
The Immortal Eater
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Summary of magic weapons
The types of magical instruments are basically complete, but some are not finished. The yellow part is not sure whether it is correct or not. It was originally a Word document, but it was too large and could not be sent out. The magic weapon part is basically finished. I will find time to post the other parts as they are not finished yet. Fuck, I just found out that I can only send 10 pictures, which is not enough, and there are still a few magic weapons that I haven't taken screenshots of. There is no other way. . . . I'll try it in the comments section. . . .
Lite version setting post (1): A complete collection of various sects, character skills, martial arts, and techniques
——Division of basic realms Warriors Use the vein tree as qualification, rely on the bones to reach Xuanmen "On Martial Arts" "Erect the jade steps of Xuanmen, transform life into the universe, and climb to the fairy tower in the sky" Zhenqi is the second kind of blood of the warrior Warlock Use spiritual power to wash the vein tree, rely on the spirit Feeling into the Mysterious "Knowing the Spirit" "The Sutra of Fire" Matter Fire, Qi Fire, Xuan Fire, Heart Fire, Dao Fire Heat: Yili (orange, under molten gold, the extreme of ordinary fire), Sanli (vermilion), Four Li (white), Liuli (cyan), Eight Li (purple), Nine Li (extremely hot), Yang Zhen (huang gold) Ling: Breaking the ordinary, knowing the spirit, knowing ignorance, Mingxuan [Zhu Lianhuo] Xuanhuo, Sanli [Chihuo] Xuanhuo, Lingwu fire, Yang Zhen, Mingxuan [Jieyou] Food Zhenqi [Qilin fire] Object fire, ignorance, purification Cleanse the dust and worship the blood to inherit the sky "Yu Feng·The spirit is good" "The spirit is good, I write it up, and the turtle says auspiciousness, and it will become an immortal in three days." The Vein Tree Realm : one to eight students Dantian Zhongpozhong, one has 2 meridians, two has 4 meridians, three has 8 meridians, four has 16 meridians, five has 32 meridians, six has 64 meridians, seven has 128 meridians, eight has 256 meridians, and the meridians are tree-formed Xuanmen: One to three levels of jade steps [], also known as "Yu Yi" and "Xia Yi", is soaked in the spiritual mystery of heaven and earth, and the waving hand is like true energy, with a radius of twenty or thirty feet. [Shaking the body] After the dusty clothes are replaced, the mortal body should be shed; the spiritual essence enters the body and cleanses the blood and bones. The radius of the Yushi Xuanqi is fifty or sixty feet. queWith the armor on the body, the spiritual body has been completed; the blood, muscles and bones are mixed with the spiritual essence. There is no hindrance to the movement of a hundred feet of profound energy around the body. Note: When ascending to the Xuanmen Jade Stage, that is, when Xuanhe hangs his clothes, the warriors and warlocks return to the same destination by different routes. Warriors practice the Mysterious Sutra, and sorcerers practice the Spiritual Sutra. Tianlou: Ten levels (the highest known, Zhu Wen) Xing and fate are transformed into the universe, and heaven and earth all work together. ——Swordsmanship Sword Realm: |Clumsy|Ling|Idi|Heart|Dao Swordsmanship level: Clumsy: Pavilion, Mountain, Vein, North Korea Meaning: Beautiful places, wonderful fields, wonders, extremely beautiful scenery Heart (Characteristics: The state of mind and spirit generates the heart of the sword) Tao Books: "Xirige Talking about Swords" Preface|"The lower sword cuts the bones, the middle sword cuts the flesh, and the upper sword cuts the heart." "Introduction to the Sword Art of the Six Dynasties" "Records of Sword Teaching by Zen Masters" "Three Thousand Men's Sword Fu" "General Meanings of the Sword" "Sword Masters Trace the Ancients" "Swords of the Jin and Tang Dynasties" Code" "Guan Tianli Sword" Jun Weapon List·Top Ten Famous Swords: One [Xianghuang] Five [Taohui] Seven [Zhanxin Liuli] Nine [Flying Light] Yu Zhe Dao Qi Hui·Thirty-three Sword Gates | Yunlang Mountain |The top five: Longjun Dongting, Bailu Palace, Beihaifu, Xudaoshan, Sanshan Fucha |The middle twelve: Shushan, Yijian Nanzong, Tian Mountain, Kunlun Yanri Palace, Five Taoist Schools, Xiaoma Jian, Taihang Mountain, Nanhai Yuanting |The next twelve schools: Diancang, Kongtong, Huashan, Qingcheng, Xiaoyunshan, Jin Wu, Emei, Xiaoqing Lake |Three small houses: Baiyuan Cave Yunlang Mountain ·"Gushe Heart Sutra" [Bingsnow][Wuwu][Tianxin] ·"Speaking of Swords" ·"Xiaoyao" ·"Explanation of Zhuangzi's Sword" [Tianzi Sword][Zhu Hou JianSword of the Common People ·"Seven Volumes of the Master of Yun Que Traveling to the Sky" Equation of EverythingXiaoyaoyou ·"The Sword of the Immortal's Looking Down" ·"Butterfly" (Sword of the Heart) ·"Sword in the Cloud" ·[Mirror] (Sword of the Heart) ·"The Cook's Explanation of the Cow" |Qiyao Sword World [Sword World·Taibai] Longjun Dongting -Jianmai·Nine Songs Sword System Inheritance 1 ↓Hebo ·"Hebo" ↓Xiangjun ·"Yugong Manifold" "The ancient wall is decorated with colorful Qiu tails and gold posts, and Yugong rides into the autumn pool water." ·[Xiangjun White Hair] ↓Yunzhongjun ·"Leiqin" [Guangling][Yu Huitushan][Lord of Shuiyun] Sword System Inheritance Two ↓Mountain Ghost (54 Gates) ↓Shao Siming (23 Gates) ·"Mirror" (Pillar One) · "Star" (Pillar Two) ·"" (Pillar Three) ↓Da Siming (7 gates) ·"Yin Yang" "One Yin and one Yang, no one knows what I am doing." ·"East Emperor Taiyi" (Taoist Sword) ·"Quenching Dragon Sutra" [Shooting Dragon Light] ·"National Sorrow" [Shou Li] ·"Li Hun" -Shu Pulse ·"Suspicious Dragon Sutra" [Lingming shines on the world, floating dust is unrestrained] ·"Jade Dragon Autumn Water Sutra" Autumn Water·[Water Autumn Lotus][Water Waves Cold Smoke] ·"Methods of Raising Jiaos in Heart Ponds" ·[Five Fu Fences] White Deer Palace Sword·"Liupi" Knife·"Deer Falling from the Green Cliff" Beihai Mansion -Youdu ·"Xuan" ·"Quan Snake" [*Xuan Snake Swallows Yellow Bird] ·"Yellow Bird" ·"Soul Water Earthworm" ·"Tiger Fire in Hades" -Hai Ruo ·"Ruo" Xudao Mountain ·[][][] (Intentional Sword·Wonder) [Three Trees][Piercing Flowers and Thorny Butterflies] ·"Touching Fish" Sanshan Fucha Shu Mountain ·"Silkworm Sutra" Yi Jian Nanzong ·"Down with the World Like a Ping Sutra" ·"Guanqi Zen Sword" Tianshan Mountain ·"Five Peaks" Sword" ·"Yan Sword" ·"Eight Horse Sword" Prologue·[Marry Branches to the Banquet] Eight Horse·[Chasing Sun Super Shadow] [Bing Yao Yu Hui] [Jiang Tu Jie Di] [Sheng Mist Riding the Clouds] ·"Seven Jade Sword" ·"Mu Wang Sword" (Yijian) "It is cold in the middle of the day, the north wind is raining and snowing, there are Freezing people, the emperor composed three chapters of poems to mourn the people. " [I licked the yellow bamboo] [Here is the emperor's place] [The emperor cuts the tiger] ·"The Sword of the Queen Mother of the West" [Chonghe and Falling into the Mountain] ·"The Record of Jade in the West Sea" [Tian Lan] [Jie Yu] [Yu Bailong] ·"Golden Hairpin Enlightenment Sutra" |Zhenqi. Technique [Hundred Birds] Kunlun Yan Sun Palace ·"Xi Jue" (Yijian×Zhenqi Technique) [Undersea Golden Crow] ·"Six Blades Cutting the Light" (2) ·"Twilight Shadow Seven Sword Style" Xiao Horse Sword White Horse Secret Biography ·"Northern Rain in the First Moon" (North Korea) "Heaven and earth dome, life and death are about to happen; the sky rains and the sword dims, the flute is cold and the song is clear." [Yun Han] [Shui Yang] [Xiao Leng] [Qu Qing] [Sadness] [Zhuoyan] Zhenqi Technique·[Sword Washing Water] Shangshen × Washing Eyes × Sword Washing Water → [Shen Gong washes the sword, North The rainy sky falls] Xiao Leng × Qu Qing → [* Xiao Leng Qu Qing is more clear] Taihang Mountain Dian Cang Nanhai Yuanting ·[Haitong·Zhiju] Kongtong ·[Sword Sea Chapter] Seventeen Peaks Sword Intent ·"Three Floor Sword" -Guangcheng ·"Guangcheng Danjian" (1) [Sun and Moon Gathering Light] ·"Pine Mist Sword Chant" Speaking of