The Nine Heavens Immortal Clan

I read it when the new book was first published, but as I kept it waiting, the thought of the male lead being a single person in the comments section made me not want to read anymore. It's not a family-themed story, so I could still read it, but this family-themed story without a female lead is just ridiculous. Even if you just married someone and didn't include her, it would be fine. The thought of it being a family-themed story with an unfinished plot makes it impossible to continue reading.

I think the author wrote it really well.

The writing is very unengaging. The protagonist, a Qi Refining cultivator, gets involved in the struggle between the five major powers right from the start, which left me completely confused. Furthermore, the description of the protagonist in the first dozen or so chapters is unclear at all; my understanding of him is very vague, making it completely unappealing.

It's written too far-fetchedly. It's always a riddle-maker pretending to be profound, and even the author hasn't figured out the later levels and plot.

Honestly, after watching for so long, there are several reasons why your grades aren't improving. First: Your early stages were too bland, lacking any exciting moments, and the plot was somewhat confusing and unpredictable, making it difficult to discern certain details.

During the Qingming Festival, many elders of the Zhang family gathered together. "Clan leader, this year's Qingming Festival might be quite unusual," an elder said, looking at Zhang Shenling. Zhang Shenling looked out of the pavilion with eyes full of sorrow. Just as everyone was waiting for Zhang Shenling to speak, another clan elder spoke up. "

"Ah Qing, stop playing! It's time to eat!" Zhang Qing's older brother looked at Zhang Qing in the mud, covered his mouth with both hands, made a megaphone shape, and shouted at Zhang Qing who was playing in the mud. Upon hearing this, Zhang Qing turned his mud horse around and sped off towards his older brother.

Under the scorching sun lies a decaying, lifeless land; this wilderness has long since lost most of its original nutrients. Although it's not yellow sand, this land is not far from becoming a desert. All the vitality of this land was drained away by the Divine Eagle Temple's grand formation hundreds of years ago to support their cultivation and help their abbot open the Heavenly Gate.

The operations manager said that if the post reaches 50 comments, you should write a 1000-word fanfic. (Four chapters completed) @reader

Hello everyone, I'd like to recommend another family-themed novel, the kind that involves the power of several lifetimes. If you're interested, you can check it out: 😃Xuanjian Immortal Clan