There Is a Progress Bar in My Cultivation of Immortality

First of all, I want to complain about the title of this Pujie book. If I hadn't seen the recommended article in other forums, I wouldn't have clicked to read it Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The world background is considered to be a genre of cultivating immortals, but it is not like some poorly written novels about cultivating immortals from the genre that have the wrong style of painting. The characters are well drawn, and the setting in this book that spiritual practice will gradually lose humanity but cannot give up is very eye-catching, and it also makes many small characters worthy of detailed writing 3. The sects cultivate immortality, partial to mortals + group portraits, but it is not like some group portraits where the protagonist disappears just after writing, so the rhythm is well controlled 4. The cultivation methods of each sect and even the changes in the essence of life are really different, unlike traditional immortality books, it feels like the magic weapons used and the attributes of moves are different 5. The average IQ of the characters is high 6. Snakes are cute Disadvantages (not so much shortcomings as screening readers): 1. The common shortcomings of mortals, the main theme of killing and killing, plus the book is set to have moral disputes starting from the middle and low levels, so students who want to see the fairy-like manifestation of the saints in the world can give up 2. Students who want to watch happy cultivation, pretending to be slapped in the face, and system cheats can also give up. This system is just a progress bar + skill analysis, which has no real help for combat effectiveness. Snakes are the real cheats 3. The protagonist is a real old coin. There are not many plots where the protagonist and the enemy are tough. Most of them are ideas and ideas. 4. As far as cultivating immortals are concerned, there is really a lot of content about the political struggle of the dynasty To put it simply, this is a masterpiece with a relatively delicate writing style, a more thoughtful setting, and a large world view. If it can maintain the standard, I can expect to finish the book Immortal Grass... But why on earth would it choose such a crappy title? I don't understand.