Mist·[Pine Growing in the Fog] [Flowing Mist in the Stream] -Yuanwu ·"Yuanwu Cliff Sword" [Crane hanging in the sky] -Caiwu ·"Fengshan Ming" (seven) [Horizontal stick fighting owl][Broken stick hearing phoenix] -Xianqiao ·"White Rainbow Chapter" (nine) [Guanri] ·"Quick Snow Sword" -Yuanyun ·"Yuanyun Breaking Stone" [ Flowing clouds in the sleeves] Huashan ·[Famous Cliff Green Pines] Qingcheng ·[White Ape Offering Fruit] ·[Songhai] Da and Xiaoyun Mountains ·"Feng Boyu Master Sword Sacrifice" -Rou Yun "If you want to learn the sword of the dragon snake, you must first understand the way of clouds and thunder." Golden Crow Emei ·"Jieyu Book" Xiaoqing Lake ·[Hezhan Bearing Dew] ·" "Qinghu Record" [Pinghu Half Moon] ·"Four Seasons of Solitary Crossing" [Spring comes and the flowing water washes the dust] ·"Shen Bixiang" (Yijian) White Ape Cave ·"The Sword of the Monk" [Review of the Old Ape] Unofficial forces Tenrihui [Hanshi] Xiang Minghao ·"Nine Bian" [*I was given an unworthy body and parted, and I was released to wander in the clouds] [*Belongs to the Khotan of Lei Master, Tongfei Lian's Yamen] Zhu Shi Teaching ·"The Candle World" [Binghuo] ·"The Heart Candle" [The Candle Sword][The Five Poison Heart Candles] Later Chapter·[The Art of Pulling the Core of the Heart Candle] -Tongmai Dragonborn·Yijia Huanshilou ·"Fuyao Book" [Like I Spread My Wings] [Tunan] ·"The Elephant Man Sutra" [Who pities this face] ·"Book of Planting Fire" |Zhenqi Technique [Fairy Fire][Iron Clothes] The rest of the forces in various places Confucianism ·"The Sword of Changes" [Shangjiu] ·"The Four Qi Jade Candle Sword" ·[Heart Slip] Tianliyuan Zhu Wen ·"The Melting Furnace of Heaven and Earth" "Refining me into nature, refining life into Taoism." Taoism Seven Home -Qingwei "The five internal organs are like the five elements, and the eyes are like the sun and the moon." ·"Qingwei Shenlie Secret Method" ·"Qingwei Yuanjiang Dafa" ·[The Wuji Other Self] ·"The Sword of Purification" ·"Creating the Incarnation" Sword Chapter·"The light and darkness of heaven and earth are guided by the sword. " ·"Fire Questions" (Heart Sword) -Shenxiao ·"Yutai Thousand Tribulations" ·"Jade God's Interpretation" ·"Feng You" [Jinghong] [Spring water casts shadows, ice mirrors illuminate the gods] (Yijian) -Jingming -Shangqing -Quanzhen ·"Jade Lock Golden Pass" "Twenty-Four Techniques" ·"Dream Spring and Autumn Sword" ·"Outside the Body" ·[Xueliu Sword] -Lingbao -Zhengyi Shizhijian·Twelve Inches of Viewing the World Taishan Yaolu ·"Breaking Sword" ·"Lingshu Knocking on the Heart" Record |Medical Skills ·[Silver Jade Weaving Life][Big Returning Needle][Spring Small Needle] -Spring God "Spring Life Nourishes" East China Sea Jianlu ·[Cut Sword Breath] Yangyilou -Shen Zuoraf Xuhu Villa Hanging Waterfall Pavilion ·"Water Fox Treasure Chapter" Fenghua Pavilion Imperial Court [Destined Confucian] Fourth Prince·Li Zhi Zi Yongche ·"Yi" |Qi Xuan Jing "Biuan Hurts the World" "Spiritual Son Views the World" [Covering the Mirror to Create a Painting] [Who is the Mirror Shadow] Immortal Terrace |Sword and Mystery Sutra "Mingguang Thunder" [Walking on the Sky and the Sea] |Ling Jing "The Beauty in the Painting" No Holes [Zhe Fengting] (It seems that the source has not been mentioned, it is suspected to be a sword skill derived from [Stringing Silk·Jade Tiger] or one of the sword moves of "Mingguang Thunder") [Sword of the King of Hell] Li He ·"Fake Dragon Song" (Intentional Sword·Extreme Scenery) "Stone-rolled copper cup, chanting withered exhaustion. The goshawk drains blood, and the white phoenix lowers its lungs. Gui The child fell, and the clouds covered the car. The tree died and the sand collapsed on the evil creek island. My mother found immortality in the middle of the jig. Jiang Jun hides his tent and flees. The lotus leaves the country for a thousand years, and it still smells fishy after the rain." |Zhenqi Technique·Jianying Hushan Sword Gate ·"Bengxue" BengxueCome and GoHuiming(Yijian) ·"Swallowing the Sea" SalamanderWhale ·Ice Lake CrossingBody Method Naked Heart Seeing the BladeYue Muzhou ·"Flying Wild Goose Sword Style on Snowy Night" (Heart Sword) Clouds Cover Eyes and Lose FeathersFear of Losing Feathers [Falling on a snowy night, soul-stirring] The cold of winter [Mingjian's ice sky reflects on me] Loneliness from the group [] Quietness on a snowy night [Topsy-turvy and upside-down life] Flying in desperate situations (Taoist sword) ·[Unrestrained] Pei Ye ·"Secret Edict of the Dragon Immortal in the Purple Bamboo Forest" ·[Small Correctional Edict][Big Correctional Edict] |Sword Ladder· Giving birth to wings [Cicada Fish View] "Exercise the principles of living things and obtain the sword of physical images" -Spring The Beginning of Spring·"Winter Willow" Rainwater·"Northern Rain in the First Moon" Jingzhe ·"Jade Qiong Book·Feng Yao" Spring Equinox·"Emerald Collection·Yellow Jade" Qingming·"Yang Hua" Gu Yu·"Peach Blossom" -Summer Beginning of Summer·"Sophora japonica" "Things" Xiao Man · "He Xin" [Green Peach Turns to Fat Jade] Mang Zhong·"Prologue to the Prosperity of Things" Summer Solstice·"Leiqin" Small Heat·"Yugong Manifold" Great Heat·"Zhu Rong" -Autumn -Winter [Group Shape Preface] "Feathers in the sky, insects on the ground, scales in the water, day and night alternate, the four seasons rotate" -Yu Tian·"Jade Fei Si" Style" -Di Zhi · "The Immortal in the Netherland·Yousheng" (Ideological Sword) -Shui Lin·"The Immortal in the Sea" -Day· -Night· -Life and Death·"The Four Qi Jade Candle Sword" [Wheel of Life and Death] "When you live, you die, and when you die you live" -Cicada Yusheng·"Fei Yuxian" (Intentional Sword) -Jufuzhichang·"The Immortal in the Netherland·? (Sword of Mind) -Transcendence·Unrestrained Me in the Mirror ·"Four Styles of Flying Geese on a Snowy Night" (Sword of the Heart) Parinirvana ·"Soaring to the Sky and Reversing the Floating Life" (Tao Sword) |Sword Status [Xiuhu] "Every gap is broken, and all swords are immortal" "If you don't see it, Kunwu's iron smelting is flying in flames and smoke, and the red light and purple energy are all impressive." [Xinzhou] Everything that can be touched stops in front of the sword. Shenjing·Chang'an City Taiping Caobang [Taiping Partridge] Qiu Tianyu (Wang Biehe) ·"Euphorbor" [Breaking the Army] [Tickling Guest] Ji Xionghu ·[Forging Soldiers] Surname Li ·"The Great Body has no form" Lu Cui ·"Tai Gong's Golden Chamber" Wang Zheng Yu Ziliang ·[Silky Snake Shocking Shadow] Bashui in Chang'an -Fengshui Fengshuiwu ·[Panshi] Body Shape Mirage City ·[*Mirage Thorn] Shaolong Road Luoying Sword Gate ·"Withered Flower Album" (meaning Sword) "The sword has withered nine hundred and seventy-two, and there is not a single flower in the peach forest after several times." Yunyang Tower ·"The Sword Covers the Bright Moon" [The Rainbow Hangs in the Blue Sky] Lushan Sword Village ·"Herding Deer Sword" Yuquan Mountain ·"The Mayfly Transforms into a Hong" (Intentional Sword) (Taken from "Mustard Seed Sword" and "Honghu Sword") ·"Yuquan Sword Making Technique" (Intentional Sword) [Cold Spring Sword Tempering][Throwing Water into Jiao][Sword Born in the Mist] Five Swords Blessed Land -Song Wen ·"Pi Shang" [Helv][Zhuan Zhu][Candle Star Attacking the Moon] (Yijian) -Pi Kong -Chunjun Pearl Waterside Pavilion ·"Into the Abyss Book" (Yijian) [Dragon's jaw picks the pearl][Sleeping Dragon Shocked][Wash the Sword and Fight the Dragon] ·"March Sword" [Wind Piaoxu] ·[Shui Shui Bai Yue] [Dark Pearl Sinking into the Abyss] (Double Business Sword) Feiyan Sword Gate ·"Wuyi Sword" Bo Wangzhou Jade Feishan/Cuiyu Sword Gate ·"Jade Feather Sword" -Jade Vein "Jade Collection" Bi Guang Jade Shadow Yellow Jade·[Walking on Water to Pick Scales][Hidden Clouds to Catch Birds][Unmoving Dangerous Wind][Swiping Fire Through Waterfall][Broken Ye Huilan] [Wash the bronze shadow of the tree] [Pull out the sunshine feathers] -Yumai "Jade Qiong Book" Green Stone (Dead Yi) Baixiao (Dead Yi) Feng Yao·[Broken