Surviving Immortality in the Cultivation World

I think it is quite creative and down-to-earth. It is able to observe things from the first perspective and is detailed and specific. Anyone with countless longevity would probably be so cautious. On the contrary, I find it quite interesting. If the whole day is not about sect competition or exploring secret realms ~ or struggling with monsters, it is too monotonous ~ it has become a routine. I hope that the author will continue to work hard to create, and if he can't reach the ceiling, he will stay till the end. The special skills such as Alchemy, Formation, Talisman Making, and Weapon Refining are written in more detail. Since lifespan is infinite, the content about Tianji Pavilion is added. Prying into Tianji consumes lifespan, and lifespan is just cabbage for He Song.

Lifespan is unlimited. I really don't know that it is unreasonable to practice spells or exercises that cost your life. Isn't it wrong to add content about the protagonist practicing forbidden spells every second to the original chapter?

Luo Li is so verbose. He talks a lot of nonsense. If the author is so verbose in real life, he will be beaten.

In order to make up the word count, the language is repetitive and wordy. A simple thing can be expressed clearly in a dozen words, but it is repeated over and over again, making it difficult to listen to it.

After reading two hundred chapters, I have just broken through the Qi training period. Every day is practice and practice, and there is no content at all. Apart from practice, it is still practice. What's the point? .

It's not interesting. It was okay in the past, but there are all kinds of double standards in the sect. The various benefits and benefits offered by the sect are designed to win people over, and everything they give you is just to win over you. Take advantage of all kinds of advantages and avoid all kinds of risks. Is that the right thing to do? But you are disgusting when you take advantage of all kinds of things and make excuses for yourself. When there is a war, you still tell your friends not to go. You have always said that three Zhujis are not a small force. Then I feel that Zhuji should be twenty or thirty at most. If you don't go, people won't be able to find it, and they won't be able to find it if they don't go, right? As for the spells and skills, you said you can remember them as you like. There are no restrictions. I don't believe it. When this spell wasn't leaked, there were too many loopholes in this book.

Water is bland and tasteless. After reading more than twenty chapters, I still couldn't find the desire to continue reading. I couldn't stand it anymore and gave it up.

It's too watery and the plot advances very slowly

It's a lot of nonsense, it makes me feel sick to my stomach.