The Ferocious Starry Sky

Keep going! Although not many people read it, and the author may not be writing out of pure passion, there's still hope, still something to aspire to. Even the greatest authors and platinum-level writers started as beginners. Good results are certainly a good thing, but don't be discouraged if they're not ideal. Just write according to your own ideas.

The pacing is too fast; from the beginning, it's completely confusing, leaving viewers with no idea what's going on.

It looks a bit confusing, the overall coherence is weak, and the important figures in it don't seem like important figures at all, they're just fooling around in their own homes, is that how important figures should behave?

"Nangong Yiyun? Although you are a member of the Galactic Star Council, you cannot interfere in the affairs of Sirius at will. The affairs of Sirius are naturally under the jurisdiction of our Sirius Council." Zhu Rong angrily threw the things in her hand to the ground and looked at the sweet-looking woman in the video call, who was known as the most beautiful senator.

Is it fierce enough? Is it ferocious enough?

Actually, the world-building and overall plot of the author's books are good, but the way each plot is filled in is a bit painful to read. They are incomplete and awkward, and the character interactions and plot development lack strength. I also really liked the previous book, but it just became a monotonous diary in the middle and later stages.

Author, I'd like to offer some personal suggestions: rewrite the Star Lord's storyline or develop Dark Star's story. The author's description of the real-world planetary war seems very exciting, but I find it quite boring and even a bit tedious.

Honestly, it's really frustrating to watch.

Aside from the premise, it's utterly uninteresting. Despite having over 800 chapters, it's completely devoid of any engaging content. I don't recommend wasting your time and energy on it; you'd be better off finding a new book with 300,000 words already written.

I read part of it, but I really couldn't stand it anymore. I'm not saying the author should write for love, but at least they should do their job properly. There are so many spelling mistakes, the characters are written in a disjointed way, and the sentences are incomprehensible. This is not a matter of writing ability, it's a matter of attitude.