The Dragon's Ritual Book

The world view of this book is grand and beautiful, and the setting is novel and surprising. There may be some discomfort in the early stage, but it will get better and better later on, and the author is also constantly improving. When reading this book, it brought me back to the feeling of reading those online masterpieces. Maybe it is the name of the book or the problem of not being promoted that has caused this book to not be popular. The story of the protagonist has just begun. I believe that as the author continues to write, this book will become more and more popular. I hope that a good book will not be buried like this. I wish the author's book will be known to more people in the new year and become more and more popular, and the author will become a platinum author as soon as possible😁

The setting of this book is very interesting and novel, and the world view is huge. Designing the battle process of different professions in this context requires the author's imagination. At present, although the writing skills are not very high, the battles are okay, the process is reasonable, and various elements have been integrated. The author must have a good idea of ​​the plot before writing it, and don't eat the book or leave out the settings. This book has the potential to be a masterpiece. Also, I feel that the plot can focus on more dragons, and don't create too many vocabulary words, which will make readers unclear. Come on, author!

I quite like the worldview, it's not just a shell like most novels. But it's a little hard to say how to shape the protagonist in the early stage. The detective just started killing. Although there were some fill-ins later on, well, you still have to check it out for yourself. And the definition of "everyone has freedom" is too broad.

It's a new book! 😍

Have you ever been a dragon? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

This book is well written, and the style seems to be the same as that of Fuqi Juxian's works, with the same novel settings, ingenuity in struggle, and rich occult settings. The only drawback is that the plot is a bit hypocritical. It is obviously an opposition of positions, but the description is like the judgment of sinners by the New God, which always gives people an awkward feeling of standing on the moral high ground.

The introduction is quite good, but I read it as a Japanese novel. How old are you writing about the enemy escaping from death? The enemy has exhausted all his cards and is seriously injured, but he can escape alive. There is also the detective in the early stage. Although he investigated the protagonist, although he coerced the villagers to target the protagonist, he killed someone to investigate the protagonist, so he was a good person and could not deal with him. Then he later turned into a detective to kill people and fish for fame😅. Don't you think you could have saved others if you had taken action earlier? Do you have to wait until a criminal stabs someone with a knife before it is considered a crime? Is it not a crime to hold a knife 0.1 Centimeters away from another person?

We middle-aged and elderly people do not read novels to draw anything, nor to kill time. We are following the footsteps of the times, showing our true selves, recording beautiful lives and leaving beautiful memories. Although we are no longer young ‍, we have an eternally young heart❤️✨❤️✨. Let's encourage you. Dear relatives, please update the author quickly, enrich the aunt's mind, and sublimate the aunt's soul!

