Sword Art Online: Survive

Coming from the author's hunter fanfic, I had high expectations because I had heard about this book seven or eight years ago. After reading it, I was very disappointed. The writing style is too obvious for a fledgling. I have my own ideas about the treatment of characters, but the foundation is not enough. Not to mention my current eyesight, even my junior high school students would have commented on the aesthetics of online articles in this way. Especially the treatment of the SAO world, I think most people when reading fanfics are looking forward to making one or other changes to the original plot, and how different the subsequent effects shown by everyone will be from the original work. But this book basically only writes the results, not the process, which makes it uncomfortable to read. The structure of the plot is pretty good. Ignoring the writing style, the story is pretty good. He is worthy of being an author who can write hunter fan fiction. At this time, it can already be seen that the seeds have sprouted. However, the plot of announcing to the world that one can consciously enter the virtual world after death is actually quite poisonous. Since you have borrowed someone else's worldview, you must respect it. When this news is released, countless chaebols and upper-class people like the protagonist are the real beneficiaries. In order to protect their own immortality, they must first kick out those lower-level disease patients who need this technology most. . . I have said too much, but I don't think this is a good Sword Art Online fanfic anyway. SAO, the most important chapter, would only be good-looking if it were written at the author's current level. If it were written at the level of 2016, it can only be said to be the embryonic work of the author's writing. Of course, I don't care whether Asuna is included in sword fanfics or not, but I don't like the idea that someone likes Yuki just because they haven't met Asuna.

How should I put it, I gave up after finishing the fifth level. The writing was good, but the plot changes were not so appropriate. It's gotten to the point where I don't even want to put it on my bookshelf,

You are all wondering, why does Asuna have to be the heroine? The protagonist written by Purple Pig is not Kirito. He is a living person with an independent personality. He has the right to choose the person he likes. Besides, isn't the mouse beautiful? 🤔🤔

I finished reading this early this morning~ It's a very interesting sword fanfic, thank you for the author's hard work~ By the way, after reading it, I suddenly thought, what would happen if SAO had an anti-addiction mechanism🤔

Another novel with a great first half and a terrible ending that makes you want to vomit.

I originally wanted to review it, but somehow the content was deleted. . .

After reading this article, I burned the midnight oil and was deeply moved. I don't know if it's because I'm afraid of being disappointed, but I've always avoided sword fan fiction in the past. I don't want that magnificent symphony of swords to be buried in a piece of dumb, sarcastic, brainless strategy. Facts have proved that I was right, because I had read several books before, and the world settings were too exaggerated, and the character settings were too false, making it really difficult to have a sense of immersion. However, I suddenly came across this book accidentally. Amazing! Yes, this idiom came directly to my mind for the first time. I can't think of a more appropriate adjective than this. This book has humanity, rationality, depth, warmth, philosophy, emotion. Thank you very much, very touched. Let me see the real SAO in the fanfic. Let's stop writing here, What a beautiful story!

How can I put it, those who say it is good-looking are probably idiots. The author's writing style is immature, and his thinking is not clear. One moment, the protagonist is described as very powerful, and the next moment, the protagonist is described as a rookie. The writing is also very strange. How could an information dealer want the protagonist to join the strategy team? Is it because the protagonist gave her money that she wants the protagonist to die? ? Perhaps in the author's eyes, it is normal for the protagonist to work hard

This at least describes the darkness of Sword Art Online. Some people sympathize with the Moonlight Black Cat Group, but who can sympathize with the two thousand people who died in the beginning?

How to put it this way, the angle of this book is quite good at first, but after reading a little bit, I found that the idea is not clear at all. It is quite contradictory in many cases. To put it simply, the protagonist is written as a supporting role. I don't know why because I am afraid of affecting the original plot. It is better not to write it and just read the original work.

To be honest, this is an excellent swordsmanship novel. You can see that it has a single female protagonist and does not steal Asuna.

