The Rippling Fist Blossoms in Hunter X Hunter

Is the main character Joseph Joestar and Caesar's child? This tactic is so despicable.

The beginnings were alright, but now, like other fanfiction, it's introducing other systems and things that can't be seen or discovered in the Hunter x Hunter world. Now there's a Stand, and it's explicitly stated that only the Stand user can see it... But the Hunter x Hunter world isn't without such things; Nen beasts created under harsh conditions can achieve the same effect.

The power of Nen has constraints and oaths that can be considered multiplicative, but in essence, the power of Nen must follow the principle of equal exchange... "Whether it's ordinary Nen abilities or restrictions and vows, they all need to follow this principle..." "And oaths and constraints are merely double the price to pay,"

So far, the results have been mediocre. This is one of my favorite ideas, and it's based on my favorite comics. Many readers may have noticed that the content not only features Hunter x Hunter, but also JoJo's Bizarre Adventure and Yu Yu Hakusho, and the abilities are also closer to Pride from The Seven Deadly Sins. These are all ones I like, hehe.

The biggest problem with this book is that it follows the main characters' path completely. The advantage is that it provides a safety net, but the disadvantage is that it's almost impossible for this book to achieve good results. I can recite the rest of the plot by heart; it's just adding a character to the original work.

I hope this doesn't fall into the common trap of Hunter x Hunter fanfiction: wanting everything and having a bunch of random, miscellaneous abilities. The most brilliant aspect of Hunter x Hunter is undoubtedly its Nen system. Any alterations to this system rarely end well. Nen is like a mountain shape; where one side is strong, the other is weak.

The protagonist's only ability is a name called "Sunshine Recitation," and his other abilities are vaguely described. Currently, the protagonist is just using it as an Emission-type ability, which is really unremarkable. The story repeatedly emphasizes that this ability is strong, but it's never shown to be particularly powerful; instead, it feels rather weak.

If things continue this way, the protagonist's independent time will likely be limited to the period between Gon and Killua's return to Whale Island and everyone's reunion in Yorknew City. Completely following Gon and Killua seems to restrict future leveling up. During this time, you can find a rare gem, which will allow you to exchange a spot with Bisky on Greed Island.

Every time a woman appears, it makes the main characters seem low-class.

If the protagonist's ability is to win by sheer numbers, should we create an ability similar to Homeless Emperor's in One-Punch Man? After all, sunlight is a vast source of energy, and it seems a bit wasteful for only the main character to absorb and utilize it. Perhaps we could develop an ability that combines circles and ripples.