The Furong Master in the Red Mansion

The author has been conceived of this book for a long time and only started writing it two months ago. It has been several years since the last book was published (it was interrupted due to the epidemic and graduation). About 150 chapters have been written so far. The quantity is large and the food is full. The self-tested product is stable, so you can eat it with confidence. But it is undeniable that the judges have put forward many constructive suggestions during this period. What troubles me the most is the proportion of "Garden Opera". It is true that the core attraction of Red Mansions is the garden opera. But if a protagonist who is fifteen or sixteen years old hangs out in the garden all day, intellectually speaking, he will clearly feel the whole process of the Jia family from prosperity to decline, but there will be no way to save it. So in the early stage, in order to quickly increase the protagonist's power, the author arranged a lot of scenes outside the garden. Some readers commented that it was unsightly. It is undeniable that the author's conception of this book is not pure, and the protagonist must spend half of his time outside the garden. But every step taken by the protagonist will not be wasted. The author has left a lot of foreshadowing, which will involve the obscure political lines in the original work. Of course, in subsequent creations, the share of garden opera will gradually increase. Forgive me for being too greedy. I don't want to create the girls in the book in a superficial way. The author wants every relationship the protagonist has experienced to have a beginning and an end (although it may not be possible.) I have been struggling for a long time in the past few days whether to make major changes, and finally decided to follow the original idea. I don't know what the result will be, but I'll wait until I finish writing this book🙏🏻

At the beginning of the chapter, we had to take in the maid, and I thought it was a different Red Mansion, so I would like to congratulate the readers on seeing the protagonist take in Grandma Liu soon, byebye

It's too lame. The Red Mansion doesn't write about garden dramas. Half of it is about apprenticeships, calligraphy and poetry lessons. Who wants to watch this stuff?

You have traveled through Jia Rong, why did you keep Jia Zhen? With Jia Zhen here, Jia Rong can't do anything, especially since the protagonist has the imperial examination route and filial piety, which is insurmountable. Then Jia Zhen can manipulate pig's feet at will, such as sleeping with his wife...

Look at the title and start reading the chapter where Jia Zhen gets her comeuppance. If Jia Zhen can wait until it is released, then she won't read it.

It's well written, but it's strange that it's not very popular. It is better written than what the editor recommends.

Passing by to recommend books, cheers for the author💪The Muse will favor every author who perseveres.

The first ten or so chapters are quite serious about solving problems, but the eleven and two chapters obviously don't know what to foreshadow. If you don't read quickly or solve Jia Zhen's hidden dangers, you will never get ahead. I don't know what to write here.

I just read three or five chapters, and I think it's okay 🙂 But it's only one chapter, so the introduction is almost boring.