Hogwarts: My Name Is the Unforgivable Curse

There are basically not many problems in the book. From the overall reading point of view, there are no problems except for the plot treatment of Pettigrew, which is a poisonous point. The real problem of this book is space. The protagonist seems to have a big plan when doing things, but in the end there is nothing. There is also less time for handwriting. Since the entire second half has been separated from the plot of the original work, the author can be more open-minded He can completely expand the part about college and give the protagonist a real position. This is what this book lacks There are no problems in other parts. The flaws cannot be concealed. I hope to see the author improve the outline of the next book

The plot is reasonable, the bugs of the original work have been solved, the rhythm of the original work has been disrupted and reorganized, and there is no need to follow the protagonist. There are a lot of original plots, which are very interesting and the writing is smooth. So far, there are no naughty girls, naughty girls, or pornographic jokes, and I haven't seen any naughty girls' comments in the comment area that I don't like. The protagonist is a Hufflepuff, non-systematic, and not particularly pretentious. It is more in line with the psychology of ordinary people. Although he likes ordinary life, he chooses to work hard for the sake of peace and strive to eliminate Voldemort at the source. The most difficult thing for me to read so far is that I have read relatively little of the original work, and I have only watched five and a half movies, so many plots and characters in the middle period do not match up. This is a problem of my own insufficient reading of the original work. So far in the Goblet of Fire part, some readers think that the protagonist's strength is too much about hiding and being weak, but from the beginning to the end, the protagonist's character does not like to compete for the first place, and in order to balance the combat power, the supporting characters are specially written to have props to make up for the strength gap (although the European version is a bit far-fetched), but it can be said (the protagonist can be called this name itself is quite strange, hh). To be honest, I have been browsing the fandom sections of movies, TV shows, animations, and famous novels. Many fanfics write about protagonists who are either too inhumane or too follow-up. As well as the current bad fun-loving protagonists, I have become tired of aesthetics. In my opinion, although the writing style of this book is not as good as that of a certain superhero movie fanfic (the transition in that book was really amazing, but it's a pity that I haven't watched many superhero movies. The characters in the later stages did not match up and the protagonist made me feel ungrounded, so I gave up the book), but it can already write a lot of ordinary short stories. I estimate that I will re-read this fanfic after I finish the movie and part of the original work. Come on, author, I will update five times a day! !

It's really great. I really like the atmosphere of getting along among classmates in this book. It doesn't take any effort to hate or deal with a peer, and there is not so much prejudice... The original plot and setting deduction are definitely above the level! It also has a language style that doesn't offend me. It's really great! 😆😆

Now that there is Avada Kendavia, is there also "Krue Theo" (Crushing the Bones) and "Imperio" (The Soul Leaving the Body)?

It feels a bit weird, it's like a person's surname is Machine and his name is Guan Gun, and a person's surname is Huo and his name is Quiver. It's a little bit weird.

Although it is really a stretch, it does not mean that it is unreasonable. But the motivations and behaviors are still a little off track. Every time I read about places where the protagonist takes big risks, I always wonder if the protagonist is just looking for trouble. This feeling is especially true for the chapters about the Philosopher's Stone. Most of the time, the protagonist's intellectual curiosity remains at the level of an ordinary "top student". But as soon as he saw Laofu, the protagonist's thirst for knowledge suddenly became as strong as Orochimaru's. I would rather be the most dangerous double agent than "let me see you again." This is really, more or less, a bit abrupt. The other thing is to write anonymous letters. Frankly speaking, because the original work is a fairy tale and Rowling leaves a lot of blank space, many things in the wizarding world are ambiguous. So where does the protagonist get the confidence to say that Lao Dengtou must not know who sent it?

I originally thought that magic perception was an increase in magic perception, but it turned out that it said that it was perception? That's magic analysis + magic microscope. All magic items (or constant magic) can see a clear structure... What kind of bug is this? It's equivalent to the biggest obstacle in Harry's world - knowledge no longer exists for you... (There is no blue bar in Harry's world, everyone relies on knowledge, experience and talent) If not, just copy the homework. Standing on the shoulders of giants, I really can't write this. Voldemort has just been resurrected and found the protagonist in a six-god suit standing at the door of his house. How can he hold up only one Horcrux...

"Your Name" It's too outrageous, aha, such a fun setting If the protagonist goes out at night, Filch takes a green flashlight and takes a photo: Avada is eating a big melon! Scared a random little wizard to death

How do I remember a sentence from the original novel: "Never trust anything that can think independently unless you see clearly where it hides its mind."

