I Live Forever in the World of Cultivation

Advantages: 1. The subject matter and ideas are relatively novel. There are no cliche plots that pretend to slap people in the face or threaten to save people. It can be watched by old bookworms 2. The characters are relatively normal. There are no such things as virgins, dog lickers, or those who make the characters very righteous in order to pass the trial 3. Like some titles that sell dog meat on sheep's heads, this book really puts Gou through it 4. There are no plug-ins or systems. It just adds an infinite lifespan. The overall style of the painting is relatively pure, unlike some books that add a little bit of writing and then practice all the skills until they are mastered. Each chapter uses a panel to show the number of words. Disadvantages: 1. There are big loopholes in the timeline, age, cultivation speed, and breakthrough time. If you look a little more carefully, you will find that there are relatively big loopholes in the cultivation growth rate, breakthrough time, and age of the three people from the beginning. In particular, the protagonist's cultivation and breakthrough time are not matched with abundant resources. 2. It's a little wordy, saying a word, doing an action... These have too many psychological thoughts and content analysis. Some of the same analysis will even be written repeatedly. If there is no plot, just chat and think about it, you can write one or two chapters. There is a certain amount of words. 3. Some plots lack rigor, such as the crisis of selling spiritual rice, going out to build foundations, the sect's treasure house to replace a large number of foundation-building pills, secretly entering and exiting the sect at will, a large amount of resources that cannot produce corresponding strength, and sufficient resources but a lack of expendable trump cards. (Most of this content seems to be rigorous but is actually not rigorous) For example: after selling a large amount of spiritual rice once or twice, the sect can just order anyone who encounters a large amount of spiritual rice to be informed of the establishment of the master. Even if you use all kinds of tricks, you will not be able to escape. After selling hundreds of thousands of spirit stones to the Houtu Sect, I only had one investigation mission. For example: The leader of the sect has no way of knowing the whereabouts of the treasure house in exchange for the treasures. A young Qi practitioner spent tens of thousands of spiritual stones and no one noticed or raised any suspicion (could this mean that some of the sect's resources were directly exchanged and sold outside for a price difference, and no one knew)

Just because you are not trying to sell someone else's meat, it is worth reading it in one day. This book is good. I currently only have two books on my bookshelf, Changsheng Marriage, and your excellent book. This is the first time I have seen a real Gou Daoliu. I hope it will be faster!

I have read many books, and finally came back to continue reading this one. The main character is a slut and there is no heroine, which makes me feel very involved 😭😭

~ Jkc,

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This author's writing is really good. It's not like other books that try to sell dogs on their own. They say they are practicing cultivating immortality, but then they start committing suicide after entering. This book is really practicing cultivating immortality. I love it.

Is a Dharma title so long-winded? Repeating the same idea back and forth, once is normal, twice to deepen the impression, and after three times it is enough. Your infinite loop of verbosity makes my head spin. There are a lot of repetitive mental activities that are not enough in one chapter but have to be continued in the next chapter. You are a bit too lazy. I really like this type of novel. It would be great if the expressions were simplified and the key points were not repeated, and the useless ones were removed from the mental activities.

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The male protagonist killed someone and wiped out his whole family; it was just because he stole the cave of his ancestor and he was afraid of being discovered by the other party. This logic of cause and effect is invincible.

Gou is indeed stubborn enough, but too much is unreasonable, and it is no longer refined and self-interested, but also a bit stupid. When he discovered the crisis, he put aside the planning for a long time and ran away. Apart from other things, it was not the place where he should collect information at the beginning, and he wanted to get benefits without touching anything. You have to be at ease and cultivate on your own. I will take the benefits. It will be difficult to pay depending on the situation. These are okay, the most difficult is to set an infinite lifespan and you'll be done with it. Accelerate your qi training and start learning formations, with some talent, it's okay, and then you cheat, grow rice everywhere, build the foundation and turn to alchemy, and then you will become an alchemy master. Later, I feel like you need to refine weapons. Not a buddy. If nothing else, you are. Infinite lifespan is not just a talent hanging on the wall, you are proficient in everything, and there is a specially arranged control group whose training progress is basically the same. Then your formations, alchemy, and talismans are all at the same level. Think about it for yourself, whether you are a clone or not. Let's not talk about watering down. You will just be stubborn. You have to explain everything for a long time. This is a mess.

Really, stop being so long-winded. There is really no need to repeat the reasons for many supporting characters. There are too many psychological activities. Is it necessary to write so much about the supporting characters' psychological activities? It's really too long-winded. You can write a chapter about one action or one thing. This is disgusting. , It would be really good if you re-write it to remove these marks. You wrote the story well, but there is really no need to write and repeat some actions, one look, and write a chapter. It is really disgusting. After reading the update, if you still write like this, I will give up the book! ! !

He stole someone's ancestral cave and didn't care about it in return. He also killed his descendants and wiped out his whole family. And there is no grudge at all, just because I am afraid that trouble will come to my door. Isn't this logic too...