Earth][ Aiding the tree] [Shedding the shell] [Spreading wings] [Qingming] [Eating leaves] [Old Jade] "How can the mountains last forever? The sea will wither; the jade in the box is old, the face in the mirror is withered, "Who remembers the glory of the millennium? " "Feng Yao" Broken leaves are fluttering × Qingming → [No. Bailu] (Third level·Strong is full; strong and strong, with life as an attack) "Through the clouds through the leaves, the sound breaks the clear dew" Yulao×Pull out the sun to shine → [Feiyuxian] (Fourth level·Yu Lao is empty, pulling the sun is full) (Yijian) "The true spirit is weathered, and the Yuyu corpse is born" Baizhu Pavilion ·"Cut Bamboo Sword" [Five-leaf caesarean][Broken Heart] Zhenqi Technique·[Bamboo Folding][Five-leaf Wheel] ·[Inverted Harrier Wings] Movement Technique Seven Flood Dragon Cave ·"Seven Flood Dragon Sword" [Seven Practice Lock Iron][Change] |Zhenqi Technique·[*Blade][Six Arms] Shang Huaitong ·"Pluck the Grass" [One fire burns life][Two fires start life][Three fires hide life][Four fires give life][Five fires illuminate life][Six fires reveal life][Seven fires have no life][Seven lives cast fire] Yu Jia·Yu Yingcai ·"Mo Shu Sword" [One shoulder horizontally] Zhengshou County ·"The Waves" Xugu County Zhang Family ·"The Cutting Knife" Zhang Zongyuan ·"Rejecting the Tiger Stick" Tiger Chapter·[Grass Shock][Wind Roar][Church](Pulse) Shen County Feng Family ·"Withered Flower Sword" [Three Steps to Pick Flowers] Fenghuai Martial Arts School ·"Opening Sword" ·"Fuliu Sword" [Floating Leaves in the Wind] ·"Cicada Sword" (The cicada part is actually inherited from the jade vein of Jade Feishan, and the sparrow part is an imitation of "Yellow Jade" ) Cicada Department (Light Sword)·[Broken Ground][Assisting Trees][Shelling][Spreading Wings][Qing Ming][Eating Leaves][Yulao] Sparrow Department (Epee)·[Flying Bronze Shadow][Pecking the Golden Beak of the Tree][Breaking Branches in the Wind] Xiangzhou Yijia ·"Zhulian Taiye" Qianxuan Jing br>[Huo Zhuo Lotus] [Abi Lotus Opens] [Eight Colds Ascend Purple] ·"Spear Intention Condensing Fire" Zhenqi Technique·[Huo Zhuo Gun Heart] * (Unknown Source) ·"Lu Bo" ·"The Immortal in the Quiet Ground" "Don't mention the grass and trees, I am all myself; the spiritual flower is faint, and the life is fire. " Yousheng · [The morning rises together, the evening fades together] "Origin of life and death in the morning and evening, only a dream in a thousand years. " ·"Fish" (Heart Sword) ·"Five Leaves Sword" ·"Method of Disappearing Forms and Mingling Sounds" Xilong Road Izhou Colorless City Changxing Sword Gate Huazhou Jiandu Bieyuan ·"Shi Jian Wu Jie Jing" ·"Spring Branch Sword" [Feng Jingxiao Ye] ·"The Bead Hand" Liuying Lushan Mountain ·"Antelope" [Flying Cliff Crossing][Thousands of Panjiao][Shadows on Cold Stream][Looking Back at the Moon][Hanging Corner] ·"Five Red Willows" [Jiangxia] ·"Four Forbidden Things in Lushan" Little Chixia ·" Danzhu Gongjue" ·"Chixia Sword" Meigu ·"Six Plum Secret Swords" Qingmulg Valley ·"Water and Fire Baoyuan" Xie Tingyu ·"Yunxiajun "Drive" Northland [Lu Banmian] High Pavilion ·"Feihuo" ·"Lisheng" Southeast Nanyue Mountain Southwest The Scaleless Gate ·"Breath of the Tongue" "Lingxuan Dadian" |Xuanjing Department 5 "The Seven Volumes of the Master of Yun Que Traveling to the Sky" [Qiwujiejie] [Xiaoyaoyou] 7 "Quenching the Dragon Sutra" [Shooting Dragon Light] 9 "Western Sea "Qun Jade Record" [Tianlan] [Jie Yu] [Yu Bailong] 13 "Twenty-Four Secrets of Jade Lock Golden Pass" [Golden Pass] [Jade Lock] 16 "Bowing the World Like a Ping Sutra" 21 "Spirit Son Viewing the World" [Covering the Mirror into a Painting] [Who is the Mirror Shadow] 22 "Long Knife" 23 "Euphorbor" [ Pojun] "Pointed Spear" "Feather Bow" [Tiger Shooting] "Chongshu" 29 "Biuan Hua Shi" |Spiritual Sutra Department 7 "The Great Body has no Form" "Outside the Body" 72 "Jade Dragon Autumn Water Sutra" Autumn Water · [Water Autumn Lotus] [Water Waves Cold Smoke]
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I have read most of the book in one go in the past two days, and there are still dozens of chapters left to catch up with the latest updates. I like the first volume very much, with plenty of tension, fast pace, and complete design. The protagonist of the volume, Yue Muzhou, is especially amazing. I have read more than 170 chapters in the second volume. To be honest, I am a little disappointed. I have summarized a few points of personal disappointment (basically compared with the first volume): 1. The level of the protagonist's contact is too different. Who are the opponents and teammates in the first volume? Taiyi True Dragon Immortal Lord, Yue Muzhou, Ming Qitian, and Zhu Gaoyang are all above Xuanmen, Tianlou, and Tianlou. In the second volume, they are all in the Shengmai realm, and the mini-boss (or middle boss?) That takes up a lot of space is Shang Huaitong, what the hell is a six-vein stinky fish and a rotten shrimp. I'm not saying that you can't write wonderful stories if you are at a low level, but the gap is so big that readers (or myself) will have a really bad impression. 2. The rhythm is too slow. When I just finished reading the first volume, I thought that the state examination was just a small plot. Soon I would go to Shendu with Ming to participate in the Tang Dynasty martial arts competition, and then participate in the new game in Shendu, which would stir up old grudges over the years and the traces of Lord Long in the world. As a result, I have already seen Chapter 170, and that's it? No, why, the King of Zhenbei and the King of Dragon seem more and more distant as I look at them. If the rhythm is too slow, the tension will be broken. I think the emotional scenes are quite delicate, and the details of the tossing and turning and losing ground are moving. It took many twists and turns to realize what I like, which is fine in itself. It's just that the pace is too slow. . Integrating the emotional drama into the already protracted main plot is dragging on and on. I felt it was dragging on even after watching it, let alone catching up. 3. The plot is scattered. In the first volume, the overt thread is about the arrival of the Dragon King, and the hidden thread is about the old story of Yue Yue, which finally ends with the story of Yue Lao ascending to the sky to kill the Dragon King. It is a very well-designed and complete story. In the second volume, the state examination, Seven Dragon Cuiyu, Happy Death in Tianshan, Zhang family's old stories, and the twists and turns of the emotional drama with Li Mingqing were so scattered that I didn't know what I was looking at. There was no truly amazing line, like Xi Wuqiu/Yue Muzhou. Even the supposed climax of defeating Shang Huaitong was not that enjoyable for me. 4. My original expectations I originally expected the protagonist's realm to improve faster. This does not mean faster in the setting of the book - that doesn't matter, but faster in terms of length and reading time. Because the tone of the first volume is very high, you really can't dwell too much on the low level. I originally hoped that the state examination could be just a small plot. Of course, I know that I should write about the protagonist's growth from scratch in a down-to-earth manner, but can those things about the Seven Dragons Happy Death Tower be skipped, or start from scratch first and then develop it into a god? Why? Because the readers don't care, the readers are more concerned about the King of Zhenbei, the legacy of Yue Lao, the martial arts competition of the Tang Dynasty where the wind and clouds gathered, and the divine capital! I really think that the protagonist should complete the state examination and go to the divine capital within Chapter 100, and his level should be quickly raised to 7/8. Of course, the author wrote everything, and my expectations and disappointments are not necessarily of any use. They are just my feelings while reading the book. I still hope that the author will write better and better.
