Hogwarts: Portrait Artist of the Undead

It would be too shabby to be able to create DA in the second grade without a time traveler. The key is that the logic is very smooth. They were all forced out by shoddy teaching + Voldemort's threat.

The demise of a good book was once again poisoned by me... What a pity. It is a fresh perspective and a profession that has never been written about in HP articles. The protagonist is essentially very kind, and his kindness level is in the same range as the deans in HP. There is no sense of incompatibility in the original work. There are also fresh settings and imitations of marks. It is mysterious, restrained and attractive. Unfortunately, it does not fit the tonality of fast food and the invincibility of the protagonist, so it was cut. There are also too many secret room plot designs in the follow-up outline, and there are too few parts about the protagonist himself, which makes it tiring to read.

I just read the first few chapters. The protagonist is not so much making portraits as he is providing psychological counseling to relatives and friends of the deceased. Listen to the oral accounts of the deceased's relatives and friends, understand the deceased, guide the deceased's relatives, friends and customers to face death, and finally get over the pain and achieve growth. In short, it is a strong sense of déjà vu.

This is the first time I have seen a detailed story written from this perspective. It is a very good story that makes me spin my monthly tickets.

Very novel idea, very interesting, please support it

Pity. I didn't expect to cut it. In fact, the author himself has good writing skills, and he did not step on Lei who picked up 11-year-old Emma at the beginning, or Dumbledore at the beginning of Invincible Flow. This book also has the flavor of the original work in terms of writing style. But the score is only 1,000, which is a bit incredible. Because from a quality point of view, this is not equal at all. In fact, I think if I continue to write it, it should gradually become longer. It can be said with certainty that the quality of this book so far is better than some books that cost 50,000 yuan. I went back and read the catalog again and put forward my own opinions. The protagonist's initial setting is to enter a trance-like fantasy. Personally, judging from the original work, the golden finger at the beginning is a bit big. The trance-like fantasy only appeared in the 7th series. In almost all other HP fics, if it appears, it can only be used in the main plot. . In addition, the protagonist is suspected of being the heir to the secret room, and he is said to accept that students can privately investigate his story at will, and the protagonist promises to teach Da. I feel that the protagonist's character setting is a bit weak. The protagonist directly agreed to teach defense lessons to the student group. Although it was through portraits, it gave the reader the feeling that the protagonist was working in vain and suffered a loss. Some may find the threesome a bit licking. As for the plot of Malfoy admitting his mistake and apologizing, it is really abrupt and inconsistent with the original work. Everything else is pretty good. Should you consider revising it and writing another 100,000 words?

The current development of the novel is great The indigenous portraitist who came from the master-apprentice inheritance system cuts into the original plot from another angle without making anyone dramatic. It is neither frivolous and bright nor ambitious nor dark and cruel. The plot is down to earth and makes people feel comfortable.

The fifth graders draw Cedric, the sixth graders draw Sirius, the seventh graders draw Dumbledore, there are so many orders from Hogwarts👀

A very innovative idea, a very interesting career, and finally no longer a professor. Cheers, author!

Okay, I've read the last book many times and finally opened a new one.