Hunter: I'm Really Not a Mind-Killer

I've been here since the first chapter was published. I just couldn't bear it for half a year. In the past two days, I finally couldn't bear it and killed Nian🐷. Hey, I should have endured it for one more year.

A very excellent work, with stunning settings and sophisticated writing, which is really rare; And the author dares to write about a subject such as full-time hunters, which has a relatively small audience. I really admire his courage and love 🌹

It's well written, and I kept reading it even though I haven't read the original work. It's essentially a good read. But there are still shortcomings? Or if there are things that I don't like, it's just a suggestion, just listen to it.                                                                                                                                   The plot serves the plot of the original work, which makes it difficult for the author to change the outline. He can only hide himself in seclusion, etc., And then participate in some key plots after exiting the seclusion;         2. Characters, the author deliberately refrained from killing important characters in the plot, such as Killua's brother, at least until the highlight of his plot is over. Either the plot protects him, or he hides and ignores him. When he saw Killua's brother in or in the Sky Arena, according to the protagonist's description, he was angry, but then. The hunter selection, rather, can be said to be what the original work is like, and then the protagonist's character begins to change at this time and even later. You want to say that he can avenge those who helped him at the beginning, or make a statement like "Can felons keep rice for eating"? Although I can't completely regard him as a chivalrous person who punishes evil and promotes good. He is a good person with a good heart (although good people seem to be out of fashion on the Internet now, so I wish you all the best when you meet a bad person), but he can also be considered a chaotic and kind-hearted person. Then what to say, Hisoka is killing and Killua's brother is killing. I won't say why the protagonist doesn't stop it, but he should always be disgusted. Could it be said that Hisoka's murder is not considered a felon? This may be due to the setting of the original work. For example, the selection of hunters is like this, regardless of life or death. But this rather makes me more confused. The hunter organization should be regarded as a more formal organization. If this is the approach, it would rather make me feel disgusted. Of course, it doesn't matter whether I'm disgusting or not. Rather, I want you, the readers, to think this is a disgusting behavior. Then I used myself as a benchmark and thought that the protagonist, who is a civilized person like me, should at least have some objections to this kind of behavior. The conclusion is that the author thinks that the protagonist is fine like this. He struggled a little without resisting, and thought that what he wanted to do with the president's authority without being interfered with was that. This point can also be listed as a point where it is difficult for the author to escape from the original plot. 3. The upper limit of the original work. Well, except for a few people like me who read this book, most of them read everything in the second dimension. So if I say the original text is rubbish, you will definitely disagree. Then I don't want to say that the original text is rubbish. Being liked by a certain number of people proves that it has certain advantages. But if you put it to the general public, the second dimension is just a circle after all. The people inside have more or less knowledge and customs than other groups. Frankly speaking, I hope that the second dimension can jump out of this circle. Jumping out does not mean leaving. Being in the second dimension circle is the world. If you jump out, it is a part of your heart. OK, I won't talk too much about private goods. The upper limit of the original work. To be honest, I have admired the IP of Hunter for a long time, but just as I found it unacceptable after seeing the video clip of the Ant-Man chapter, I still find it difficult to accept this part of the plot of the book. In the original work, this part of the plot was too unacceptable to me. In this article, the dissatisfaction accumulated in the previous work burst out through