The first religion (penance) Cult: The first day (characteristics: self-destruction, making fake spirits (not easy to kill), artificial spiritual veins, using people to refine root bones) Taiyin Cult evil cultivation (characteristics: refining corpses, using the spirit of the netherworld to refine flesh and blood) 1. Incident in Ningyuan County, Mozhou Road: Cause: Passing by to improve the root bones Overview of the incident: slightly (indirectly caused Mozhou Road Rebellion) Harvest: Got to know Feng Miao (a disciple of the Zhenyang Sect) and Cheng Ji (a disciple of the Shangdan Sect, who failed to enter the country after entering the country), and his bones were promoted from the middle to the top 2. Shu County Incident: Reason: Feng Miao asked for help Overview of the incident: Feng Miao was tracking the demon clan for human trafficking and asked Wang Ping to persuade the Shu County Government to help search the mountains. The county magistrate of Shu County, Shen Long, had Question (he later committed suicide), and the search in the mountains revealed that there were evil cultivators from the first day using human beings to sacrifice, refining alchemy, and refining root bones Received goods: Five Elements Condensation Technique, Yin-Yang Body Training Formation, and got acquainted with Xia Yao of Linshui Prefecture 3. Yongming Port Incident Reason: Recruitment of the sixth seat of Daozang Palace Overview of the event: Corpses appeared in Yongming Port, and the truth was that Lord Xiaoshanfu combined with the evil cultivators of Taiyin Sect to create Chaos on Zhou Road, using Taoist Tongyu's Netherworld energy to refine magic weapons Received goods: Purgatory Flag (with Taoist Tongyu trapped), Jiuji Formation (incomplete) 4. Mozhou Road Changwen Mansion incident (theft of corpse soldiers): Reason: to get rid of the suspicion of the destruction of Baishuimen Overview of the event: Qi Xiu (Zhang Jinglong) stole the corpse soldiers and fled without a trace, while searching for clues. Xia Bian Village was found (with the fake spirit refined on the first day), and it is speculated that Xiaoshanfu Lord used the first day to come (to create chaos on Mozhou Road or force the imperial guards to withdraw from Mozhou Road) Harvest: Eryang Sealing Array, Shuiyue Bell Magic Artifact 5.1 Sanhe Temple held a Dharma meeting because Guangxuan was the leader, and invited most of the sects on Nanlin Road. At the Dharma meeting, Wufeng Temple of Wenhai united with Dandao Sect to retreat. After leaving the Nanlin Road sect circle, he was suppressed and targeted. Behind Wenhai was Hongchen (Hongchen was jealous of Wang Ping's talent). Taoist priest Xuanhe was Wenhai's master and was at odds with Wenyang. He was one of the branches of the underground cave sect 5.2 After the Sanheguan Dharma meeting, the Qianmuguan small group held another gathering 6. Liu Chang understood the thunder method during the thunder calamity 7. Later, Wufengguan massacred the demon clan to forge the promotion magic weapon, which attracted the fake elixir demon (Hu Qianqian passed the news to the big demon), which caused Wufengguan to be ruined, which led to the exposure of Wenhai and Taiyin Sect's use of people to refine the magic weapon, forcing Xuanhe, Wenhai, and Leng Zhixing (the master of the Shandao Sect) to abscond 8. Ming Gongzi Incident: Reason: The task given by Daozang Palace after being promoted to the second level Receipt: Blood elixir for promotion to the Purgatory Flag, the first level of the Jingmu Art (searching the memory of Mr. Ming) 9. Qianmuguan small group gathering The party has two things, one is to help Yang Tian find two demon pills that have entered the country, and the other is to help Lu Wen and his wife solve the problem of two monks from the first sect robbing the extraterritorial monsters (Batu and Huo Douzi). The plan for the second incident was to have the first day fight the first sect and then reap the benefits, but due to the cultivation of the Yu lineage, the message was transmitted incorrectly. In the incident, Zhao Qing failed to enter the country (was cheated and practiced a fake secret method) 10. Sacred Heart Grass incident Reason: Obtain Sacred Heart Grass (to practice the third level secret method) Event summary: Encountered the siege by Wu Lang and others, killed a Mu Xiu with thunder method, killed a Mu Xiu with illusion, and obtained the second level of Jingmu Technique from the first Mu Xiu. Because Shen Xiaozhu, the internal affairs officer of Qianmu Temple, risked his life to deliver the news, he made her a registered disciple in order to satisfy her request for cultivation. After 11.1, Liu Shuang entered the country through the Jumu Technique, and the second level of Jumu Technique was on Li Yan (Liyan was the culprit for the decline of Qianmu Guan, and Liyan was Weiwei's man. Weiwei wanted to pursue Qianmuguan and Baishui Lake. Liyan He also took away Qianmuguan's magical weapon, the Cave Mirror, Bai Zhuo had taken refuge with a certain star god), and then Wang Ping completed the fusion of the locust tree's memory, and rescued Zuo Xuan (a weapon cultivator, whose natal magic weapon was an embroidery needle) to help him advance to the second level 11.2 Wang Ping began to fuse the soul with the psychic talisman and the luck charm, which will take at least forty years (the third step is to divide the soul Leaving the physical body, if it cannot be completed within ten years, it is best to give up and not start) 12. Zuo Xuan entered the second realm with the help of Wang Ping, joined Wang Ping, and chose Dongshui Mountain as the dojo 13. Mingshan Temple Sacrifice Incident: Taiyin Cult cultivators were suspected of sacrificing marine life on the coastline between Mozhou Road and Nanlin Road. Zuo Xuan went to investigate on Wang Ping's behalf , suspected to be under the command of the Mozhou Road Inspector, because Zi Luan lost control of the Mozhou Road 14. The Xia Kingdom began to use troops in the north, and the world began to be in chaos. Wang Ping accepted another disciple of his family, Wang Yang.

The writing is smooth and there are very few mistakes. The plot is smooth, not a mafia cult. It is also because of the writing style of non-underworld cultivator, the contradictions and conflicts are more obscure, and the protagonists' coping methods are different. In comparison, this book is more like an official novel than a cultivator novel.

When I saw the title, I thought it was a refreshing article, but I didn't expect it to be a bland and gentle article about cultivating immortals. A little interesting, a little flat, but it's really gentle and comfortable, and looks smooth. I saw it on the shelves before I knew it. Many people will write about peace as a superficial article, but this book is really peaceful. Especially if you are tired of reading articles that suppress emotions (especially malicious emotional suppression), reading this book is really comfortable.

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Finally, I saw a sect operating more normally. Even if there is a fighting conspiracy in the lawful sect, it will not be the same as PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds Pure Breeding Cup.

