The Nine Heavens Immortal Clan

My personal feeling is average. Although the author wants to describe it very grandly, it looks very strange. A rookie can handle all kinds of immortals and demons. They are just like wild animals, and they don't realize how powerful they are. I wrote hundreds of pieces, but one sect and four clans couldn't finish it. It was like a prefecture-level city. How about cultivating the world of immortality? Is it okay to have a bigger layout?

The writing is good, there are no mainstream clichés, the writing and plot are good, but the protagonist is too smooth, he is like a destiny child, it is obvious, but the villain does not know, the protagonist kills the person opposite him for no reason, and people who are several realms higher than him do not come to kill him, but instead send one after another to challenge him, which is not in line with normal logic.

Well, pretty good. But, why do the Zhang family kill people without distinguishing innocence? Just moved there for resources. Just start expanding. What? Killing all the surrounding families. If the Zhang family is not the protagonist, how would the Zhang family feel if this happens? It's wonderfully written. But I didn't see any sense of affection and justice in it. I feel the cruelty of cultivating immortality.

It's very beautiful and well written. Why do so few people read it? This could be considered a fairy tale.

If you use other people's spells, won't others see it? There is also a Journey to the West sewn in the middle. The people left to a strange place. Their strength is not that good and they are invincible. And the span is too big. A baby plays with a woman and has a child.

The author must be a newcomer. After reading more than ten chapters, the world view is not explained clearly, and there is no plot advancement. There are too many descriptions of the environment. Anyway, it just doesn't attract my desire to read on.

The plot setting is brainless and childish

I don't know how to evaluate it, I just felt that it was weird to watch, it was bland, there was no rest and plot, and there was no family, one sentence here and there, I don't know what I want to write.

To make it look good, you have to be patient and read it carefully. There are a few typos!

I've read more than fifty chapters and I think it's okay. At least it's not about the rise of waste or anything like that. The family is pretty good too.