Violet Heaven Thunder Lord

It's almost done. Every time the protagonist knows how to make alchemy, draw talismans, and formations, he can't find a reason. Plug-ins can also improve his understanding. The protagonist can just get started. So many people in the world of immortality are like idiots.

Song Yiqing: Everything focuses on the protagonist. She keeps distance from her family and stays with her. The purpose of training is to stay with the protagonist for a longer time. I doubt that she will hand the knife to her family if the protagonist attacks her. Lin Xueying: We get together less and stay apart more, knowing that the protagonist was murdered by the master, but when the master died, the first thing he did not care about the safety of the protagonist was that he was angry and wanted to avenge the master, and cared deeply about the family. Protagonist: He is always restless when he doesn't get what he wants. He treats Lin Xueying as a treasure and Song Yiqing as a tool and a fort. I can't understand that so many people think that the protagonist is good. In my opinion, he is evolving into a dog-licker, and I feel more and more. . . . . . .

Everything else is okay, but there is no passion, a sense of division, and it is hard to relate to. It is obviously a time-travel novel, but it looks like an ancient diary. There is no conflict between modern people's thoughts and thoughts from other worlds, and there is no spark of intersection of scientific thoughts and metaphysical thoughts. Well, it is the kind of novel that if the protagonist is a native creature in the world of cultivation, I will find this book well-written. However, the protagonist is a time-traveler, so it seems that there is no sense of substitution, and there is no diaosi flavor of a time-traveler.

In traditional novels, Qi training kills Zhuji, Foundation building can kill Jiedan, and Jiedan kills Nascent Soul, the novel is not rigorous, can it appear, the scene where the protagonist Zhuji is seriously injured by Qi training 🙂🙂

The various opportunities that the protagonist gets are just right for the protagonist and exactly what the protagonist urgently needs. Is this plot intentional? Stiff or not? Can there be a drama?

Well written. Keep up the good work. It's rare to see such a good book recently. Humane. The gatekeeper shed tears when he got the elixir. . . . . If you think about the legend of mortals cultivating immortals, didn't Han Li also kill people by leapfrogging his rank? This is not a problem, as long as it is logical. It has a human touch, a sense of worldliness, and a sense of immortality. Top

The protagonist has a lot of spiritual roots, resources and opportunities to reach the late stage of foundation building, but the apprentice also has to build a foundation. What the hell, they are all middle-grade spiritual roots and low-grade spiritual roots. The cultivation is so fast. I don't think about it. How many resources have been sponsored? It feels ridiculously fast, some When I saw that low-grade spiritual roots and middle-grade spiritual roots could turn into real elixirs, I felt that the spiritual roots were of little use. The speed of cultivation was all fake, and the effect on the quality of the elixirs was also weird. There were high-grade spiritual roots that turned into fake elixirs, and there were low-grade spiritual roots and middle-grade spiritual roots that turned into real pills. Maybe it's because the update is so difficult that it affects my thinking ability. I even forget how much time has passed 😅

These chapters are not good to read. Do you want to rob and kill others when you see them getting good things? There is no reason at all. Others only take action after provoking the protagonist and then get full of loot. This is a direct grab, and it instantly turns into a dark novel? Just grab it to see who has the good stuff? Then can everyone who can defeat the protagonist also steal the protagonist? So the protagonist was not robbed and killed just because he was the protagonist, not cautious. There is an old saying that your thoughts are worthy of your suffering, so the villain Jie Xiu deserved to meet the protagonist. What about the suffering of the protagonist Jie Xiu?

Is there a master who wrote about killing Lin Xueying? If he didn't, then it would be fine if he didn't read this novel. There is no point in having a protagonist who doesn't take revenge when being hunted. Anyone who has read the following can tell me. I guessed that the author was like a holy mother and wouldn't be able to kill her, so I didn't want to read it. I made a comment when I saw it before, just to see if he could kill her. 😥

This book is a bit imitated by the book Eternal Green. The author's writing skills are pretty good, so you can still read it. So far, there are still some minor pitfalls in this book. For example, the protagonist in the article can do divination in the middle of his Qi training and it is very accurate. He can divination whether it is bad or good just by going out. Divining once is as easy as drinking water. Divining several times is like divining several times without any cost. Let's not talk about whether divination is difficult or not. According to the author's setting, divination can be done in the middle stage of Qi training. When it comes to divination with the foundation and golden elixir, it is not something that can be done by just looking at it. However, in this book, more than a dozen of the foundations have died. None of them can do divination, and the protagonist is not very special. If there is no special place, just relying on the protagonist to pick up a divination book is too ridiculous. Just relying on a book to predict divination, there is no airtight wall in the world, then it can be said that divination has long been ruined in the entire world of immortality. It is impossible for people to build foundations.