The Los Angeles Detective

Slightly tidied up the table of contents

Happy 20th birthday to Dianniang

Why do you like books with European and American backgrounds? Because you can write freely, as long as they don't involve domestic issues, they are rarely blocked.

I found that the protagonist often uses the experience of the Chinese police to act in the United States. This is actually wrong, because the national conditions of the two countries are fundamentally different. The Chinese police's experience can easily be used by the American police. American police work in pairs. Once they encounter a suspect, their first reaction is to point a gun at the suspect and shout. If the suspect disobeys orders and makes abnormal movements of his hands and feet, the police have the right to shoot directly. When the suspect made a gesture of surrender, a policeman stepped forward and handcuffed the suspect. A policeman kept pointing a gun at the suspect not far away. If there was only one person, he would call his companions to help. He only had one life. Anyone who dared to step forward and handcuff the suspect alone would definitely be called a lone hero, and this kind of person is most likely to die. Generally, the police will not arrest suspects in crowded places for fear of accidentally killing passers-by. If a suspect wants to escape in a crowded place, the police will not rush forward to arrest him at close range. They will keep an eye on the suspect's escape route and call nearby police to contain him.

Since it is a novel, I think we can add a small climax and bury a big main plot. Pinkerton is very good. It can leave a long-span suspense, similar to the plot of the American TV series True Detective And I think the supporting characters in the early stage were quite plump, but now it feels like it has become a ruthless case-solving machine. . . Xiao Hei can continue. What about David? Where's Raymond? Where is Jenny? . . . I think everyone has their own story, which allows the protagonist to continue to inadvertently intervene in their lives, just like the American TV series "Psychic Detective". I think the interaction between the protagonist and these people can also have a lot of plots to explore, and I am also like the old man before. I think the protagonist should have several core skills now (I personally think that marksmanship, interrogation, and on-site investigation are the advantages of the protagonist system). In terms of describing firearms, Free Country Rifle Tactical Equipment I think this area can be explored in depth (I personally am a tactical equipment person... I can describe missing cases in the wild jungle... After all, detective novels should not only have the thrill of solving crimes, but I think the thriller element is also very important...). Personally, I think we can create a very talented villain who can closely follow the protagonist at every step. . . .

After a lot of playing, I just saw that the protagonist drew a criminal investigation sketch card. I have some suggestions. Don't let the protagonist's skills be too comprehensive. He can be an all-rounder, but he must not be proficient in them all. Giving this proficient skill to other characters can enrich other characters, instead of the protagonist doing all the work, and other characters being incompetent and reduced to background. As long as the protagonist has maxed out the two skills of force and reasoning, and then interacts with other tools with proficient skills such as portrait painters, the story can come alive. It would be boring if the protagonist did all the work. Now the entire protagonist group has a description part. The protagonist does too much work, which affects the impact of the supporting characters. Refer to the composition of the main and supporting characters of the Spiritual Book Detective. If you want to enrich the characters, you have to be willing to give skills to the supporting characters, especially the skills of the tool people. The supporting characters can have various personalities, but The supporting characters must have proficient skills, just like the skills of Xiao Hei's network resources. Forensics, portraitists, SWAT personnel, SWAT officers, snipers, blasters, and assaulters are all individually created, and one to two are set for each person. Just one specialized skill is enough. You don't want to let the protagonist do all the work. Two groups of people will serve as thugs for the protagonist and play a supporting role in the battle plot. Xiao Hei, and the second generation of officers are responsible for finding people, and the other two people with characteristics and specialized skills will be responsible for the battle. If everyone can perform their duties, then the novel will have a much better look and feel, and the characters will be fuller. Don't skimp on skills. The protagonist should be a brain with strong force, enriching the tool man. The current character creation is still too thin. The reason why it is thin is because A tool man cannot play the role of a tool. The forensic doctor cannot just give a report, give the forensic doctor a name, have a story related to him, and dig into the past of the character. However, as a portrait artist, if the protagonist has basic skills, he can only use them to describe the appearance of the prisoner in more detail. Going too far is not enough. Don't overdo it. The protagonist can be a wise man who knows everything, but he cannot act like a fool and do all the work. It is very important to let other people in the police force support them like a master, give them skills and let them work‼ ️

I have been subscribing and reading. The author's writing is very good. However, as someone who has been exposed to the English environment for a long time, I feel that the word "yeah" is too dramatic. At first, I can replace "yeah" with "yeap" and "yes", but it is a bit overwhelming and it does not match the character. There are many words for affirmation in English. In addition to the above, there is OK, which is the most commonly used. There are also okey, okey-doke, of course, absolutely, surely, or very slightly, you can use Uh huh, children can use yep, just one yeah every time, which is too funny. I saw that the authors of several recent photos have made some changes in this aspect, and I would like to make some suggestions on this, hoping to help the authors.

Md It's such a pity that the book is of such high quality that it has been completed. It has the flavor of an American drama. The characters and the descriptions of the cases are all of high quality. I think a sequel can definitely be made.

A very good book, with a smooth plot and good character development. At the same time, I also gave some opinions and chatted casually. 1. The protagonist is promoted too fast, level one a month, which is impossible in any country, and it doesn't have to be so fast. If you get promoted further, you will be the deputy director. It is impossible for the deputy director to go to the scene. Currently, the main theme of this book is investigation. In fact, the position of detective is very good and more suitable. He will be promoted to captain in the middle and later stages. At the end, just mention what position he will be promoted to at the end. Of course, if the investigation turns to officialdom later, just pretend I didn't say anything. 2. The system seems to be a bit broken at the moment. The protagonist is not short of money, and the bulk of it is money. Cards that are not powerful are of no use, while cards that are too powerful will cause them to jump easily. It is recommended that there be more cards that strengthen the protagonist's personal abilities so that readers can look forward to it more. 3. It is easy to feel tired after consecutive criminal cases. It is good to have more daily life. It can be more daily life for teammates, and the supporting characters can be more vivid. In addition, Pinkerton can be used to intersperse some human commissions to solve the protagonist's economic problems and expand interpersonal relationships. The key is to switch to another case.

Have you watched the news? Information about hundreds of undercover police officers in Los Angeles was leaked by the mayor. The reality is stranger than fiction.