this thing. Let me put it bluntly, my dissatisfaction comes from the structure of the entire worldview. The people are too bad, the literature is too chaotic, and people with special abilities use force to break the ban. I can accept that when individual strengths are unequal, the development of civilization should basically be as expected. But this is based on the absence of external pressure on civilization. When the Dark Continent setting is moved, the internal turmoil of the entire world is like playing house, so the writing is too shallow and the thinking is not deep. The creation of the second game based on this, without making any major changes, just followed the old path. If you really want to write a passionate fantasy light novel like this, it would be best to cover the chronology of civilization, or not involve it at all. If you want to write it, the entire framework must be good enough. At this time, someone said, why is it like this? I just want it to be fun. Because if I don't write it in full, I will be criticized by people like me, haha. This is also the cognitive difference between circles. Generally speaking, people in the circle have similar perceptions. You can refer to sasaengfan for this. Some sasaengfans say that idols are more important than parents. Your unreasonable treatment of her is the same as the unreasonable unreasonable treatment of other circles towards you. So the choice between the unreasonable proves that I used historical materialism as a weapon, and someone used the anime I watched as a basis. I think I won, and he can also think that he won. Of course, I can't lie to myself, and it's hard for others to say. Returning to the topic again, the original work describes a chaotic world, so what about the second creation? To make the world a better place? Or is it worse? Walking on its original path, I discovered that the world is still the same, with endless A-level adventurers and unbeatable dark continent monsters. So what's the use of the protagonist? What's the use of killing the original boss? The world is still the same fucked-up world. Even people who weren't fucked at first have become rotten. So what's the use? In the original work, why did the ancients transfer human beings to this continent? Are they afraid of being beaten and then let the dogs live here until they die? I won't give the answer, but I think people can survive because of hope. Speaking of this, I just mentioned a few shortcomings of the original text. Most of them are personal belongings. Because I think it is just my opinion after all. Everyone has different opinions and the answers they come up with are also different. However, there is truth among differences, which is the prerequisite for people to understand the world correctly; under this, people should have common understandings in certain places, which is the prerequisite for distinguishing races; and in the case of common understanding, it is the basis for interpersonal communication and the prerequisite for various circles. I hope people can step out of their own circles and understand the world from a broader perspective. Finally, this article is really well written, at least the first three hundred chapters are guaranteed, and the last two hundred chapters vary from person to person. Can you watch it well without thinking about it? Then let's talk about a simple example to understand why fantasy novels need logic. In fact, there is no need for logic. But after you explain it, it becomes necessary, because it has changed from fantasy and incomprehensible to something that can be explored and understood. Just like when an ancient person saw a modern giant ship, he directly said that it was a god. No one explored the incomprehensible things (in fact, they would). But when he said that it was something like a ship, some people chased it and asked who controlled it, how it moved, how it was built, etc. Fantasy things are best explained by fantasy. Why is there spiritual energy in the world? Because there are spiritual veins. Why are there spiritual veins? They are born and nourished. Why do you care so much? But if you want to say that it is a neutrino, I have to ask, what is the exergonic formula, how do you do it, and why do you have reverse entropy? This is why some novels are criticized for their settings. It is because this setting is understandable, and even others understand it better than the author.

