Eternal Life Isn't Immortality

It's still the same, there is no story, there are too many explanations, and the key settings are not attractive. These nine chapters are as boring as reading the manual.

Why are the golden finger openings so big in every book?

It's uncomfortable to look at it in the clouds and fog. Please optimize the style.

3-Jiutian Fat Sausage is good, it's a pity, come on

2. This book is well written. The first part of the first book was very exciting, but the back part was a bit awkward. Let's try to make the whole book outstanding.

This one is no good, it's not good. I've finished the two good ones, and I've also read a few chapters of the two bad ones.

There are three elements in the review of the question - the paradise of Qin, where there is no place for immortals. Common sense of humanities and history. ="××Novel"

Such strong writing skills, the author is so awesome that I want to take advantage of your writing skills

This chapter of the mountain ghost finally has some meaning. Since I am good at writing in a foggy way, I might as well write it in a more mysterious way 🤭🤭🤭.