review trend is declining, and confusion between right and wrong is due to the author's failure to update the book. If you can write thousands of words a day, you will keep away evil spirits from afar and keep good friends close to you. This virtue will be enough to enlighten the world. It has been said that calves are born in sheep prisons, and when they grow up, they behave like sheep. It is not appropriate for you to live in the center of online writing, with your pen in the palm of your hand, yet you are so lazy in your work. The prosperity of the starting point is based on the diligent renewal of old chapters. If you stop writing and do not continue, your emotions will be depressed, your body and mind will be exhausted, and you will abandon the original and pursue the end. If things continue like this, there is a risk of unforeseen events. A husband who has become a famous author will be well paid for his manuscripts and will not be disturbed by gossip, because he can speak well; a frustrated person, who has no support for his livelihood, is underestimated by his family, because he is close to slander. May you think twice! There is one thing for the author to mourn, and six things for the author to lament. Since ancient times, speaking of things cannot move people unless they are straightforward, but if they are too thorough, they are close to slander. You should pay close attention to this. Isn't it sad that those who are lazy in renewing will disappear in the world of literature soon, only to cause harm to future generations; if future generations fail to take warning, they will be harmed again by those who come after them?

You don't want to make it clear in advance whether there is a female protagonist in the novel you wrote or in the outline you compiled. You don't know if there is a female protagonist in the novel you wrote? It's just because you can't bear to have a female protagonist or the few subscriptions and monthly tickets that don't have a female protagonist... It's an Iron Fan Fairy and a female apprentice. You can tell me directly if there is a female protagonist.

I've read 400 chapters, but now I can't stand it anymore and the writing is getting worse and worse. It's so disappointing.

No matter how much you like it in the early stage, you will be disappointed in the later stage I don't understand the author's intention. In the later stage, the protagonist disappears and I just write Journey to the West Is this considered plagiarism? It's still unfinished.

The Bull Demon King turns into a melon farmer and things really start to fly here.

How should I put it? The subject matter is very good. The emotions of the characters are too stereotyped. It's like reworking Journey to the West.

Kagyu Rinpoche? And destroyed the five Buddhas? Finally mobilized the masses in Uzang to change the world? Seeking death?

I found that there is an ancient plot of killing love and proving the truth in the book review? Will there be many similar poisonous points in the follow-up? The second question is to discuss the plot. The protagonist holding a wooden knot in the beginning should be a yellow beam, right, and the title is also a yellow beam. So the protagonist's dream is simply a golden finger, or is it a hidden clue? There can't be a back and forth echo at the end. Everything about the protagonist's journey to the west is just a dream, so I won't try it as soon as possible.