The first quarterly report of the year Renwu
The record of Xiao Li's family governance·The first quarter of the Renwu year After January of this year, the weather has become warmer. People in Jianghu do not have so many complicated etiquette, and separation and death are almost common. The whole jade jade has been hanging white for ten days, and the passing of the old master has been taken into consideration from the face to the heart. The top and bottom of the mountain gate are really busy. In more than three months, seven major projects have been promoted one after another, covering the five surrounding states, and the farthest one can reach Shaolong City. These are all big things that could not be accomplished in the past even if the whole sect worked together. Now it is unbelievable that they are moving forward together. Even if the new head has arranged everything from beginning to end and called them to the main hall to talk about it one by one, the elders will inevitably be a little worried. But there really was no big mistake. The heroes of the gang leaders in the surrounding states all rumored to each other that the brain of the new leader of Yufei Mountain was somehow born. There was no big or small thing, nor was it old or new. As long as this matter was exposed in front of her, the cause and effect were all burned into her heart. She would never forget which branch of the matter reached which stage. Many times when people were called to inquire, their first reaction was to be surprised that the leader could still remember such trivial things. It was as if the Cuiyu Sword Gate had grown in her mind. But something that worries the sect members recently is that the headmaster has begun to arrange the affairs for the next two or three months, as if he is about to travel far away - no matter how appropriate and careful the arrangements are, it is not as reassuring as having the headmaster personally. And after all, no one can change the leader's mind. His close followers like Shen Yao, Chu Nian, and Kuang Rong all obey orders, and Bai Zhuge's "Qing Zihuang" and others do not go beyond the limits. Although the elders gain some respect on the surface, every time they say something, the leader nods and obeys, but turns around and still does what he should do. So what the leader has to do is that it's going to rain. Li Mingqing held Lost Cui in her arms and walked down the stone steps. When she reached a viewing pavilion, she stopped temporarily and stood with her sword looking at it. Since the beginning of winter, hundreds of trees have withered, and it has not rained for several months. There are still a month or two before the next rain, and the earth has just given birth to its green fluff. This is the most open and open month in Yilan Mountain. Standing on the cliff, you can see thousands of trees in the wild and high cliffs and waterfalls in the distance. Yilan Mountain is far less famous than Kongtong, but its beauty is even worse. Shen Yao stood behind the girl, knowing that she had loved this mountain scenery since she was a child, so he didn't say anything to disturb her. But Li Mingqing spoke, in a low voice: "Look, this season is the most bleak and magnificent, but it also has a hint of youthfulness." Shen Yao was slightly startled. She had grown up in the mountains since she was a child. If the girl had grown up for fifteen years, she would have grown up for twenty years. Who has never seen this beautiful scenery, so there is no need to introduce it. But since the girl spoke, she had no choice but to say "hmm". Li Mingqing turned around and smiled at her, holding her sword and leaving the pavilion: "It's a pity that the kingfishers are not easy to see... Do you think there are still yellow jade in the mountains?" This is another story. Since the girl took over the management of the mountain, she has used the mountain cicada as the image of feeding the sword and the kingfisher as the soul of the jade. It is forbidden to hunt and raise more. Unfortunately, such a strange bird as the yellow jade has been almost extinct in the past ten years. The girl is said to have seen it once in her childhood, but Shen Yao has never seen it. I just remember the legends of the previous generations of teachers that that kind of bird was formed from the souls of countless kingfishers after their death. Seeing it was like seeing the souls of the ancestors of the Cuiyu Sword Sect. "This... In short, no disciple has seen it for several years." "Who is here?" Li Minqing held her sword and walked back to the stone steps, "Is it the Chamber of Commerce in Fucheng?" "Yes." When it came to the current matter, Shen Yao became much clearer, "Changyu Chamber of Commerce, the company that Master Zhang set up a connection with, wants to negotiate a deal of twelve thousand taels. It is said that the Li family in the west is behind it." Li Mingqing turned the Lost Cui Sword in her hand, her eyes like stars: "Twelve thousand taels!" She raised her head and sighed: "How can I spend so much money?" Shen Yao smiled: "Report to the leader." "Speak." "This money is not ours yet." "Sooner or later." "Master, we haven't even met them. This is our first contact." Shen Yao said, "Even if the two parties agree on their intentions, it's hard to say how much we can earn in the future. They are a big chamber of commerce and there is no shortage of our goods." "I said we can definitely negotiate, believe it or not. And no matter what we sell to them, they will definitely accept it at a favorable price." Li Mingqing smiled, "Do you want to make a bet?" Shen Yao thought for a while: "No gambling." "Why don't you even listen to the bet?" "Don't listen." Li Mingqing smiled: "It's annoying." In the end, Li Mingqing did not tell Shen Yao why she was confident. Senior Sister Shen handled things properly and had a kind temperament. From an emotional point of view, they were sisters who grew up together. From a relationship point of view, she was one of the top confidants of the head. But Senior Sister Shen's vision cannot go beyond Bowang in just two or three months. There are some things that are inappropriate to tell her. She cannot understand them and will only increase her worries. In fact, after obtaining the telepathic candle, her views on many people have changed a lot, and these changes all come from understanding herself. It has almost become a lingering instinct to understand people you know more deeply and to understand people you meet for the first time more quickly. This instinct inevitably brings some loneliness. Loneliness can lead to longing. The girl has too many people to miss. Li Mingqing looked up, raised her sword and walked into the moon-making building that the other party had arranged. The attendants at the door may not know anyone in Bowang, but they absolutely cannot not recognize this girl, and they greeted her as soon as they saw her figure. When they arrived at Cuiyu's small pavilion, the other party had already taken a seat in it. When they saw the girl's figure, they all stood up. The shopkeeper of the Changyu Chamber of Commerce is thinner than expected and has a silver beard. This time he came in person, which was really beyond Shen Yao's expectations. But it was not beyond Li Mingqing's expectation. The girl knew very well what the purpose of his arrival was. After a brief exchange of greetings, the shopkeeper mentioned it: "The master said that there are many descendants in the family, but too many are useless. Jade Fei has been inherited for four hundred years and has a clear and upright origin. It is a famous sect in Long. I wonder if I can send a few of them to learn some skills." Li Mingqing smiled slightly: "Yu Fei is very happy to be favored by a high school. However, he must pass the entrance examination normally, otherwise he will not be consistent in character and will be easily injured