Immortal Light

The title of the book can be said to be excellent. I haven't read the introduction. The writing is okay, but I still hope that the author can improve his writing skills. To be honest, I was not satisfied after reading four chapters.

Damn it, I finally waited for you. Fortunately, I didn't give up 😭😭😭 From Shiji to First Crow, I have been following up. Since Yiren was abandoned by the author and stopped updating, I have been coming here from time to time to see if there are any new works. Now it is true that people have searched for him hundreds of times. Suddenly looking back, that person was there, in a dimly lit place.

Brother, how do I feel? You are a low-level Conferred God 🤤. You are planning to keep walking on this road. Conferred Gods, gods, monsters, strangers, what are you planning to do? Behind you are a thousand-year-old demon + a thousand-year-old fairy.

Speaking of which, Zhunti, the lead in the original work of Fengshen, is a really good person, except for a little bit of lip service, right? I came to the rescue and couldn't bear to see more and more people die. I feel that my character is at the forefront among the leader level (by the way, I think the leader with the lowest character is Tong Tian)

The Conferring God Practitioner came, but the dozens of people who were grinding and chirping made no progress at all.

I am an old reader. If you start with a few thousand monthly tickets and then turn into a few hundred monthly tickets, I advise the author to cut it off. Obviously, you have wrongly positioned this novel. It is a novel about gods fighting. If you want to highlight martial arts, you should write a good system. Even if you can't find it yourself, you can copy one. You obviously have not constructed a complete martial arts system yourself, so you have written it very well. . . . Simple (I can't explain it), you can have 500 monthly tickets now because of the support of the previous books

Can the Taoist ancestor in this Conferred God be able to break stones with his bare hands?

After looking at the catalog, are you just practicing martial arts without becoming a great teacher?

I just watched one or two things about it at the beginning. My sister is stronger than the protagonist. Why doesn't my sister participate? After all, the status of women in the Zhou Dynasty was not low.

Kaneko, don't you think the content is too flat and doesn't have any explosive points? Compare it to First Crow, with the same number of chapters, how does it feel to read?

Both collection and recommendation votes are required, haha😃

Kill the Twelve Golden Immortals, play with Yang Jian, play with Nezha, tease Yang Jian's sister, find a city to guard the gate, defeat the weak with the strong, and continue to grow, this is how to become a god

Brother, it's not like brothers are picking on you. What you wrote is about conferring gods, and King Zhou's two sons have appeared. You can't still practice martial arts in Novice Village.

Is this too watery? If the protagonist doesn't upgrade to this level, what will he do with Da Ji Bao?

When did you start cultivating immortality and why do you keep practicing martial arts?

I'll go, and there's only one. 😭😭😭😭😭

The two updates every day are unstable, and I'm afraid there won't be any updates today. The updates are a bit slow, author. 😭

It's too slow. Why write so much about ordinary things?

Shi Ji finished reading the book directly online. First Crow updated a chapter in 10 days and a half. The update of the book before it was put on the shelves was so random.

The description of swallowing saliva is a bit too much, can you write it in another way?

There are 64 pictures. I don't know what the main line is.

It's so good that I can't stop watching it. It can be said that I found something good in the many responses. Fortunately, I didn't listen to other comments. People nowadays are too impetuous and just want to read cool articles.

The writing is powerful and powerful, and the Shiji one is really good. I also liked Shiji very much and kept reading it.

Are you still focusing on martial arts after more than eighty chapters?

I estimate that in the follow-up, the protagonist will become more powerful, and then get to know the prince. Later, the prince marries his sister, and then the protagonist will help the Shang Dynasty in the Conferring God War, and then blah blah blah, after the conferring of gods, the book will end.

Since you are a time traveler, the fantasies in novels can become reality. Don't forget that this is the Conferred God, and there are even incredible gods. It is normal to do something else, such as the prison-suppressing power of gods and elephants, and what else, thoughts, past lives, Taoist Eight Divine Spells Buddhist scriptures, and talismans. King Kong is indestructible, Qi and blood are like dragons, martial arts golden elixir, as long as the power is strong, who says that immortals cannot be beaten to death?

The writing is very good. I like books like this. I can read more.

Borrowing the building to promote the new book "Mystical Powers Begin by Gathering Beasts and Adjusting Birds"

After reading it for a long time, I thought it was a martial arts novel! It wasn't until Emperor Xin offered incense that I realized it was a conferring of gods!

Hurry up, hurry up, hurry up, I am Yuan Ge, I want to be the first to become a god