... Maybe it's because many people in the comment area said how good the hunter fanfic written by the author was before, and I had high expectations for this book before reading it. From what I've read so far, I feel that the events were written for a long time, probably to set up the plot, but the climax was not exciting enough, and the overall feeling was very bland... The plot that I can still remember is the first time the protagonist becomes someone, and the moment when he makes a choice to get that person's humanity. It was a bit touching at the time, but not much.

It has a very original flavor. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into the restoration of the original characters. Conceiving a complete set of original plots also tests the author's skills. Being able to challenge these in fan stories is really worthy of encouragement. I look forward to the follow-up stories!

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Writing style, plot direction, and combat ingenuity A very hunter-like novel, very good The author has the personality idea of ​​trying to figure out the original characters It is a pity that the protagonist's ability grows and improves a little too fast In reality, the hunter's current plot does not have many and wide The protagonist progresses too fast and can easily become unparalleled in the middle and late stages Or the plot cannot be written Unless you are particularly good at making up stories in the dark continent in the middle and late stages.

I have been refreshing at 10:30 in the evening and waiting for updates. Zi Zhu, do you know that one chapter a day is really not enough?

So far, the book is pretty good, but it's too short.

As a mature coder, you can afford it

To be honest, I have always believed that the ability to read is the most balanced ability system. Conforms to the price category similar to equivalent exchange. A development method that is consistent with the character's personality and can freely develop abilities. The state of Qi that fluctuates according to the character's mood and state may not be well expressed in words. Comics are indeed the best carrier of this idealistic ability. I just read some of the author's complaints, and I feel the same way. I don't know if some readers have actually seen the original animation and comics of Hunter. Although Nen ability is very common, it still does not belong to universal knowledge. A considerable number of Nen ability users are completely "baptized" (immortality after being attacked by Nen ability people). For them, basic knowledge such as tangjue and training is extremely precious. At least from reading comics and animations or experiencing them, most people with telekinesis are only satisfied with being able to "release" their own abilities. They don't have a good idea of ​​how to make their abilities stronger and further. On the other hand, although the average physique in Hunter World is extremely good and the growth potential is extremely high, you can get 8 hours of long-distance running and 4 tons of arm strength just by exercising. But firearms are still a very, very high threat. Don't think that nesting gold is the norm. There aren't that many people in the reinforcement system who can harden bullets or even rocket launchers. The enhanced system is the most suitable for combat, with the strongest attack power and the strongest defense power of the entire system. But don't forget that there is also "flow" in this system. A similar battle, the scene that impressed me the most, was the scene where Hisoka fought Wutong because of Ilmi's request. Although Fat Pig wrote Hisoka in a somewhat ridiculous way, I think no one would deny that Hisoka is a top powerhouse. However, Hisoka like this is not as good as Wutong in terms of attack power, defense power, and instant burst of mobility, but the result of that battle was massacre. Wutong holds gold coins in his hand and shoots them out with a snap of his fingers. The power is comparable to a cannon, and it is child's play to break tree trunks several meters thick. There is no doubt that Wutong can definitely win if it is a direct exchange of offense and defense similar to a card game, but the excitement of the hunter's battle is here. Although Wutong has an advantage in apparent statistics, his combat experience, flexibility, battlefield layout, psychological quality, and "flow", the most basic and important ability in combat, are overwhelmingly weaker than Hisoka. So Hisoka fell from the sky and Wutong was killed on the spot. So I still agree with the author's description of the battle. Observe the situation, battlefield layout, attack the enemy's weak point, and kill with one blow. Most of the battles in Hunter comics also look like this (the reason why there is an illusion that it doesn't look like this is usually due to the strengthening type). As for Moyu, except that his abilities are a bit too buggy, he is too cool to be cool, and has no daily life. At least the battle aspect is pretty comfortable for me. One more thing, it's only been a few chapters, but the ability is so strong, and the brigade will be launched immediately to encircle and suppress it. Basically, there are two directions. After the fight, the brigade will be wiped out; both sides will suffer, the brigade will suffer heavy casualties, and the remaining people will wait for a few chapters before taking them out to torture. I hope the author is different from what I thought, 😅 I said so much, actually because Fat Pig was complaining a little. I typed a few words in this chapter and found that what I wanted to say seemed too long, and it was not appropriate to say it here. So we moved outside and chatted a lot. Of course, what I am talking about is just my own understanding of the animation, comics and Fat Pig novels about Hunter. If you have any different opinions, you are right, don't come and argue with me. Finally, let me say this, Fat Pig, if you could see it, I would actually prefer you not to advance the plot so quickly. It took a lot of effort to create a bond between the original characters and the characters you created, but you were obsessed with advancing the plot quickly, which made it impossible to see the small changes in the characters. Other aspects of life made the characters seem mechanical and rigid. I felt this way when I first watched Pirates: Trouble. I really like the Shura scene between Perona and Sunny and several other female characters. With so many people gathered together, there should be many small scenes that can be described. It is these scenes that make me feel that this character is flesh and blood. Rather than a bunch of flat people with labels. Mod only knows about training, killing people, and sitting on the throne with a smiling mask looking down and drinking. Pele only knows how to eat and fight with Bebo. Luo only knows about research, being cool and being embarrassed by being cool. Besides tap dancing, what else does Raphael do on a daily basis? What are your hobbies? What do you say and do when you meet other people? What do you like to eat? And how to spend a peaceful day? Similarly, can these things be included in this novel? Not just level up, kill people, and be worshiped. Instead, write some more warm things in the next chapter. As far as I am concerned, how should I deal with that unfit father? What is the story of my long-dead mother? Who should I know about? Just watch the two child brides beside you, don't you talk all day long? The rumored girlfriend who loves to play games is nowhere to be seen. After playing the game for 10 days and 10 nights, could the two of them just touch the controller and not talk? No collision, no passion? There must be some, but if you don't write it down, it won't exist. At least I can't see or feel these warm things. At this point, I wish all my friends who see this good health.