during his studies." "Of course, that is arranged by Mr. Li." The discussion lasted for three hours. We had dinner together at noon and discussed for a long time. Li Mingqing said that all the young masters of Taishan Medicine House came to the mountain to inspect and cooperate. Finally, another small Yeerrong was added. The total amount was set at 15,000 taels of silver. The matter involved twelve businesses, big and small, and was planned to be completed within three years. More detailed matters will be discussed by the disciples and the state government in the next few days. Now that the cooperation has been decided, Li Mingqing will send the shopkeeper out of the city himself. "I came to Bowang once nine years ago." The shopkeeper walked along the long street, looking at Zhuoyue Lake, "At that time, the place that had the final say was called Qijiao Cave. I chatted with one of their cave owners for a few words, and then I never came again. Caravan businesses also avoided this place." "Those who are robbers are not capable of planning." He sighed with a smile. "Now Bowang no longer has this name." The girl said. "They are all jade and jade breeze." The shopkeeper said. Li Mingqing smiled faintly. "... Does Mr. Li really not consider selling kingfishers? We will never kill them in cages, but only place them in landscape gardens. We buy and sell them individually, and the whereabouts and status of each one must be reported to Yu Fei from time to time." The shopkeeper said, "I have seen many kingfishers, but this beautiful color and shape is unique to Jade Fei. Countless princes and wealthy people will definitely be willing to throw away gold and silver." In fact, this kind of single sale will be ten thousand times more profitable. If this business is concluded, the profit in one or two years will probably catch up with the sum of all previous transactions. Li Mingqing had no hesitation and shook his head again: "Not for sale." The shopkeeper sighed regretfully. "Actually, I also want to see the jade bird, but unfortunately I have been very busy these past two days and cannot make the trip." Li Mingqing smiled: "It's easy to say. When will the shopkeeper come by next time, just contact Cuiyu. The scenery of Yufei Mountain is beautiful at this time of the year." "Then I won't bother you again next time." Approaching the city gate, the shopkeeper thought for a moment, "I heard that there is a strange kingfisher in Jade Fei Mountain, called 'Yellow Jade'. It is said that it has golden feathers, is the king of kingfishers, and can fight peregrine falcons... Is it true or false?" Li Mingqing was slightly startled, and subconsciously looked in the direction of Yu Fei: "I saw it when I was a child, but I haven't seen this kind of bird in more than ten years." "Ah, that's it." The shopkeeper sighed with regret again, stood at the city gate, cupped his hands, said goodbye to the girl, and boarded the car. Li Mingqing stood in front of the city gate for a while. At this time, she suddenly had an inexplicable doubt, had she really seen Huang Jade? She looked at the green mountain shadow in the distance, and she knew that it was not Jade Fei Mountain, but Jade Fei Mountain was behind it. It seems that the yellow shadow has never really appeared in my memory. The earliest impression actually comes from the words of my uncle. He always said that I took the little Qingqing when I was a child to play by the stream, and the yellow bird also stood on the branch to drink water. He must have taken a fancy to the fact that the little Qingqing would become a great person in the future. He said she was tired of practicing swordsmanship, he said she no longer wanted to study, and he said she was too playful. But then his mind failed, and the version kept changing. Sometimes the bird flew by, sometimes it was catching fish in the water... Anyway, Li Aiqing always heard about this when he was a child, and gradually there was such a picture in his mind. As for whether it is a real preservation or a fabrication caused by language, the longer time passes, the less clear it becomes. Even whether this kind of bird really exists seems to be shrouded in mystery. For a moment, she suddenly wanted to use the telepathic candle to inquire about this scene, but the bustling sounds of pedestrians rang in her ears. She was stunned and gave up. It is really an illusion and has no actual meaning. Uncle Shi often hugged her and said: "I was born in Cuiyu, and I hope to die for Cuiyu. After death, my soul turns into a kingfisher and stands on the branch outside the small Qingqing window." The master said: "The dead body knows this is the time, so it should go early. The young child expresses condolences and goes to the Yuling in the mountain." Senior brother said: "One day, Huang Feicui will return to Yilan Mountain." They believe, and they believe it, that feelings flow between each other's hearts. It doesn't matter whether the bridge is tangible or intangible. Li Mingqing stretched her body toward the sky, turned around, and was thinking about the next big thing. The street shop is already reaching out to say hello: "Master Xiao Li, what kind of distinguished guest is that?" Li Mingqing walked over with a smile: "I've negotiated some business with you all. Brother Zhao, in a month, the price of your sugar will be cheaper." "No, if the purchase price is low, I will sell it at a low price. It's only 2 cents profit anyway, I won't make much." The man chuckled, "Headmaster Xiao Li, would you like one of the fresh candied hawsers today?" "Take one." Li Mingqing took a copper plate and placed it on the table. The man picked a candied fruit-red one. With twenty years of craftsmanship, the candied wings were translucent and slightly yellow, as if they were covered with a layer of glass. Li Mingqing took a bite, narrowed her eyes with satisfaction, and the man laughed. Turning around to say goodbye, Li Mingqing loved walking on the familiar streets of Bowang, thinking about two major events at the beginning of this year. One is to make a good deal with Tianshan. During the Tianshan entrance examination, Yu Fei will also go there and recruit some disciples who are willing to come. Although Yu Fei is now famous, talent is the pillar of a sect's renaissance. The two are about the alliance of the five states' sects. There is Yuquan Mountain in the southwest, Kongtong Mountain in the southeast, and none of the thirteen mountain gates in the five states in the north is outstanding. Now that Yufei Mountain is emerging, it holds a lot of financial resources in its hands, and it is beneficial to integrate the scattered sects. For the first time, the girls unite to try to avoid touching those who hold power and profit. They only create a name together to contact some cooperation and business. After the first communication years ago, most of the sects were interested. But naturally what the girl wants to do is not just this. No matter how step-by-step it is, first of all, it must be a close alliance in name. Young Li Ming had already reported to Shaolong Immortal Platform and chatted with Zhang Xiaozhu for a long time, but the platform leader still suggested that she go to Shenjing. If we can get the support of Shenjing Xianrentai and the high officials in the DPRK, things will be much easier in the future. We don't have to worry about the alliance falling apart with a single order. Li Mingqing trusted this stage master who was half teacher and half friend, and it was thanks to his help to pick up the broken hand. It happened that Yu Lin and Tianshan were also going to Shenjing, so Li Mingqing discussed this matter with Shi Haoxue. Tianshan handed her a letter of thanks to Xianrentai. The disciples guessed correctly that she was indeed going to make a long trip, just five days later, and it would take a long time. The candied haws are very sweet and she will definitely miss this land very much in the next three