Immortal Techniques Above All

In this book, don't be crazy about crushing the protagonist. This doesn't mean that the supporting characters are not good. Your protagonist has already opened up, so you still have to crazily crush the enemy. Otherwise, you can make the enemy smaller, or make the map bigger and the enemy stronger. I see that you wrote about a spiritual resurgence and reincarnation, and that this dynasty is nearing its end after 200 years. It will not be just a mortal dynasty now and then start a spiritual resurgence, and then the protagonist, um, cheats and creates, um, reincarnates, and it turns out that the reincarnation lasts for hundreds or thousands of years, and then all the achievements have been usurped by others. After reincarnation, you have to start from the bottom.

We are finally back. We have been waiting for you to finish the game for a long time.

To be honest, I also feel that the author is really outrageous. You have written so many books, those with more than 200,000 words, not counting Final Character Catalog, Heroic Spirit Development Game, A New World... This is your fifth book, obviously. The plot belongs to the Invincible stream. How did you manage to write it in such a frustrating way? This is the first time I have seen an old author make such a mistake and make a novel in the Invincible stream so frustrating. I really can't understand why the author doesn't switch to Invincible stream.

I like the subject matter of this book very much, and the writing style is also very good Although occasionally it feels like reading a running account, but overall it is a way to pass the time. The plot structure is still a bit poisonous. It is clear that the protagonist is far greater than the villain created by the author in terms of strength, information, or the will of the people. However, the protagonist is defeated time and time again, and then the protagonist forces the gods to come down to earth to save the situation. Well... Not once or twice. It seems that the tone of the plot of this book is like this... Some people may ask, why is he invincible? What, how can we construct a plot conflict without writing about these villains? But in fact, in this world, Ren Liuguang, who has the weapon of greatness, is invincible, even if the extraordinary nature of this world is idealistic, why? Because the protagonist is really what people want, and the concept is added... I don't know how it will be written later, but according to the current plot structure, it will really become a running story.

The first is the FW True Immortal who [can't do anything and is the first in internal fighting] and his [Law of Tianshou], which dislikes everyone equally. The author seems to have said that this law of longevity is to prevent the emergence of immortality from the solidification of classes, but there is no reality at all in the work, pure negative effects. There are also waste real immortals. If the real immortals are worried about the solidification of class, the worst and stupidest way is to clean up regularly, and life will be forced to adapt. I originally thought that the lower limit of a true immortal should exceed the upper limit of my imagination. Unexpectedly, the lower limit of a true immortal's FW far exceeds the lower limit of my imagination. The amazing wisdom of a true immortal is really amazing! Then there is the characterization of the protagonist. Although I don't want to say this, the protagonist's performance is really like a parasite now. Finally, there is a difficult plot, every time good prevails over evil. The protagonist appears, turns the tide, leaves many backup options, and then goes offline to wait. →The villain rises, the protagonist's backup and subordinates are vulnerable, and all lives are in ruins. →The protagonist receives the call and descends to earth again. Then the process of the protagonist saving the world → going offline → good defeating evil → going online to save the world is constantly cycled. From this point, we can see that the FW of Tianshou Law has no effect at all. Infighting and betrayal are everywhere. Why does good always prevail over evil? There is also the law of Tianshou, which is the negative effect of stupidity. You can only see the amazing wisdom of the dog and donkey of the true immortal. Even Lan Meng will give up the throne of the amazing wisdom!

Constantly repeating the previous writing method, there is no new idea, and in the later stage, it is basically not writing a novel but an outline. Anyway, I have no confidence in the author.

The higher the realm, the more lifespan is needed to upgrade. The older generation of monks is actually a reflection of their racial heritage! If you don't kill the aliens, you'll treat them all equally, but you'll kill yourself? Are you sure you're not a traitor? With one slash, almost no one can become an immortal unless he has a big attack like the protagonist! Almost no one can become an immortal normally, and the future of the race has almost been cut off by you! How can I break through because my lifespan is not enough and my realm accumulation is not enough? The astonishing wisdom slashes his own race! Unbelievable! ! ! Wouldn't it be better for you to be so powerful and set the rules of merit and karma? Be less involved in karma and accumulate merit, otherwise too much karma will cause disaster. If you can't survive it, go to hell! This prehistoric calamity measuring system is much better than your crazy law of longevity! I don't know what you think about cutting off Shou Yuan with one knife. Anyway, when the person who was knifed grows up, he will have a favorable impression of the race that used the knife on him? I feel that in many cases it will lead to division, which is too inappropriate for human beings, and the hatred for blocking the road is greater than heaven! You've already stabbed your own race, how can you expect the people you stabbed to have a favorable impression? They say the older generation oppresses people and makes people despair! But now your Tianshou Law is the greatest oppression! The greatest despair!

Just some personal thoughts, stacked armor (I don't know how long it will take for the author to write this world, or it is just a transition, and I have never written a novel, just some suggestions) For now, the protagonist has a very great advantage in spiritual power. The blue sky and red sun also took some of the smartest people in a country decades to come up with, not to mention that the protagonist can also use legends to condense treasure phantoms, and even point out time-based skills in the early stage as before. Therefore, within a short period of time, please do not reappear in this world with people whose cultivation ability exceeds that of the protagonist. This does not mean that the protagonist must be pushed all the way. Difficulties can come from many aspects, such as the enemy's strategy, the enemy's resources, or the number of enemies. And unless the protagonist is a genius and picks up thousands of genius treasures every day, I can't imagine that he can defeat the protagonist with a hundred times acceleration. Even the people around the protagonist used the second generation cultivation method at the beginning. Now the protagonist directly gives the blue sky and red sun phase. Although it may not be strong enough at the beginning, for ordinary practitioners in the later stage, each one of them will be a big boss.

The most important thing is that it is too boring. What your golden finger needs most is fame and people need to know it. But when the population was at its highest, you were just playing in the mountains and not going out. You have to wait until the person is almost dead before going out.

When I read this chapter, there was no one there, and I was worried that the author would cut it. I subscribe first and keep it until later. I don't know what other people think.