The trolling mentioned in this chapter is a bit outrageous. I'm giving you a book about whoring for free and you're still trolling hard? Can't understand

This is the only book I have ever read in its entirety. I was very heartbroken when I read the emotional novel, the kind where you find your other half in a world of death and finally get together but are crushed by reality. To be honest, I was very heartbroken when I read it. In the end, they were still together. I like the heart-wrenching feeling, and I have read this book several times. Thanks to Zizhu for creating this book.

I basically don't know how to play games. He won't join the team either. Isn't it cool to be a lone wolf?

It's quite interesting. If I'm satisfied, I'll recommend it.

I just read this book and I want to ask if the heroine has an Asian president? If I had it, I would give up the book.

This chapter is too retarded, really, just like the comments made by a group of immature brats just to show off.

Actually, it's okay. Mainly because I've seen it once. But I actually noticed a slight sadness. Is this human nature after all? Well, actually, I just came here to go under the water.

The writing is okay, but it's hard to read

See the part where Argo finally knows his own feelings I wanted to say that the author followed the good example and finally stopped playing the heroine with original characters. However, look at the next point, Yuxi appears again, and Asuna has no feelings for the protagonist. I'm worried, otherwise the author wouldn't be prepared Let's see what happens next. What I want to know more is which anime will the author's next book be? Or is this the last one? P. S: I always thought that Yuxi=Xing, I only read the introduction of the anime series of Swords... I feel ashamed P. S: I highly appreciate the author's writing style

Book friends, can you recommend any good swords and swords fans?

Damn it, why can't such a rational and seriously written novel become popular? Is the starting point really occupied by primary school students? I support the author with six votes every day.

This book is really painful to read. If this book were more decisive, it might be a good read. (This book is really painful to look at.)

The first half is a masterpiece, but the second half is incomprehensible

I finished it before I knew it, it's so good.

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Who is the heroine? Damn, give me a good time.

First of all I rarely leave comments But for this novel that I read in one sitting What should I leave behind At first, I thought the protagonist was so weak and annoying (I hate protagonists who don't work hard after time travel), why he kept getting into all kinds of weird entanglements (actually, he was afraid of death) Then I thought about it, who is really not afraid of death? And after seeing a lot of people die because of Kayaba... Who can decide a person's fate?! I found that this feeling of knowing the future and the plot has always bothered the protagonist. If it were a heartless person, he might be regarded as an NPC. It's gratifying to see the growth of the protagonist, especially a protagonist who is afraid of death but chooses a career at the forefront. Although not too gorgeous, he is indeed a shield. In the murder guild section, I also hate people who go around doing evil. In fact, I agree with the protagonist's thoughts and actions. If you insist on not killing anything, won't you harm other innocent people?! It's a pity that because it is based on game data, I can't see the protagonist beating 10 people without getting hurt. Otherwise, he should have started to hunt down famous players. In addition, I appreciate the fact that the protagonist is a seriously ill patient. If I were to leave the game, I would not be able to be so free and enjoy a happy life... What should I do? I was also surprised that the heroine is a mouse~~I thought it would be a flashy one (Divergent thinking: Some of the fan fiction plots in which memories and thoughts are modified are really heavy... I mean the second game world... And sister Suguha loves it) It seems like he's about to attack the BOSS><Looking forward to it~~How on earth are we going to take off his mask!? That's about it for the general idea... It's very messy to write == it's purely based on my feelings. Anyway~~Come on, author... Because I don't have anything, so I can only water you... Okay, I can even touch your head~~Don't be a eunuch anyway.

After reading many chapters, I saw the protagonist kneeling and licking women all the way. The woman selling information killed the protagonist's friend at the beginning, and then after the protagonist completed the mission, he gave her mission items, and then gave her money and equipment. He was so petty and apologetic to the woman that he was afraid of hurting her heart. This woman accepted the money from the protagonist and thought it was natural. She would double-cross the protagonist if she didn't go her way at all. The author successfully described a green tea bitch, and then even more successfully described a sexy male protagonist who kneeled down and licked her. It's really impossible to substitute

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