The Eternal Punishment Dragon in the Prison

Only evil dragons are good-looking. I want to see good dragons and write them myself.

Eternal Punishment Dragon (dnd3r)

The more I read, the more awkward it became. This book was clearly well written in the early stages, but then subscriptions dropped off like crazy, and there was a big problem with the pacing. Comparing it with the God of the First Life, the god with a high-dimensional perspective in this book is equivalent to the person on the other side in the first life. He can play with the timeline and write the script at will. The protagonist under immortality is equivalent to the creation in the first life. The most difficult thing in life is fortune. Under nature, you are a complete puppet. You don't know that you are being played by the other side. God has its own consciousness and knows that you are being played by the other side, but you have no ability to resist. The protagonist of this book is also at this stage at the moment, crushing ordinary legends and nine-ring mages, and preparing for people with high-dimensional perspectives to play and extract information at will, and test again and again. This stage is the most uncomfortable for the protagonist. How does the Supreme Being solve this problem of the protagonist? First, it lengthens the rhythm, and then strengthens the excitement of the early stage, watching the protagonist upgrade one copy at a time, and then in the section on the other side, in order to describe the play of the other side on the fate, the focus of the text is on the encounters of other fates. For example, Wang Siyuan, Han Guang, and Overlord are all superior to the protagonists in terms of intelligence, ability, and strength, but they are treated as chess pieces by the other side and played around at will. The protagonist actually didn't encounter anything, and even if he did, it would only be passed quickly in two volumes. Reduced the pain of "awake puppets". The structure of this book is wrong. A large part of the content is devoted to the description of the protagonist instantly killing a novice but being toyed by the immortal who has a high-dimensional perspective. The pleasure of crushing the novice is almost nonexistent, but the frustration of being toyed by the immortal is a lot. The more I watched it, the more uncomfortable it became, and the subscription dropped more and more. There is another blocking point, which is that the protagonist's Dao Fruit is broken and cannot be repaired in a foreseeable short time. This section is very obvious. Although the author has good writing skills, he is still new to online writing. The most taboo thing in online novels is the decline of the protagonist's skills, gains, and realm. This aspect of poisonous points is second only to cuckoldry in the online literary world.

With the name of the protagonist, I always think that the protagonist is transformed from stone and can connect to the brains of stone people around the world.

He was a eunuch, and then he was exempted 😅

Come on, author. If you can always guarantee this kind of quality, I will order it all. It is better than the Time Dragon book. It is similar to Wuwu's Dr. Green Dragon and Frost Wings. It is similar to soft science fiction and has a certain internal logic. I like this kind of dragon text. The front of the Time Dragon book is good, but the back is purely YY.

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. Most people don't know much about the rules of DND. Except for enthusiasts, few understand it. When you write a novel, you don't write out the rules of the game. You need to make it understandable to passers-by. You write so many panels and skills that others cannot understand. It is also difficult for you to write a dragon text. You cannot completely follow the DND template. Not everyone is interested in this set. You are screening readers. It doesn't matter if you write and play. It is difficult to write like this if you want to make some money by writing a book.

Lawful evil, standard bad guy template, it would be more interesting if it were chaotic evil, standard psychopath

Now after reading the latest chapter, I suddenly remembered something very strange. It seems that the protagonist came out of the egg less than three years ago or five years ago. Both bronze dragons are only one and a half years old. It gives me the feeling that other legendary mages are wasting their time. Then the protagonist also became Bahamut's chosen one. He almost became an immortal existence. It was just a lack of knowledge that led to failure. The more I look at it, the more amazing it becomes.

Recommended words: I was born as a human, but I traveled through time and became an eternal punishment dragon. I am really not used to it. In the desperate and dark plane of Casserly, I am a little dragon trembling. You, a blind original demon, dare to touch my bad luck and watch me swallow you up. Although the Eternal Punishment Dragon with the panel is very weak now, I can survive. When I create legendary magic step by step, I will be the master of this plane. What to watch: A good dragon novel with a game-like worldview. The protagonist wants to rely on Gou to become stronger, but things will not go as he wishes, and a new grind is about to come. The whole text is funny and light-hearted, and has an anime-like sense of déjà vu, which can be well integrated into it. The plot is well-founded and there is no logical inconsistency. Xiaolong also has his own dream. Xiaolong, who wants to be the warden, has to fight wits and courage with the creatures here. Here, you will experience various tests of life and death for rights and survival. Xiaolong struggled little by little for his dream, created legendary spells, and took steps forward little by little for his dream. The logic of the book is reasonable, the plot has ups and downs, there are battles of wits and courage with other dark creatures, and there is also a step-by-step forbearance for the dream. Will Xiaolong realize his dream and become the warden of this plane? Let us stay tuned for the following! {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}