months. As the sky grew dark, Li Mingqing ate the last piece of candy and walked into the newly built theater in Xicheng. This is probably the only willfulness of the girl. This theater has nothing to do with anything. On weekdays, no one likes to come to listen. There are only some idle old people, and the insurance covers the capital. But she was quite happy to sit in this dark and quiet theater for half an hour. In the empty space there was only the babbling singing, backed by the scratchy sound of old strings from old films. Sometimes she would write playbooks for them, buy playbooks and send them to them. Everyone in the troupe recognized this young benefactor, but she never asked for a good private room or tea, and she rarely even said hello. She just sat in the corner and listened quietly for a while when she came, and she left quietly. She was the one who sent me this part of the song. The tune was too high and too melodious, and the words were strange. The troupe still doesn't sing it very well, but the girl obviously likes it. "There is no need for Taoism in Immortal Palace Langyuan. Immortal grass is planted in one's destiny..." Li Mingqing quietly watched the stage and spent the evening in this theater. In the next five days, she reviewed and explained every matter that Yu Fei was advancing. She even carefully assessed the sword practice progress of young disciples such as Cui Xiaoyan, and picked out those who did not practice sword well and criticized them, like a nagging old woman. As a result, I couldn't get a good night's sleep until the fifth night. When I sat in the car the next day, my eyes were bleary. She leaned her head against the window with a smile, familiar faces such as Shen Yao and Kuang Rong were talking back and forth, and the shorter disciples were jumping around asking her to bring back various gifts they had heard about from somewhere. "Hmm," Li Mingqing said with a lazy smile. Anyway, they will forget everything tomorrow. As the carriages and horses leave Bowang City, Tianshan's team will meet her at Shaolong Mansion. In the car, Li Mingqing leaned against the window, finally looking through the newly submitted matters, and planned to reply to them separately when they arrived in Fucheng. It was at this time that she was a little sleepy and the sun was dazzling, but suddenly a large shadow blocked the sun. When she looked up, she saw that she was about to leave the Yufei Mountain boundary, and the mountains in front of her were coming up. Then a bright, golden yellow shadow suddenly flew past her field of vision like a falcon.
Let's talk about some personal thoughts
First of all, support the author to write according to the established ideas. Now that the foundation has been laid and the direction is okay, it is even more important to have a clear idea when writing than to make readers feel happy. With such a long page, so many characters, and spanning such a long time, he was able to sort it out in detail, fill in the pits, and give each character a satisfactory result. In the end, the unfinished business and the greatest grievances were placed on Xiao Pei's sword, allowing him to unsheath his sword at the peak of his power, cut off everything, end the past, and open a new chapter, which shows the author's talent and intention. So what I want to talk about are just some details that I saw as a reader. The first is the polarized comments so far. Those who like it praise it highly, while those who don't like it make personal attacks on the characters and the author. You can even see "suggesting that the villain just kill the protagonist." Whether in online writing or in the physical book world, such comments are uncommon. Of course, it can be simply attributed to "abuse of the owner" or "not happy enough", but from my personal experience, it is actually an overall imbalance. On the one hand, it is the imbalance of the protagonist's power and the crisis he faces. The most "exhilarating" passage at the moment is the martial arts competition. The young man has just left the novice village, making friends, competing for glory, and seeing the world with his own eyes. He holds the power that can affect the balance of victory. Whether it is the author, the reader, or himself, it is clear that as long as he is willing to take action, he can change many things. In this situation, he is a "hero" who can draw his sword to help when the road is rough. Whether it is investigating a case or fighting, his mentality is very relaxed. There is no question of whether he can do it or not, only whether he wants to do it or not. But in the later stages, there are more and more things that are powerless. Xiao Pei also has to collect clues, face crises, and occasionally solve other people's crises - this is different from the first chapter. As the author said at the end of the first chapter, such a plot is to "make enemies." To put it bluntly, in the first chapter, Yue Lao Zhu Geming's mother is a "chivalrous person who sees injustice on the road", and Xiao Pei is just an unlucky guy. Readers can still understand his powerlessness and yearn for the concept of "xia". After the introduction of the Sun Swallowing Society, the situation suddenly changed. It was no longer a struggle between Xia and "evil", but a struggle between "evil" and "evil". There is no place for Xiao Pei in this huge conspiracy, and he is not powerful enough to shake him. No one is even interested in the secrets he carries, and no one can buy him even if he wants to use his body as bait to force him to death - which leads to him being completely marginalized. This does not mean that the protagonist cannot be marginalized. In group portraits, there are many people who fly out and do not come back for two weeks. But most of the time, the protagonist is in a key position that cannot be replaced. Readers and supporting characters have expectations for him and believe that he can find good news to break the situation. However, in this part of the plot, Xiao Pei only brought bad news that "made the situation more serious". But the bad news he brought cannot be solved by himself, and he has to rely on others to solve it. That would be very unpleasant. Readers would think from a God's perspective, "Why didn't you realize such a simple problem earlier? It's useless to say that everyone is dead now." They would blame Xiao Pei for overestimating his ability to interfere in high-level duels, and he was so busy that nothing was accomplished in the end. Just like the battle in Miss Ming's state of mind, just like the battle in the Immortal Terrace ambushing Huansi Tower, even if Xiao Pei is the key to victory or defeat, in the readers' eyes, it is not a help in times of need - after all, the person is not dead in the end. As we all know, as long as the opponent is not dead, he will be resurrected with full health next time. Even if Xiao Pei is resurrected with residual health, he can't beat him. Rounding up is equivalent to trying your best to do useless work. On the other hand, there is the imbalance of high-level combat power, which is manifested in the fact that everyone denounces Kongtong and Xianrentai as useless, Huansilou, as a villain, is full of ideas, and Qu Zhu is even more intelligent than a monster. I think this is actually a problem with the underlying logic of this type of novel, which is difficult to change. It is known that the protagonist needs to show off his chivalry, and the road needs to be uneven; it is known that the bigger the matter is, the more capable he is, and the villain must be stronger; it is known that the villain is very strong, but has never succeeded, and has to wait for the protagonist to deal with it personally, so the force of decency must be strong to have a suppressive effect; it is known that the force of decency is very strong, so the road should not be uneven. Okay, nothing more to do with the protagonist. It can be seen that the author has worked very