American Detective: From Rookie Cop to The Rookie

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, I can't get used to the food in Jiangxi and Shanghai, let alone the United States. Regional differences have a great impact on taste. I beg you, please don't let Americans just accept Chinese food without any care. It's really embarrassing.

Let me tell you a little bit about my personal opinion. The author of this book is very good. His writing skills are not particularly deep, but he is definitely not bad. It can make people read. The plot is not a simple anecdote, so overall, it is a mid-to-high-level work that can be read. As for the shortcomings, the biggest problem is: the audience is too small. Compared with movies, the audience for watching TV series is inevitably smaller. I personally have only watched "Bones", "CSI", and "The Secret Detective", so I don't recognize any of the characters in the other works. If the name of a movie is more or less memorable to readers, it means that they can have a sense of involvement. However, the small audience of TV series will inevitably lead to a lack of sense of substitution. In the early stage, they will be attracted by the author's writing skills and plot ideas. However, as time goes by, as the sense of substitution becomes more and more lacking, interest will become less and less. I estimate that the early results of this book should be okay, but now the results will start to go downhill, which is caused by the above reasons. After the positive index generated by early attraction is offset by the negative index generated by waiting for follow-up updates, the readership will gradually disappear. So is there a solution? I personally think that we can create a few supporting characters that can create a deep impression and appeal, deepen readers' impression of the work, and enhance the sense of immersion. Instead of turning the characters of each American drama into supporting roles in order to describe the classic plots of each American drama, and just come and go to make soy sauce. The readership of Hannah after the character was transferred may be the result of an attractive supporting character being weakened in the plot. Finally, I wish the author will get better and better as he writes, and the novel will come to a complete conclusion.

It's awkward for American dramas to have various Chinese elements interspersed in their plots. Don't mix it up. You're a novelist, not a cultural promotion ambassador.

Author, your thinking is wrong. One case follows another, and you have to take a vacation or something to add some daily life in order to be normal. And what about the protagonist's system? Is it just gone? . To be honest, if you want to see who solves the case, your first choice is definitely Sherlock Holmes or something. As a systematic protagonist, you keep solving crimes and solving crimes. And it's not routine at all. I'm jumping through hundreds of chapters at a time, and it's still the same? ? I wouldn't watch Sherlock Holmes if I wanted to see Solved Crimes, would I, Charlotte? No matter how exciting the foreign crimes are, there is no sense of immersion. To be honest, apart from not harming those kind-hearted people, I don't feel that no matter how many Americans die, I may still feel that it is a bit less. You write a novel, and with such a defiant system, you are actually afraid of the protagonists of those TV series? No wonder your book is not popular. ... I can see that you put a lot of thought into this book. The writing is also very good. It's just that the thinking is distorted.

But I know why Mao gave up before reading a few pictures. Too proud. Authentic Chinese food is not popular with many Americans. China is a big country and there are many delicacies. Even when you go out of the province, the food must be modified to suit the local tastes. If you go abroad and do this, the boss in Chinatown will not cook you authentic Chinese-style dishes because you are a foreigner, unless you propose it yourself.

The prototype of Hannah, the young lady is really cool😎

Ever since Fenri came out, writing has become more and more boring. It's just one event plus another, with no breathing time at all. Maybe the author thinks it's easier to write like this, but it's very boring to read. Even Superman has to have his own life. Are you, the protagonist, busier than Superman?

The protagonist feels like a horny teddy

The writing is messy, daily life is not like daily work, there is no intense and exciting scenes, and there is no logical and rigorous analysis of solving the case. There is no motivation to climb up and no desire for wealth. What is the meaning of the protagonist's existence? What else is there to watch?

There is the original plot of the TV series, but it is not watery. It is written very cleverly and introduces the plot. For someone like me, I have watched it but it doesn't make me feel like writing the original version again like writing a diary. It is very interesting, and I really like this kind of plot with a little bit of flutter. Amry, why don't you write this like a gentleman all day long, just chatting and not saoing. The most important thing is that each character behaves and speaks in a different way. They have their own characteristics and are very comfortable to watch. There is no gambling on the intelligence. The protagonist is a little bit like the darling of heaven, but the impact is not big.