Immortal Techniques Above All

Don't overpower the protagonist in this book. It's not that the supporting characters are bad, but the protagonist already has such a huge cheat code. Why do you have to overpower him? Either make the cheat code smaller, or make the map bigger and the enemies stronger. I see you wrote about a spiritual revival, reincarnation, and a dynasty that's already nearing its end after 200 years.

You're finally back! We've been waiting for you to finish the game for so long!

To be honest, I also feel the author is really outrageous. You've written so many books already, those two hundred thousand words or so, not counting... Final character list, Heroic Spirit Raising Game, A New Heaven After a Hundred Lifetimes... This is already your 5th book. It's clearly an invincible protagonist story, so how did you manage to write it so frustratingly?

I really like the subject matter of this book, and the writing style is also very good. Although it sometimes feels like reading a diary, it's generally a good read to pass the time. The plot structure is a bit off. Despite the protagonist being far superior to the antagonist in terms of strength, information, and popular support, the protagonist repeatedly suffers setbacks, requiring the…

First, there's FW Zhenxian, who's good for nothing but fighting among himself, and his "Law of Heavenly Longevity," who disgusts everyone on an equal footing. The author seems to have said that this law of lifespan was to prevent the emergence of immortal people and the resulting social stratification, but there is absolutely no reality to it in the work; it has a purely negative effect.

The writing style is constantly repeating itself, lacking originality, and towards the end it's basically more like writing an outline than a novel. I've completely lost faith in the author.

The higher the cultivation level, the more lifespan is needed to advance. Older generations of cultivators are actually a reflection of their race's foundation! You treat all races equally, only attacking yourself? Are you sure you're not a traitor? With one strike, unless you have a superpower like the protagonist, almost no one can become an immortal!

These are just some personal thoughts. (I don't know how long the author plans to write this world, or if it's just a transition, and I've never written a novel before, so these are just some suggestions.) Currently, the protagonist's advantage in spiritual power is still enormous.

The biggest problem is that you're being too slow. Your special ability needs fame and recognition, but instead of going out, you're just lingering in the mountains when the population is at its peak. You only venture out when everyone is almost dead.

I noticed there's no one commenting on this chapter, and I'm worried the author might cancel it. I subscribed first and plan to read it later. I wonder what everyone else's situation is like?