hard to give Xiao Pei room to develop, but the creative concept seems to include the loyalty of "one hero and three gangs", and is unwilling to truly write a lone hero. So sometimes I can write down the Yi family's masterful double-line investigation, and sometimes I can only write down teammates to death and give Xiao Pei a big move to earn points. When the above two aspects are combined, the feeling is abuse, knife and frustration. Just looking at the surface situation, it seems that the harder Pei works, the worse the situation becomes. When he faces the world in a relaxed and happy manner, conspiracies surround him. When he stares at everything with bitterness and hatred, the conspiracies break out. After he lets go of his obsession with his conscience, the conspiracies continue. Of course, how the world works is not affected by personal thoughts, but no matter how hard you move, struggle, resist or even fight, you can only watch the situation slip, and it still feels too bad. Based on the above two points, I would like to suggest that the author consider asking Xiao Pei to do more things within his ability, or to raise problems that he can solve. When others are frowning and thinking hard, Xiao Pei smiled mysteriously and said, leave this matter to me, I can solve it. Or let other characters give the key bad news. For example, after hearing a shout "Their target is Miss Ming", Xiao Pei suddenly realizes and runs away. Even if he just claps and cheers in the end, it can be considered that he has worked hard. It is also suggested that the relationship between the changes in the situation and the growth of the protagonist can be closer. Although it is impossible to have an epiphany and kill everyone, there is a staged result after the enlightenment. It can clear away the depression and the reading experience may be better - even the section of helping Miss Ming suppress Tianxin seems to have no obvious impact on the overall situation. Miss Ming does not need to die, Xiao Pei invites the immortal to fight. If Miss Ming dies, Xiao Pei will probably still invite the immortal to fight. If the situation becomes that after helping Miss Ming, you can open the door in five minutes, maybe the sense of accomplishment will be higher. The second is the overall worldview structure and character creation. Although there are many crises in the first volume, the sense of security is very high and the sense of belief is also very strong. There are people who love and trust Xiao Pei, so Xiao Pei tries his best to protect them. Everyone depends on life and death. The atmosphere in the second volume until the martial arts competition is also very good. The friends are playing around, bickering and supporting each other. The battle with Shang is very exciting here and full of motivation. But in the second half, this motivation disappeared. Who is Xiao Pei fighting for? Are you a friend in Qingskirt? At first, she was burdened with the hatred of her senior brother and wanted to find the culprit. Xiao Pei went with him confidently; later, because of the hatred of her master, she fought with Huansilou and the couple parted ways. Xiaopei ran into Kongtong in despair and found the lair of Huansilou. He discovered that his friend in white skirt was plotted and fought for it. ——At the end of the story, the motive is a little vague, and the solution is also very complicated. This is a huge conspiracy, and it can't be solved by killing anyone. Besides, Xiao Pei has no ability to kill. It is certainly a kind of courage to do something when you know that you can't do it, but why is he fighting? Including the final killing of Sui Zaihua, the motivation turned back and seemed to become "If I don't kill Sui Zaihua, Xiao Li will kill him. She can't kill, so I help her kill." At this point, there is actually no chivalry at all. To put it more harshly, he was pushed by various things to make choices. Qu Zhu couldn't help himself, and Xiao Pei couldn't help himself in the end. The reason why he draws his sword to help when there is an injustice on the road is praised by people because the knight could have chosen to ignore it, but he took the risk to act for a stranger. Taking action for a friend is an obligation - of course, it does not mean that he should not choose to take action for a friend, but with this added factor, the matter is no longer "whether you are willing to give up glory and wealth for the sake of enlightenment", but "whether you are willing to avenge your friend." One reason covers up the other, and his own struggle is much less. Then the personal relationship with Sui before this becomes redundant, and glory and wealth cannot torture Xiao Pei's heart - there is nothing to struggle with. Before this, outside the main battlefield where the sky collapsed and the earth collapsed, there was always a stable foundation and a stable sense of security. Similar to Chang in the small village, although he can't fight, you can trust him. Or friends during martial arts competitions, always honest and enthusiastic. But in the second half, apart from Miss Ming and Maomaolong, there is no longer anything that can be trusted. Kongtong is completely rotten, the Immortal Terrace is high and the emperor is far away, and the Huansi Tower is secretly lurking. From the crisis to the dust settled, only the line of Sui runs through the whole volume. For the public, he is the superior, for the private, he is half a bole, so after this identity is detonated, for the "official" and for the The trust of the "teacher" was also detonated at the same time, so that when I watched it, I couldn't help but think that the folk were like chickens and dogs, the sect was deep and difficult to understand, and the officialdom was filthy. Those who dealt with Xiao Pei must be bad guys, and those who appreciated Xiao Pei probably had ulterior motives. The world is so big, I'm afraid no one can be trusted. In the final analysis, Sui Zaihua's status and depth are enough to be the final boss of traditional martial arts novels. For example, Linghu Chong was "betrayed" by Yue Buqun and could no longer join the sect. Yang Guo was ostracized by a famous family and found it difficult to regain trust. Fortunately, Xiao Pei is not a bitter and resentful character, and there is still room for change. However, in a novel that does not pursue pleasure so much, it is better to use it with caution because such a complete betrayal will destroy the sense of security in the entire world. The last is a purely personal thought. After reading it, I feel that the author's inspiration and writing style are like a wild dragon. Although it is firmly bound within the scope of the outline, there will still be moments of breaking free. I want to write too much but the length is too short, I want to say too much but there is too little time, which is reflected in the climax after climax without breathing - daily life is not a breath, the few daily days can only be regarded as carrot flowers in the dish, and the only thing that can breathe is a piece of drama that makes people feel happy when reading it. I secretly went to visit my friends, take care of the little things I could, and fight a few small fights that were sure to win but not lose. When the money was not enough, I went to the martial arts school to teach swordsmanship. A well-dressed big man was waiting outside the door and said that he had something to ask of Young Master Pei. Little Pei said that he would be able to pay his salary after I finish teaching this move. A hero also needs to eat and live, and does not have to go up and down to fight with gods every day. Xiao Pei is still a boy after all, and it has been a long time since I saw him playing like a boy. Xia should be the freest person in this world. Now the world is entangled with real and virtual shackles. He is looking forward to the day when Xiao Pei can wield the sword to the end of the world and return the world to freedom.