1. The early stage is dull and exciting, and the middle and later stages develop well. It is not the kind of novel that you don't want to read again after you keep it. 2. There are few updates at any time but it is relatively stable. At present, it should not be a eunuch. Anyway, it's much better than the gossips I've seen that sell dog meat to others. It's like a mobile natural disaster. Wherever something goes wrong, I'll say "Oh, I just want to have a good relationship. You guys forced me to do it"

Before entering the country, there is Qi training, marrow cleansing and foundation building. One thing is that the root bones are not enough, and the best is the Qi training period. King Kong Temple (gold): the first realm (the first tribulation), the second realm (the middle tribulation), the third realm (the great tribulation), the fourth realm (the last tribulation), and the fifth realm (the final tribulation). Taiyan Sect (Wood): The first level (channeling spirits), the second level (borrowing luck), the third level (reaching the sky), the fourth level (covering the sky), and the fifth level (stealing the sky). Linshui Mansion (Water): First Realm (Control Water), Second Realm (Xuan Bing), Third Realm (Transformation into Jiao), Fourth Realm (Transformation into Dragon), Fifth Realm (True Dragon). True Yang Sect (Fire): First Realm (Quenching Fire), Second Realm (Fire Training), Third Realm (True Fire), Fourth Realm (Heart Fire), Fifth Realm (Sacred Fire). The underground cave gate (earth): the first realm (cave reality), the second realm (breathing), the third realm (life and death), the fourth realm (opening of channels), and the fifth realm (reincarnation). Taiyin Sect (Yin): The first level (Taiyin), the second level (training), the third level (Kunyuan), the fourth level (forming), the fifth level (temporarily confidential). Yu Qingjiao (Yang): the first realm (Five Yangs), the second realm (Five Qi), the third realm (Golden Elixir), the fourth realm (Great Elixir), and the fifth realm (Transcending Tribulation).

After reading dozens of chapters, let me tell you the most obvious flaw. It's just that the author likes to arrange dangerous plots when the protagonist is about to be promoted. This is the stupidest way to write it, because the power system in this book is farming and hard training, and there is no cross-level battle. There is no thrill of breaking through and defeating a powerful enemy in battle. This is why others say the author's books are too bland. The protagonist has been practicing hard in farming, and the level of hard training is almost the same. The climax is about to begin, but the author interrupts it. When he breaks through again, the plot is over. The protagonist goes home to break through, and then returns to the ordinary.

The writing is very good, but is the author too friendly towards the rain lotus, or the spiritual creatures of heaven and earth? Others are fighting life and death, planning and planning, just for the sake of promotion? At the beginning, Wang Ping worked so hard to achieve the perfection of the four realms. However, Yu Lian did nothing but eat and drink every day. From time to time, he touched the spiritual being around Wang Ping, just like eating and drinking. It seemed that he could achieve the five realms casually. Of course, you can use the setting to explain this, but as a reader, it is indeed a bit unpleasant to watch, and the hardships of other monks have become a complete joke.

If this is the world's first time-travel novel, then everyone will be curious about what kind of story will happen when a modern person arrives in a different world with agricultural civilization. If this is the world's first book about cultivating immortality, then all readers will be curious about what kind of things and people they will encounter after cultivating immortality. But this book is already an unknown novel about cultivating immortality after traveling through time. The book is called "I Have a Progress Bar for Cultivation to Immortality". Logically speaking, the greatest significance of the progress bar is to judge whether the cultivation process is correct or wrong through the progress, and when the goal can be achieved, turning the unknown into the known. Ordinarily, this should be a way to express the coolness. For example, if others cannot practice something, the protagonist can find out the best way to practice it through the progress bar. But as far as the chapters I have read, it is not that exciting at all. The protagonist has a calm personality, neither humorous nor interesting. If the author didn't emphasize it, you wouldn't even know that he is a time traveler. There are no interesting sparks between the protagonist and the external environment, and there is no plot setting that can arouse readers' curiosity. It can be said that it is the same as boiled water. The article seems to be filled with joy. I haven't read a novel as flat as this book in a long time. I suggest the author read a very old novel called Qing Yu Nian, and study how the author directly arouses readers' curiosity through the character design of the protagonist, the experience after time travel, the external environment, etc. If the beginning of your novel is like plain water, the beginning of Qing Yu Nian is like burying a C4 bomb in a septic tank. The author may want to pursue the rationality of the plot and characters, but you ignore that reasonableness does not mean good-looking. Otherwise, we will be excited every day because of our absolutely reasonable life. The reason why I am so wordy is because I read it for a long time before I realized that I had read this book for the second time. If the same book bored me twice, you are cruel!

The perspective of this book is very strange. The protagonist is from the perspective of a leader. He mostly communicates with other forces. He directly delegates any matters to his subordinates. Unlike other novels, it is not like the protagonist of a game. When he reaches a high level, he is bossed around by others and completes other people's commissions or orders every day. It is the kind of person who acts as the boss and ends up doing everything himself.

I think this book is very well written, much better than the ones on the list. Qidian's push is so bad, no wonder it can't compare to Tomato.

