Longevity: My Talent Keeps Improving Without Limit!

That's about it. Alchemy, talisman drawing, formations—every time the protagonist picks them up, he knows them instantly… He doesn't even bother to come up with a reason… Even a cheat code to boost his comprehension would be fine… The protagonist just insists on being able to do everything right away… It makes everyone in the cultivation world seem like idiots.

Song Yiqing: Everything revolves around the protagonist. She keeps her distance from her family, stays by his side, and even cultivates so she can stay with him longer. I even suspect she'd hand him a knife if he harmed her family. Lin Xueying: They rarely see each other.

Everything else is fine, but it lacks passion and feels disjointed. It's hard to immerse myself in the story. Despite being a time-travel novel, it reads like an ancient diary. There's no clash between modern and otherworldly thought, no sparks flying between scientific and metaphysical ideas.

Traditional novels often depict Qi Refining cultivators killing Foundation Establishment cultivators, Foundation Establishment cultivators killing Core Formation cultivators, and Core Formation cultivators killing Nascent Soul cultivators. These stories are considered inaccurate. Is it possible to include a scene where the protagonist, a Foundation Establishment cultivator, is severely injured by a Qi Refining cultivator? 🙂🙂

The various opportunities the protagonist receives are all perfectly suited to him and exactly what he desperately needs. Is this plot contrived? Is it stiff? Does it break the immersion?

Well written. Keep it up! It's rare to find such a good book lately. It has human warmth. The gatekeeper's tears after receiving the elixir... Thinking back to *A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality*, didn't Han Li also kill someone above his level? That's not a problem, as long as it's logical. It has human warmth, a sense of the mortal world, and a touch of immortality. Thumbs up!

The protagonist has plenty of spiritual roots, resources, and opportunities to reach the late Foundation Establishment stage, but his disciple is also about to reach Foundation Establishment—what the heck? Both have mid-grade and low-grade spiritual roots, and their cultivation is so fast! I don't think the author mentioned how many resources they sponsored; it seems ridiculously fast.

These past few chapters have been less enjoyable. They just rob and kill anyone who gets something good? There's no reason whatsoever. Everyone else only attacks the protagonist after provoking them and then reaps the rewards. This is just blatant robbery, instantly turning it into a dark story? They just steal from anyone who has something good?

Did the novel mention killing Lin Xueying's master? If not, then it's not worth reading. A protagonist who doesn't seek revenge even when being hunted is meaningless. Anyone who's read further on, please share. I initially thought the author, with their saintly attitude, wouldn't kill him, so I stopped reading. Before that, I posted a comment just to see if he was killed or not. 😥

This book somewhat imitates the novel "Eternal Green," and the author's writing skills are quite good, making it worth reading. However, there are some minor flaws. For example, the protagonist, in the mid-stage of Qi Refining, can perform divination accurately, and can casually divine good or bad fortune after a trip, as easily as drinking water, and can perform divination as many times as he…