Hunter X Hunter: Killer Queen

Let's talk about the conclusion first. This is a very good Hunter fan novel. Don't miss such a good Hunter novel because of early misunderstandings, bro! He is full of the smell of a full-time hunter, which is a bit stronger than the smell of a gourmet hunter from Purple Pig. However, my reading experience is not as good as that of Purple Pig. I am really not a mind-killer. When comparing the three, each has its own merits and it is difficult to distinguish between them. The author's writing style is very good, and the writing style is very hunter-like, but there is a problem with the foreshadowing in the early stage. Early in the reading, I was in a constant state of anger, which reached its peak when Kate appeared. Because I think the character's behavioral logic and thinking logic are wrong. This person should not think or act like this in this situation. This is not the original setting for him in The Hunter! Author: Have you really watched Hunter? Wouldn't it be possible to express yourself and write the same virtues as traditional Chinese online articles? Based on this thought, I wanted to quit the game for a while, but after reading the reviews, it said that it would be better after a few chapters. In addition, I liked the setting very much, so I persisted. After the foreshadowing was revealed, the actions of the original characters were explained and made sense. As for the thinking logic of the original characters, here comes the clever part! The early descriptions of the thinking logic of the characters in the original work were either hints from the author's words, or descriptions based on the protagonist's psychological activities, but the protagonist did not inherit the memory! There is a huge information gap, the protagonist's idea is wrong, and the original character is not broken at all! At this time, I was actually very touched and very happy! From the perspective of foreshadowing, this foreshadowing is very clever and wonderful. However, considering the difficult early reading experience, I really feel that this foreshadowing is annoying, but I cannot deny the excellence of this foreshadowing. In the end, I can only say that this foreshadowing is very strange.

I have read all the content of the update and saw that the author said that the subscription is only 240, so I plan to share my own feelings. New book friends in the future can compare their own situations and needs to decide whether to try it. First of all, I have been reading original novels for about 20 years, but I don't have to say how high-end my taste is. I can only be regarded as an old-timer at best. I will definitely not read cool novels. But if you write well but are not happy at all, then I can't read them either. Personally, when I read novels, the two most important things are the storytelling ability and whether the logic is reasonable and self-consistent. As long as the writing can reach an average level, I won't force it. As for the imagination, I don't care much about it, it's the icing on the cake. Then, I watched JOJO and liked avatars, but I didn't study them specifically. Hunter has never been seen at all. Then let's talk about this book. The protagonist is a time traveler. He is not a kind of behind-the-scenes person who is wise and almost evil, but he is also brave and resourceful, and he can act after making a decision. In addition, he is not lacking in passion and awareness when facing battles. Secondly, the protagonist is not a cold-blooded character, but he can be regarded as decisive in killing. He has his own persistence and bottom line. Generally speaking, in my opinion, he should be very consistent with the views of most people today. Secondly, the protagonist has plug-ins, but it is not a regular system, just add some panels and the like. I personally think there are two. One is to increase the protagonist's strength growth rate. It is not an exaggeration and requires self-cultivation. Another method, in addition to enriching the protagonist's methods, has a greater role in giving the protagonist the possibility of making a comeback from a desperate situation. Finally, the battles in the book are described in detail and vividly. After reading the book carefully, logical online book friends can almost form a concrete image in their minds. Book lovers who like to read ten lines at a glance may not find it suitable and may find it irritating. The overall tone of the battle is that of a battle of wits, rather than a reckless and overpowering one. People who are experienced and like to use their brains are likely to defeat the weak against the strong. I'm not sure about the full-time hunter, but it really has the flavor of JOJO fighting. In general, the main attractions of this book that attract all kinds of book lovers are the world of full-time hunters, JOJO's stand-in, complex and amazing wits, and all kinds of strange and weird abilities. If there is anything that interests you, you can start reading it immediately, and it will definitely not be a loss. Based on the author's ability and the level of this book, although the genre may be a bit niche, 240 subscriptions are really too meager. It would be unrealistic to say tens of thousands, but it should be at least a thousand, right? Book friends who dislike the short word count and want to start writing books as soon as possible. I'm afraid that if the results are bad, the author will cut them off.

After the first few dozen chapters, I felt that the protagonist was useless, being controlled everywhere, and was forced to do dangerous things. He didn't have the strength to resist, and I frowned. Then the protagonist always emphasized that being a bad guy is very disadvantageous. How touching!