I really don't have a long memory Moyo: Idiot (⁠•⁠ˇ⁠_⁠ˇ⁠•⁠)⁠ ﾉ Ilmi: (⚆ - ⚆⁠#)

Moyu uses AI to run, with black hair and blue eyes, pretty face, black mind energy and sword ∠( ᐛ ∠)_

Moyu

Zizhu, why don't you try to write a variety comic? There are hundreds of pictures in one time and space. It can be simplified and let us read more. There is also a shortage of writers with good writing skills at the starting point. Ruqing has tricked himself to death. I believe you will be able to become a god all the way when there is a vacancy in this variety comic.

I think it would be great if the author could finish the ant chapter, which is already the greatest tribute to the fandom. If I want to write next, it will be a new chapter, a new story that is different from the original story, but it is limited by fandom. The readers who will follow it next are the readers who like to read this story, and there may be fewer. Those who are satisfied with the fandom may stay in the ant chapter. I believe in Purple Pig's ability. This is the first time I've seen someone write a hunter fan with this style of writing and plot. With your ability, you will shine even if you don't write about hunters, and many readers have followed you. Even if you start a new story, the new setting will be great. Perhaps the author still has some thoughts about the hunter and wants to finish writing the initial framework, but the pits and stories left by the hunter are very huge. If he continues to write, there are V5, Dark Continent, and Biyang De, which are endless. So, when the number of people watching and subscribing is getting smaller and smaller, I don't think about taking a break and conceiving a novel story. At the same time, I don't have to be limited by the characters and the background power of the original fan. I am afraid that I will write a different character. Even for me, my longing for the telekinesis ability of a full-time hunter has ended here. After reading the two novels of Purple Pig, I can say that I have completely let go of my original thoughts about hunters. It is really not easy to continue writing another person's work. It will be very difficult. It is better to consider writing a new story, a story of your own. You can write about multiple protagonists. It is obvious that the protagonist is very powerful and powerful, but he is already overwhelmed. When writing about Moyu, the strongest human being, you can consider killing everyone in a brutal way, going straight into the kingdom, and taking back the flaming eye. Now that it's ready to end, let's put on a grand show and highlight a kill. Readers want to see rivers of blood.

Purple Pig is really a master at writing fan fiction, and all of Naruto, One Piece and Hunter are very interesting.

Let me talk about my own feelings about Purple Pig, a hunter so far. First of all, some things were laid out at the beginning, such as thoughts after death. Numao has been laying the groundwork. It can be guessed that it should be a very important copy. It is quite interesting. In addition, I recently watched Summer Reappearance, which is quite interesting. In addition, there are settings for the main character's telekinesis ability and so on. Secondly, there are relatively few original characters in the first part, and the plot felt a little slow at first. When Moyu meets Bisji, escorts Sambika, and the current incident involving the marsh man unfolds, it is still interesting to watch. I am looking forward to the follow-up performance. Finally, I can feel that in fact, this book, Purple Pig, compared to Gourmet Hunters, if you want to dig out some hunter stuff, may have a threshold for some people, but it is indeed of high quality. I really like your persistence. Just like in the last book, someone said that Luo is a bit of a nanny. But for me, who likes the original characters such as Killua, Gon, Biscuit, etc., It is also very interesting to watch the little brother grow up. For readers like me, it is also fun to have Killua the cat and the little brother. ps: Purple Pig 8.1 Will be released on the shelves, and I will give you a reward of 10,000 points on the day of release. Keep up the good work.

