Sword Art Online: Survive

You are all wondering, why does Asuna have to be the heroine? The protagonist written by Purple Pig is not Kirito. He is a living person with an independent personality. He has the right to choose the person he likes. Besides, isn't the mouse beautiful? 🤔🤔

I finished reading this early this morning~ It's a very interesting sword fanfic, thank you for the author's hard work~ By the way, after reading it, I suddenly thought, what would happen if SAO had an anti-addiction mechanism🤔

Another novel with a great first half and a terrible ending that makes you want to vomit.

I originally wanted to review it, but somehow the content was deleted. . .

After reading this article, I burned the midnight oil and was deeply moved. I don't know if it's because I'm afraid of being disappointed, but I've always avoided sword fan fiction in the past. I don't want that magnificent symphony of swords to be buried in a piece of dumb, sarcastic, brainless strategy. Facts have proved that I was right, because I had read several books before, and the world settings were too exaggerated, and the character settings were too false, making it really difficult to have a sense of immersion. However, I suddenly came across this book accidentally. Amazing! Yes, this idiom came directly to my mind for the first time. I can't think of a more appropriate adjective than this. This book has humanity, rationality, depth, warmth, philosophy, emotion. Thank you very much, very touched. Let me see the real SAO in the fanfic. Let's stop writing here, What a beautiful story!

How can I put it, those who say it is good-looking are probably idiots. The author's writing style is immature, and his thinking is not clear. One moment, the protagonist is described as very powerful, and the next moment, the protagonist is described as a rookie. The writing is also very strange. How could an information dealer want the protagonist to join the strategy team? Is it because the protagonist gave her money that she wants the protagonist to die? ? Perhaps in the author's eyes, it is normal for the protagonist to work hard

This at least describes the darkness of Sword Art Online. Some people sympathize with the Moonlight Black Cat Group, but who can sympathize with the two thousand people who died in the beginning?

How to put it this way, the angle of this book is quite good at first, but after reading a little bit, I found that the idea is not clear at all. It is quite contradictory in many cases. To put it simply, the protagonist is written as a supporting role. I don't know why because I am afraid of affecting the original plot. It is better not to write it and just read the original work.

To be honest, this is an excellent swordsmanship novel. You can see that it has a single female protagonist and does not steal Asuna.

Coming from the author's hunter fanfic, I had high expectations because I had heard about this book seven or eight years ago. After reading it, I was very disappointed. The writing style is too obvious for a fledgling. I have my own ideas about the treatment of characters, but the foundation is not enough. Not to mention my current eyesight, even my junior high school students would have commented on the aesthetics of online articles in this way. Especially the treatment of the SAO world, I think most people when reading fanfics are looking forward to making one or other changes to the original plot, and how different the subsequent effects shown by everyone will be from the original work. But this book basically only writes the results, not the process, which makes it uncomfortable to read. The structure of the plot is pretty good. Ignoring the writing style, the story is pretty good. He is worthy of being an author who can write hunter fan fiction. At this time, it can already be seen that the seeds have sprouted. However, the plot of announcing to the world that one can consciously enter the virtual world after death is actually quite poisonous. Since you have borrowed someone else's worldview, you must respect it. When this news is released, countless chaebols and upper-class people like the protagonist are the real beneficiaries. In order to protect their own immortality, they must first kick out those lower-level disease patients who need this technology most. . . I have said too much, but I don't think this is a good Sword Art Online fanfic anyway. SAO, the most important chapter, would only be good-looking if it were written at the author's current level. If it were written at the level of 2016, it can only be said to be the embryonic work of the author's writing. Of course, I don't care whether Asuna is included in sword fanfics or not, but I don't like the idea that someone likes Yuki just because they haven't met Asuna.