When I was searching for games after get off work today, I suddenly had an idea, and I thought of an expression to describe this book: First of all, it is a very accurate description of my self-feeling. Ordinary HP fans are like turning on a cheat device on an excellent text adv and changing the values to skip some plot kills and eliminate the frustrations of childhood; the more powerful ones do not hard-change the data, but insert some NPCs and props to cleverly pass judgments. , Changing some of the endings of the original work; for stronger ones, various branch lines are simply added, which enriches the game content and makes it much easier to pass the main line. The best one has changed it to be more like a Japanese RPG. Although the main line remains unchanged, it starts to have the fun of exploration, and there is even a second game and the day after tomorrow. This book is very magical. It is based on Harry Potter books 1-7, but it is more like an open world game, and it is of a high level. The NPC dialogues are not the same, and the playability is extremely high. It's just that as readers, we are more like the audience of the anchor, watching the anchor chewing on Dagua's various SAO operations.

There are many ways to deal with Voldemort's Horcruxes, such as throwing them into the Mariana Trench, simply throwing them next to the Titanic, throwing them on the ground into radioactive fuel rods, pouring them into a reactor, or casting them into a plutonium hemisphere to make a nuclear bomb.

After reading nearly 30 chapters, I feel that the supporting character Balon has too many roles. Do you want to write a double protagonist?

I am a wizard passing by. Is this Hermione the single heroine? I love this 😁😁

After reading some, I wrote that the main character is very talented, but when classes started, the main character was written in a low-key manner, and it felt too low-key to me. He has talent, but he hides it. This style doesn't suit me very well

It's getting colder and colder. Are there any book friends still alive? Is there a bubble under this one?

Read the latest chapters in one go. As far as the level of this book is concerned, it is exciting, clever, plot-driven, and innovative. It is much better than some brainless studio books. As a result, I don't agree with the monthly subscription of only 243. Not to mention the monthly subscription of thousands, the level should be 800-900 to match it!

Seeing the treatment of Pettigrew, I think it's a bit poisonous. Can any friends tell me what happens next? Isn't it really bleached?

What a great idea. I was still thinking about how you could explain the name, but I didn't expect such a great idea.

Good-looking is good-looking. But I just want to complain about how tired the protagonist is. So tired. The other protagonists are all dragged into the whirlpool of the plot. Does the protagonist jump in by himself or use his brain to jump in? If there is any movement in the plot, his brain will use 200%. 🤦🏻‍♂️Too tired.

It's a pity that I didn't make it longer and didn't expand it. Peter Pettigrew ends in the penultimate chapter

The green light rushed towards Dumbledore with the ferocity of lightning. "Avada~Ken~Davia!" Voldemort roared. "Here it is~" Mr. Avada Ken Davia answered. The green light quickly dissipated in the air, as if nothing happened. Then Voldemort was killed by Neville with 🗡. happy end~

The protagonist never uses his own name from beginning to end 🤫

This book actually avoids the shortcomings of Harry Potter fan works that talk about the original plot and background system, and then the original characters and stories are greatly deleted or even ignored. It does not introduce many new maps and new characters that have nothing to do with the original work or even mention it. The main line is firmly locked in the confrontation between good and evil in the original world view, which is great. However, in the middle and late period, a powerful but secretive university suddenly appeared that had been operating for decades and had hundreds of senior professors and students. It also had "spies" in schools across Europe, the Ministry of Magic, and even the Death Eaters of the Order of the Phoenix and other organizations. It was still a bit deus ex machina. Many of the "strategies" in the article are too complicated and seem to go beyond conventional logic. However, without opening a new map, you must not forcefully plot against Voldemort, otherwise there will be nothing to write about, so it is understandable. Finally, there are no eunuchs in this article, and it is a complete and interesting story. Compared with the eunuch rate of Harry Potter fans, I can rate it as above average~ (To make a complaint, Goldfinger is even more outrageous than many dark blue system streams with added points. It comes with Vitality, spiritual power, magic power, and even the soul microscope and the highest operating accuracy behind it, you are actually the human kick of the God of Magic. Oh, by the way, you can also directly observe the timeline and even the Alaya Consciousness or the whereabouts of the soul. The reincarnation of the omniscient and omnipotent God is more reliable)

Although I am very reluctant to leave, I still want to scatter flowers (peaceful) The ending was so abrupt that I didn't even draw a picture of the blessing... Let's see if I can draw one during this winter vacation? To be honest, I am very sad to see the end of this story. JPG Wouldn't the author consider making some extra chapters?

It's a pretty good novel, with a tight pace. It follows the original work but also has its own adaptation. It's not too brainless or too conspiracy-theoretic. It's a pity that the results seem to be average. Isn't this better than other brainless Harry fans?

It's very well written. It's all ordered. When will the new book be released?

Very well written! Looking forward to the next book, see you there!

Ending of Spreading Flowers It ended a bit suddenly🙉💦 I feel like there is still a lot to write about in college (? I hope the author will bring us more good works after taking a break Come on!

I've finished reading Wenhuang... The author will give me some extras ^^ By the way, I'd like to ask for some other HP novels It's best if they don't have a female protagonist, Wenhuang ah Wenhuang Although I think it's very likely that I've read it, but maybe! ? 🥺🥺

I finished reading it in one sitting, and I'm still not satisfied. Will the author consider making some extra stories?