Begin the Journey Westward and Become a Woodcutter.

I just read the first few chapters. I don't have any comments. I think the writing is okay, but I feel a little uncomfortable. I wrote about worrying about my mother and being filial to my mother. When the fog came, my inner activities became "cultivating immortals". I never thought that my father entered the fog and didn't come out for four years. The part in the fog was actually a choice of the protagonist. Mother or immortal fate. The mother is seriously ill and the protagonist enters the fog. After a long time, the mother will definitely not survive. In fact, I prefer dark novels and selfishness. Killing innocent people indiscriminately is acceptable, but making choices about family relationships is still uncomfortable to watch.

The protagonist is not decisive enough and not smart enough. The points of conflict are a bit stiff. I can only say that I can see it.

It's well written, please give me more updates, author.