Everyone can ask questions here when watching Hunters (let some senior fans help you understand), or express some of your own opinions (let's analyze Hunters together). Please have a friendly discussion🤣

To be honest, this is one of the best hunter novels I have ever read. Purple Pig is really awesome. (It's just a bit short)

The emotional scenes are a bit bad, I suggest you write less of them

I really hope that the next one will be Fairy Tail or Bleach. But these two books are really difficult to write... Fairy Tail itself has problems with its combat power. Just saying "because we are Fairy Tail" can lead to a counterattack. It is also true that blackening is three times stronger and whitewashing is three times weaker. But there is one thing that Fairy Tail does very well. The CP is always consistent and does not make people feel stomach ache. The speculation of CP and charm does not exist here. Children just give birth to it. The Grim Reaper is purely demanding. In addition to comics, radio dramas, official novels, and even games were all set by the bartender (the author of Bleach). Due to various problems during that period, Bleach was directly cut in half. As a result, various settings and backgrounds were reflected in the official novels and radio dramas that were later added to the plot. Many holes that were not noticed in the comics or were not filled in will be reflected here. The simplest example: At the beginning, Uncle Zangetsu said to Ichito, my name is... And it was blacked out. At that time, everyone thought Ichito was not qualified to know his name. In fact, Zangetsu was talking about Yhwach, but it was blacked out by the monk; for example, in the Fullbringing Technique, if the captains of the Shinigami did not show up to lend their spiritual power to Ichito, then he would turn into a Quincy and fight back. There are even several times when a family may become a Quincy. For example, when they first grabbed the spirit chain, they didn't grab the many white ones that symbolized the Quincy, so they grabbed the black one that symbolized the Death... These are all in the comics, but they are not reflected in deeper things. They are all reflected in the radio drama and official novels... And the Hell Chapter is still being updated, who knows what will happen next...

Regarding the fact that Zhuzhu was not inspired to write a book and went to Thailand to collect stories and became a girl...

I also came from the previous book Food Hunter. Frankly speaking, this book of Purple Pig is more perfect than the previous one. One is the beginning. The different origins of the two protagonists can show the author's progress. The beginning of the previous book's Meteor Street can illustrate the problem. Togashi is everywhere. In the past, there were no poisonous points in the beginning of Meteor Street, but now it is full of poisonous points. I don't blame Purple Pig for this. After all, Japanese cartoonists are all like this. If he doesn't fill in some pitfalls, you'll have to guess for the rest of your life. If he fills in some pitfalls, the fan fiction you wrote will immediately change. But this time, Purple Pig changed the origin of the protagonist to the son of Chido's best friend. This origin not only allows the author to demonstrate his ability to write plots, but also allows the protagonist to have a more reasonable origin. As Chita is a supporting role, there is a high probability that Togashi will not I will describe it specially, so it will be much more stable this time. One is the growth trajectory of the protagonist. In Food Hunter, to be honest, I don't like Luo. He has too many double standards. On the one hand, he does not want the brigade to kill people, and on the other hand, he does not stop the brigade. In fact, there are good solutions in the early stage. Kill Chrollo or absorb Machi yourself. Nobunaga and Wojin form a team with you as the leader. Spider-head's brigade, instead of stopping the brigade after the Kupilaka incident, made me feel that Luo was out of place in the hunter. In the early plot, Luo basically didn't change anything. I can only say that I can see that the author at that time was very happy writing fan fiction, and the current protagonist makes me feel that it is very close to the original work, which makes me feel that it is not inconsistent to put the protagonist in the hunter now.

This is the best hunter fanfic I have ever read. I think the author has made significant progress in this one compared to the previous one, Food Hunter. I hope the author can write a perfect hunter.

Clones, shadows, or Moyo's appearance in a certain state in the future are in line with the hunter's style. The most important thing is that he is handsome

Togashi the old thief said that he would not deliberately manipulate the character's behavior, but think about what the character's personality would do in the environment set by the author, and events would happen naturally.

It's over. Thank you for your hard work, Purple Pig. As a hunter lover, I'm glad to meet you.

Haven't opened a new book yet? How long have you felt that you are the best author among fans?

The story after fighting the ants feels very rushed. It feels like a lot of foreshadowing has not been taken back. Even more so in the Dark Continent, there is no smooth rhythm like before, and the battle scenes feel a bit tasteless. It's an anticlimax.