5 Righteous Gods: 1. My Lord: The highest God, the only, the only, the only God, the only beautiful God, the gap is the upper world (the most stable gap) 2. The author: the God of Knowledge, the only God who shows all living things by his true name (goat head, bird body, cat pupil, human heart god), writes all answers, answers all questions, and has a high probability of getting the answer, and the gap is Note World 3 . God of Hades: Father of the Underworld, the belief of the Original Death Society/Pure White Eternal Life Society, the gap is the colorless underworld 4. Jiu Zu, the half-human and half-bronze god, the source of reproduction and struggle, the god of all people, the only one among the five righteous gods who has two gaps - outside the door wall, the trees grow 5. At noon, the Lord of Hell, with multiple heads and eyes, looks at everyone in the world, creating the race "Beast of Noon", located in the gap For Hell 24 executioners (following gods): 1. Red Joy, unknown at the time of execution, the one who breaks the red branch, the one who blasphemed the prophecy, the one who is eternally happy 2. The King of Pardon, the execution time is ten o'clock in the morning, the second king of the Black and White Empire, one of the five executioners who can be called "King" 3. The Patriarch, the execution time is five o'clock in the morning (at sunrise), the seventh day after death from Resurrected in the coffin, went to the Lord's side, conveyed the believers' morning prayers to the Lord, issued indulgences, the only saint 4. The unjudged, execution time at zero o'clock (the time of truth, the beginning of the day is the trial), the first and only judge of the truth court 5. General, execution time at six o'clock in the morning, the king's accomplice, the winner of victory, the untamed beast head, the war teacher, existed in the first era, assisting Pass every king 6. Impression furnace, execution time at 7:00 pm (dusk) 7. Black Madonna, execution time at 1:00 pm, holy salt extracted from the underworld, treatment and punishment, faith of doctors 8. Demon King, execution time at 23:00 (the end time), the first, the strongest and most vicious blasphemer, the one who wields the sword to the Lord, the most mysterious executioner 9. Conqueror King, execution time at 11:00, only The Saint of Two, one of the five kings 10. A long time later, at twelve o'clock at noon, the only "noon beast" among the 24 executions, the creator of the clock and the calendar, the beast, the craftsman, the teacher, the tower One of the learned beliefs 11. The King of Thorns, execution time at five o'clock in the afternoon. The king of the Third Age, the greatest indiscriminate murderer in the world, was betrayed by the Patriarch on the Transgression Festival 12. The cradle of the young child, execution time At 21 o'clock, when entering the dream, it represents "the crime that will eventually be committed", represents "the mercy of my Lord", has the punishment of a beast, and is destined to have a great blasphemy. My Lord remembers his youth and lets him fall into a deep sleep forever in the body of a young son. He cannot wake up and cannot commit offenses. It is related to the dream 13. Deconstruction Officer, unknown at the time of execution. The teacher of the Lord of the Tower, the most trusted capable minister, saw my Lord fall. Calculate the perfect "sacred proportions" of our Lord's body, commit a major crime and become an executioner 14. The tablet writer, unknown at the time of execution, the first disciple of the Unjudged, once followed the Demon King to record his life, and wrote the world's first epic poem, the first bard 5 angels: The Patriarch's subordinates - forgiveness, conviction, confession, judgment The Conquest King's subordinates - Colorless

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Creativity s The power comes from the atmosphere, which has a refreshing feeling. Based on this alone, Liangcao Logic a is generally logically qualified, but there are just some minor problems. For example, in the Ceremony to Conquer the Sinful King, it is said in the article that the child king is also a king, which is pure nonsense. You are obviously not the king, so how you initiated the ritual is beyond explanation. Character Secondary 2 The protagonist has an immature personality and has no problem protecting his friends and villagers. It was in Chapter 45 that a dead old carpenter attacked the detective. It is true that the old carpenter was wronged, but what does that have to do with the protagonist? You came from time to time. The protagonist used his trump card once: the opportunity of Dragon Breath but did not get any benefit and only offended one enemy. It can only be said that he has done justice for the old carpenter. I can only say that it is very good. It would be fine if you are familiar with the old carpenter. But you have only traveled to this world for a few days, which is equivalent to traveling to a beautiful country, and your neighbor was beaten to death, and you stood up for them. Summary In general, this book is worth encouraging, and it is better than a bunch of people copying Goblin. Give full play to your own strengths and write more about the interesting aspects of secret atmosphere. I think the future is promising.

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The detective is simply too deliberate, and the plot development is not very reasonable. From the processing, you can guess what the writing is at the end. It is so poisonous, otherwise it will become more and more uncomfortable the more you read it.

What is an unappetizing description of gods? What is an unappetizing description of gods and gods?

The foreshadowing was just about the fiancée, and only a few words about a wonderful life. As soon as the female protagonist showed up, the male protagonist fell instantly because of the beautiful memories. I was silent and silent, and I didn't know how to complain. The foundation for beautiful memories is too thin. . . . . It's not like childhood sweethearts, it's like love at first sight. Has the author never been in love (not malicious, just complaining)

It's not the title of the book, it's the introduction. Humanity is a race that is not our own, and its hearts must be different. Different races within itself are not harmonious. You, a dragon, insist on joining the human guardians. If you want to write, you might as well write like the Warhammer God Emperor. Trying to be a trick of the Dragon Clan to get traffic, but in the end, helping the Human Clan is really a thankless effort. When everyone saw the title of the book, they thought it was written by Long Wen, but they were deceived after reading the introduction. People who had not read the book would think: It turned out to be a book about human nannies, and they immediately rejected it.