You write very carefully, but the old disease of fan authors has come out again. Reading your works was good at the beginning, but in the later period when more and more characters appeared, I often asked, "Who is this?" Who is the author writing about? Something happens that you can't understand. The common problems of fan authors are as follows: First, the common problems of most fan authors are almost exactly the same. They ignore character description and only mention people's names without describing them, making the characters as stiff as puppets. The author does not give a sufficient description of the characters when they first appear. Most of the time, readers only know the names, but do not know their height, height, height, and weight. What is even worse is that sometimes they have to guess whether they are male or female. The author ignores whether readers are familiar with this character and whether they have any impressions of it. Often there is no description or description, just a name and then they suddenly appear. Who is this? ! ! ! Secondly, some characters did not appear in more than ten chapters and then suddenly popped up again. The author only gave them a name, regardless of whether the reader remembered the character or not. It is recommended that you give a few words as a reminder. For example: "The protagonist's special lawyer is so-and-so." "The protagonist's eldest brother XXX" don't just give a name. Ignoring this in fan fiction can be disastrous to the reader's reading experience. Still going to read the book? ! ! Third, some works themselves are a hodgepodge, but not every reader has read comics and movies, or they have read them but it has been so long that they have almost forgotten the plot and characters. Therefore, the author is too simple in describing the characters. Sometimes he only knows their names, and sometimes he uses nicknames. The plot is the same, full of arrogance that I don't need to say, you should know (must read). Even readers who have read comics sometimes feel that this kind of inadequate description is abrupt or has no beginning or end. This is a common problem among many fan authors, who do not consider whether readers still remember the character or have read the work. I can't understand! ! ! Fourth, the reader's reading experience must be fully considered. Just because some characters are familiar does not mean that the author can omit appearance descriptions, character characterizations, or just mention names. It's like a chef cooking meat, and customers complain why it's fat and greasy without seasoning. But the chef said: "There are so many things! You are here to eat meat, the seasoning is not important." Characterization is the seasoning. Some unimportant supporting characters will be boring if they are over-characterized, but at least they should give readers an impression, such as: "A strong one-eyed black man, director of S. H. I. E. L. D., Who likes to appear elusive and suspicious." Just because some characters are familiar to readers doesn't mean you can just give them names and not describe them. At least the reader should be told that this is a one-eyed black man, not Nick Foul, and there will be no physical description at all. To summarize, when you meet the first character you don't know, you will look it up on the Internet. The second, third or even twelfth character only knows the name but not the shape. How will the reader feel? Do you have the patience to check them one by one? Instead of ten readers, only four were left, and the remaining six encountered reading difficulties. Many times, the difference between a master and other authors lies in the number of readers piled up by these countless small details. A good author will pay attention to the reading experience of readers. Even if he submits a paper in college, he will check whether the professors are comfortable reading it. If the reading experience is poor, forget it. If you can't understand it, abandon the book.

Author, I think the biggest failure of your book is the beginning of the Ant King chapter. For people like me who have only watched anime but not read comics, the plot of the Prince's Succession War is not very attractive, and the Ant King chapter you wrote is only over a hundred chapters long. As a reader, I don't like your book enough to follow up every day to read the Prince's Succession War chapter with which I am not familiar with the plot. So I chose to keep it, and then I stopped looking at it😅. I think there are many people in the same situation as me. If you start with a much earlier time period and write in a longer plot time period that we are familiar with, it will be much more enjoyable. If you then write the Succession War chapter, I believe that the results of your writing book will not be much worse than "Hunter: I'm Really Not an Exorcist". After all, most people must have watched the anime or watched the general plot of the anime on Douyin. If your book enters the plot too quickly that most readers are unfamiliar with, many people will choose to abandon the book due to the torment of catching up and little interest in the unfamiliar plot. To be honest, your writing style is no worse than that of "I'm Really Not a Master of Nianzhu", but your grades are much worse. Maybe it's because the opening plot is too late

My name is Joey and I am 15 years old. Her family is in Ker Village in the southeastern part of Ngl Autonomous Country. She is unmarried. I work in an anesthetic organization controlled by Zailo, and I go home before eight o'clock at the latest every day. Don't smoke, don't drink, go to bed at 11pm, and make sure you sleep eight hours a day. Drink a cup of warm milk before going to bed, do twenty minutes of stretching exercises to warm up, and then go to bed. You can basically sleep soundly until dawn. Like a baby, leaving no fatigue or stress behind, just welcome the next day's breakfast. The health check results also showed that I was normal. What I want to explain is that I am a person who pursues inner peace at all times. Don't be obsessed with winning or losing, and don't dwell on worries. Don't make enemies that will keep me awake at night. This is my attitude towards survival in this society. I also know that this is my happiness. Besides, even if I have to fight, I will not lose to anyone. Well, what I mean is, please vote, collect, read, subscribe, and reward, thank you!

Regarding suppressing the protagonist's strength, I think it's okay. If Killer Queen is an arm to Yoshikage Kira, it is an add-on to the protagonist who has no memory of Yoshikage Kira. The protagonist's understanding of Killer Queen is limited to her abilities. To fully utilize Killer Queen's abilities, it will definitely take some training.

Prince War is actually about raising voodoos. In ancient times, raising voodoos meant putting various poisons in jars and feeding them stimulating drugs so that they could devour each other. At the beginning of the prince war, the princes were all fed something by the corrupted mind beast. I guess it must be something with burning talent. The princes are so talented. The price should be that only one can survive in the end. Maybe even 200,000 people on the ship may be sacrifices. The last one will become an immortal and invincible existence.

After reading half of the content, I only have one thought. This book is neither brainless nor arrogant. It contains content that is not found in comics. I think the outline is perfect and has never collapsed. With this achievement, I can continue to write fan fiction and brain-burning battles. I have come to a conclusion-the author is Togashi himself?

The early writing was okay, but the succession battle dragged on too much. The cesspit should be opened as soon as possible, otherwise it will jump. If you have to go and hang out in it, is it sick? How long should you wait? As for the gatekeeper's permission that Kurapika promised, I don't believe there is no other way to get it. I have to go through the muddy waters of the succession war. Teams that join the Defike, Gold, and Hunter Associations can also enter the Dark Continent. The light, strange and green colors of the Dark Continent are the most attractive. But the inheritance war is really stinky and long. I suggest you don't write more than 100 chapters for a big stage. If you don't agree with it enough, just send it to me.