A Nascent Soul Sect is big enough, as big as the sky. If something happens casually, the entire sect will be unable to stay. For example, if something happens in a certain county or city, the protagonist's mind will immediately ring with alarm bells: Mom, we can't stay in this entire province, run away 😭 Remote mountains and rivers, countless lands, hostile monks have nothing to do, and they are searching all over the place every day, right? They just happened to be able to find you, a master of concealment formations, right? That's outrageous!

The author is really good at it. He repeats one thing several times. He said it in the previous chapter and he will say it again in the next chapter. It really affects reading. No wonder the grades are not good 😆😆😆

The essence of this novel is not captured in a single word. It is about white-eyed wolfishness and selfishness, which is the essence of it. I endured reading more than 100 chapters, but nothing changed. I really couldn't bear to stand it. Immortalism is about virtue, not inhumanity.

I've finished reading it, and I don't recommend it. It's a book that will make you drunk. Talking about one thing back and forth, grinding and analyzing it over and over again, to make a decision, you have to recall all the previous stories, and say it over and over again, for example: Because the strength has fully increased after breaking through to the Nascent Soul realm, it is impossible to compete with the Golden Core. It's the same as when I was in Jindan... (Affectionately recalling a history of Jindan struggle that I have seen disgustingly). After all, the realm was not enough at that time, so the risk in Jindan was still very high. But now that I have broken through to Nascent Soul, my strength has greatly increased, and naturally it cannot be the same as before (yes, again I repeat, this arrangement of content is not 70% but 50% in the whole novel. I couldn't stand it when I read Jindan) In addition, the author likes to use parallel sentences and paragraphs very much, such as: This collection is rich in content, including many that have not been studied before. The formations that have been passed before, the killing formations that advocate killing, the defensive formations that advocate defense, the spirit gathering formations that advocate gathering spirits... Well, if you don't believe it, you can go and take a look, you don't have to read it in order, you can just pick one or two chapters and you can see it.

Let me mention, don't be too verbose. The protagonist weighing the pros and cons is not the main plot. Don't repeat it. Write more stories with different people to make the protagonist's image fuller. On a side note, I think the cool points of Gou Daoliu are: 1. Steady growth; 2. Different cultivation experiences in each realm; 3. The feeling of being an expert in the current generation.

I want to know what the bottleneck is during the Qi refining period. Every novel about cultivating immortals mentions that there is a bottleneck during the Qi refining period, but every novel about cultivating immortals doesn't mention anything about this bottleneck, so is this just a matter of leveling up without even knowing how to edit? At least I can give you an explanation. I don't mind the high-level or low-level ones. The low-level ones are like: the capacity of the Dantian is not enough and needs to be expanded; the meridians are seriously blocked and need to be opened; the quantity/quality of spiritual energy in the Dantian is not enough; the body strength is not enough; The high-level ones are like: avenue suppression; heavenly suppression; world suppression; spiritual root suppression; PS: high The level ones are based on a certain book. I forgot the title. It was in a fantasy novel a long time ago. The heavenly way of the universe places restrictions on all races with levels (those without levels and those with negative levels have no restrictions). The higher the level of cultivation, the more restrictions there are and the harder it is to break through. If you continue to break through to a certain stage, you will become a puppet of the way of heaven

The old lady's foot-wrapping cloth is watery, long, and fucking huge.

I started to enter the golden elixir in chapter 400, and now I am still in the golden elixir in chapter 833...

It's really an old lady's foot-binding cloth, smelly and long.

This is not hydrology anymore. It's just repetitive words.

Brother, you really don't need to learn so many spells, attack and defense, there is really no need. After reading more than two hundred chapters, you have only searched for the souls of two little Karami, run away when encountering trouble, and slip away when you see people. The sect gives me generous treatment, and I hide when the sect has trouble. Friends give sincerity, and friends come first. A Form Breaking Technique has several thousand words, and the plot has never been triggered once. Why did you spend so much time to learn it by writing so much? At first I thought it was foreshadowing the plot, but later I found out it was pure water.

What kind of rubbish book? Water that repeats one thing over and over again battles wits and courage with the air all day long

When I was listening to the book, I felt like there was a fly flying in front of me. In addition, the presence of Goldfinger was too low and I had no expectations. As time went by, I lost patience with the book. It wasn't that the author didn't write well, but it was wordy + Goldfinger was too useless. After I lost my patience, I felt very irritated when I read the book again!

It's not enough to analyze one thing on one side, and I have to analyze it from several angles back and forth. What I wrote at the beginning was not so watery, but later on it was all watery, and I said the same thing over and over again.

This kind of water method, which is completely nutritious and just repeats the content of the previous article, is too much to include tomatoes. You can skip the chapter and read it.

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The method of water word count is exactly the same

Less than two hundred chapters from becoming a god to Mahayana 😅