I feel like I've seen limited exemptions many times. . Qidian and QQ are really well written. They have a tantric atmosphere and are simplified a lot so that you won't be confused while reading.

The writing of the setting is okay, but the plot arrangement is not good and very procrastinating. Some of the supporting characters seem to disappear after writing, so you shouldn't have spent so much time writing it in the first place. . .

It's pretty good, but there's one thing that's hard for me to accept: the price (punishment) and the extraordinary. The price based on extraordinary ability, that is, I have gained a certain extraordinary ability, so I need to pay a certain price, which is barely acceptable. But the transcendence rooted in price, especially so-called crime and punishment, is stomach-churning, though rare indeed. For example, it is also internal strength. It is normal logic to spend time to gain skill growth To gain skill growth through enlightenment from experts or heavenly materials and earthly treasures is a reasonable improvement within the worldview system The jump in skill brought about by completing system tasks or reaching talent conditions is a kind of "mecha deus ex machina" that goes beyond the current worldview Saving one's life Gaining power through alienation of the body and spirit is a weird and supernatural thing/inspiration from a superior The increase in wages brought by squeezing one's own value The project commission brought by plundering external resources The reward share brought by gaining the favor of others The financing income brought by diluting the authority of speech If you don't want to get involved, you have to Sell yourself as a slave and get a few rewards from your master's family The bottom world view is difficult to understand

After reading it all, I personally feel that it is quite good. It's just that the early setting is a bit convoluted, and the connections between the past and the present are always forgotten, but the whole book is still good to read. I just stayed in Novice Village for a little too long. But I still hope the author keeps the pace and doesn't want eunuchs. There are not many good novels nowadays.

The setting is very novel, but the writing is not good, but the writing can be improved, but the novel setting and world view are rare. It is no problem to write several books with this setting.

The image of the heroine is very good, with a sense of religious holiness 👍, which is refreshing. She is obviously a new character who has only appeared recently, but it left a very deep impression on me... It is better to say that I admire Ys more than Ryuga, and I hope there will be no problems with the subsequent character portrayal 🙏

"Offer knowledge, and chaos will give you the answer." "Burning is denial. The fire of denial never rejects matter, it only rejects the invisible things under matter." "The so-called classification is the restraint that mortals place on themselves." "Beauty is blasphemy!"

It's not good enough. You can still rely on the novelty of the settings in the early stage The further you go, the more boring you get The main line can't be run, and there are a lot of branch lines. The number of words is low all day long The big sister used the beheading technique to have an outstanding effect You actually wrote a whole chapter, 80% of which is to describe how shocked others are The protagonist's 90% of the source of intelligence about the truth of the world is based on speculation You can't write the problem well even if you speculate. The logical chain cannot be written As rigid as a deus ex machina telling the truth No one knows how this idiot came up with such a lack of information The whole book is a brainless cool article packaged with new settings All kinds of shocks, all kinds of Mr. Longjia is so extraordinary Boring

Some of the logical loopholes that I personally feel are difficult to deal with, but the flaws are not concealed. It feels like watching the apocalypse forecast at that time 😃

It feels like he can kill Longjia with one punch🙂

I don't understand the detective. Since the author has planned for the protagonist to kill the detective, then he shouldn't write the detective as if he can really solve the three-hundred-year-old fugitive. It would make the detective seem to be just an anti-hero with extreme methods. It could be set that the detective had no intention of saving the villagers in the first place, but only regarded all the villagers as abandoned sons and bait, all in order to catch fugitives to satisfy his own selfish desires. Now that it is neither good nor bad, the protagonist is portrayed as a double-standard monster who stands on a high moral ground and has no brains. The funniest thing is that Young God attacked the target of the special attack, but didn't kill him in the end. Isn't this just a joke to the readers?

Is there a female protagonist? Then look at the chicken feathers! Isn't it a burden to the protagonist that the opposite sex who is far behind him is a burden? Does the author like to be cumbersome?

Don't laugh at the challenge? I lost

Can the author combine the effects of all the rituals with that secret ritual? Make it an extra content. What a hassle to find!