In fact, I think this article is very good. Many disciples come and go, but the unfortunate thing is that their lives are blown away by the rain and wind. They are just passers-by in the protagonist's life. It is not easy to train disciples. If they can continue to become talents, there will be too few latecomers who can walk with the protagonist in the future. It seems that the protagonist must have outstanding talent. Yue, you have achieved success in cultivation, and you can expect a bright future. If not like this, how can you show the protagonist? It is not the kind of protagonist who practices hard and upgrades, and then the supporting villains also upgrade. It is easier than the protagonist to upgrade. It is disturbing to look at it. As for cultivating immortals, isn't it just that the road to immortality is full of skeletons? The protagonist, a character with a promising future, has appeared, so some people want to kill the protagonist, and some are looking forward to the protagonist. It is very reasonable. The protagonist is indeed from a small sect in decline. The savior and misfortune suddenly come, without any knowledge in advance. What will happen tomorrow or the accident? The first is completely out of control. You have to continue to form cliques and intrigues with your comrades, otherwise you will die inexplicably. Hey, this is exactly the real situation of the protagonist, the second-level monk. Keep up the good work, they are just struggling to survive...

Everything else is fine, except that he treats Yu Lian like a tool. It doesn't look like he is more trustworthy than the master at all.

It will take him 1,000 years to reach level 4 at this level.

I really suggest that the author change the title of the book. This title is really unattractive. I usually won't read novels with this kind of title. Recently, Xuan Jian Xian Clan has become quite popular. He used to call it "Start to Become the Magical Weapon of the Clan", but after changing the name, his performance improved by leaps and bounds.

How should I put it? It's too bland, which suits some people's tastes but not those who like fast pace.

This book could be better in my opinion. I was attracted by this book, but I couldn't read it anymore. It wasn't just the plot that I didn't like. But I recognize the author's skills. As far as my reading experience is concerned, this book gives me the feeling that the style is neither up to standard nor pure enough, which makes it unpalatable to readers on both sides. Either there are more knives and more darkness; or there are more human feelings and more beauty. But this book gives me the feeling that I want to have both, but it makes me unhappy. After all, writing novels is a commodity, and you still need to have a tendency. Only those who like it will pay for it. You will want a bit of everything, and in the end it will be a mediocre commodity.

Is the protagonist too kind to Shen Xiaozhu? Mainly because he doesn't feel that she is of any use, so he accepts her as his direct disciple. Under the protection of the protagonist, everything goes smoothly, and she gets whatever she wants. He always emphasizes that she is willful and humane, has no characteristics, and is not helpful to the male protagonist. However, the protagonist pays the most to her, and I just feel partial Shuang'er is like a daughter, one of the protagonist's human sustenance, but Xiaozhu really, I can only say that maybe this is fate, born lucky to be accepted by the male protagonist as his personal successor, and recommended to the fourth and fifth realms But I hope the male protagonist will not be too partial, he does not only have one apprentice

It's a good book, but I feel that the author's pacing is not very good. I flipped through the table of contents, and there are more than a hundred chapters of intrigue and intrigue starting from Xiaoshanfu-kun and ending at the end. It seems too tiring. The protagonist has neither practiced well nor gained much. The plot is spread out, but it is very uncomfortable to read. It is rare to have time to read novels continuously during the New Year. I can't stand it.

When I saw the chapter about receiving a biological biography, I would like to ask if there are any male apprentices behind the protagonist? What I feel from watching it so far is that all the women and men around the protagonist are dead. I really can't understand Dao Zhao Qing. The experience is very bad. Can any brothers tell me if this will still be the case later? If it stays like this I won't watch it.

The title of the book has actually been changed, but it's hard to comment because the new title still smells like a studio.

Generally speaking, the writing is quite satisfactory, but the writing of the fighting scenes is too messy. Sometimes after fighting for a long time, I can't tell the camps or whose moves are different.

This book has the level of a great author. Personally, I think the main reason why it is not popular is that this book seems to be quite complicated.

The story is straightforward and outrageous. There is no emotional ups and downs when reading it. It feels like the electrocardiogram is a straight line.

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I have read five or six chapters of your book, and it's not bad, but the title of your book puts me off The content is actually a bit more traditional Xianxia and Xinxingliu, but when I saw the title of your book, I thought it was a brainless novel.

I read the chapter review, and there are a lot of people paying attention to whether the protagonist is a man or a woman, eh😓, what kind of people are paying attention to such a strange thing.