Something seems wrong
From the perspective of the first volume, when Parrot wrote this novel, it was obvious that he wanted to write a road novel. Includes: the classic traditional ancient surprise writing, but also the American small town fantasy in modern popular literature (an unsolved case leads to the conspiracy behind the small town, obviously American) The clues of the big boss hidden in the small town, the Sun Swallowing Society, and the Zhushi Sect are intertwined. Obviously, "exploring and uncovering the conspiracy" was originally the core of this book. The settings of the knights staying in the hotel The goal of participating in the martial arts competition The various sects that have already determined their locations in advance and appeared in the lines The immortal powers and divine swords scattered in the world (can lead to The main line of the road novel is the collection of achievements) Immortals and World of Warcraft in different regions And Parrot wrote the plot of Pei Ye's escape, the plot of someone seeing him off when he left the city, and the plot of staying in a hotel many times in the first volume. From a creative perspective, all signs indicate that this book should have been a road novel at first. But something is wrong now. There are too few map unlocks, and there are even two main areas, one is the hometown and the other is the imperial city. The area of influence is too dry. The sects that were originally part of the Highway Wen stronghold only have names. It even makes readers exclaim, "When did these ancient and golden sects appear?" " The core strength of the characters comes from [the level of comprehension] and [various competitions with others]. Until more than two million words have passed, most of the characters who have "received praise for their strength" in the book have almost zero interaction with nature, beasts, enemies, etc. In other words, the strength is fake, the artistic conception is empty, and the character relies on charm and appearance. This is very serious and will lead to fatigue over time. Every character who appears is equipped with a set of exercises and skills. Familiar people fight back and forth, and readers gradually become numb. As for the things mentioned above, they were originally supposed to be road stories. I think the protagonist's route should have been clear originally. There would be more sect strongholds, but now it is completely opposite. Especially the premature involvement in the unsolved case (of course, this also has the premise that Pei Yezhu wants to participate in the cause and effect of Grandpa Yue), which makes the timeline almost stagnant at the end of the second volume to the third volume. When time stops, Parrot will get stuck (I think friends who have written experience know that time stasis in novels can almost 100% cause stalls). Once stuck, it can only water emotional drama. Coupled with the cry of a group of people "Watch the party fight! Watch the female characters fight in the harem!", Parrot directly wrote the plot of the fan club series that aroused public outrage Almost subverting the charm of all supporting female characters. Shenyi Qu, who originally gave people the impression of being a "cold and dismissive little doctor", turned into a low-quality pervert in this series. Those who wrote the sword report added a greasy sense of infatuation. Shi Hanxue suddenly appeared with teasing and charm skills. This is almost a fatal blow to the already slow and vague three volumes. After such a protracted and greasy plot, writing the emotional scene in Xizhou was a breath of fresh air. Then... It's directly Yong Ji's torture plot. Emotions are suppressed again and again, even if it is truly genuine and unrestrained, it will not help. Because Grandpa Yue's certification of Pei Ye in cyberspace... No one was watching! Having another senior around doesn't help either. The stagnant time and space, the stagnant characters, the stagnant or even slightly deviated plot are gradually eroding the sense of fantasy in the world. What was originally a highly popular road article has become sticky and greasy due to subjective and objective reasons. I just hope that the cases, main plot, Jianghu affairs, strange beasts, and scattered swords can be connected as soon as possible. This is still a good book after all. I hope the author will work harder, regain his strength, and give readers a satisfactory explanation. The current situation is just like what was said in the love apartment...
An inventory of the major war criminals among the defeated generals of Lao Pei today (contains spoilers) (add the part that caused the most psychological shadow to Lao Pei)
Top1: The two white robes who were responsible for escorting Lao Pei to Dragon Tongue at the beginning The beginning of everything. Lao Pei did not have a zhenqi tree or a sword in his hands when he was a child. Two adults who had obviously touched human lives, and they still had the upper hand, did not fight two against one. As a result, Teacher Wu was forced to change the target while Dragon Tongue was eating the body and triggered a series of chain reactions. top2: Teacher Wu Zaigu, the Zhushi Sect's biggest war criminal Wu Zaigu is keen on whipping corpses. He is an extremely emotionally unstable little fairy. His actions include but are not limited to: deliberately disgusting Lin Lin (prisoning Pei's anger value +, leaving clues that caused Feng Huai to start shaking people in advance), using Cheng Feng's head to shine shoes (prisoning Pei's anger value +, driving Lao Pei back madly) Desperately), cut Master Shen into pieces to vent his anger (Long Pei's anger value was +, he had time to whip the corpse and no time to deal with the battlefield, and gave Lao Pei a small dragon heart), Teacher Wu, a veteran Qisheng, not only fought back and forth with a landlubber, but in the end he never fought, and gave Pei Ye the Heart/Intention Sword with the highest appearance rate in this book: Cloud Sky Covers Eyes and Lost Feathers, a set of operations to send away himself and the sect, and Dragon Lord is coming. I have to give a thumbs up and call him brother top3: Taiyi True Dragon Immortal Lord I am too old for AI, I can only bully ordinary people and those below the sky tower, my computing power is not as good as Xi Lao, I was beaten into a human machine by the combination of Yue Lao + Liuli in a fight, and finally I was treated like a dog by Pei Ye and Maomao and was fed an endowment. Besides my current expressiveness, I am only being teased at other times, and I have been reduced to a funny character. His main duty is to upgrade Lao Pei, but also to protect Lao Pei from death. He is a pure grievance top4: Yang Hu, the biggest ghost in Happy Death Building This person has too many flaws to count. Although he wears a mask, he carries a long stick with him that is easier to recognize than TM's face. It didn't even take long for Lao Pei to guess who he was. It was the fastest episode to handle the case. Qisheng beat Sansheng twice for being cowardly. The third time he finally mustered up the courage to step forward, but he was tricked by Lao Pei and played with by two children, Yang Yan and Pei Ye. In the end, Lao Pei used the body as a tool to tease Xiao Li. The revelation of the Soul-Seizing Pearl, the most important mission item in the second volume, caused Lao Pei to begin to notice Huansilou and attracted a biological father to Huansilou. top5: Lao Shang A very miserable character, all the improvements in the front are just to make Lao Pei step more comfortable in the back. The sect has lost its swordsmanship and has lost its life. The only use is to blast Lao Pei with an important component of the sword ladder top5: Xiao Li I was too concerned about face and didn't squeeze Lao Pei dry, which led to Lao Pei flirting with this and that everywhere in Shenjing top6: Ming's mother I was too concerned about face and didn't take Lao Pei down directly in Kongtong, which led to Lao Pei going around Shenjing to tease this and that top7: Huangxie I was ordered to go into the prison to kill people. Apart from the fact that my eyes were red, I couldn't tell that I was any better than the other seven beings. After I came in and smashed the cell door, I was treated like a dog by everyone in the prison. Like a top orderer who was played by a long hand, I was beheaded by prisoner Pei in various ways. As a result, prisoner Pei was released from prison unscathed and staged a big show in front of all the officials and inmates top8: Taipingcao Gang Although I know it is because of the law of the same world, the performance of Taipingcao Gang Xuanmen and the performance of Kongtong Stage Xuanmen make people doubt that they are in the same book. The three-headed Si Lianwen was crushed to death like a wild dog, and the two-headed Tiger Pioneer became the background board for Lao Pei to display Fei Yuxian. Dalongtouqiu Tianyu is even more heavyweight. Without being suppressed by the law of the same world and having the information of Lao Pei, he took the initiative to go and follow Lao Pei 1v1 and then was burned as a mature man. The whole gang has never beaten the two-vein tree realm together. Mei Yi is a poet top9: The fastest legendary fourth prince Li Zhi of the Food Immortal Lord The human-machine prince, with a strange mechanism, is for Pei Ye to show off his sword form. I put Changsun Jue on the Suzaku Gate and fought Pei Ye for longer than Li Zhi did. top10: Zhang Mengqiu In this book, I can't do anything as a jpg spokesperson. My master, Li Du, was imprisoned and Pei was pinned down there. When the time comes for the pig to be killed, I am not there. After twenty years of hard work plus several years of hard work, one of my creations died on Lao Pei's Unbound Card Universiade. I retract my preface. This is the most maggot-like Taoism in this book, even more outrageous than the Taiping Trough Gang. Those three can still squirm a little, but this one is suffocated to death Long Pei's psychological shadow: top1: Taiyi True Dragon Immortal Lord As the most impressive boss in the background of this book, although the previous joke said that Long Lord always ends up defeated every time he appears, this is undoubtedly the one who has the biggest psychological shadow on Pei Ye. Lao Pei forcibly faced the most powerful enemy in his life when he was at his weakest. Even though this shaped Lao Pei's steely psychological quality, the experience of watching Jing Ziwang, Zhu Gaoyang, Ming Qitian, and Yue Muzhou attack him one by one but unable to do anything gave Lao Pei a huge PTSD. As we all know, Lao Pei has a problem. Whenever he has to sacrifice others to achieve his goal, he will go insane. He will forcefully burn himself or take extreme actions to prevent this situation from happening. This mental state is most likely because throughout the Dragon and Tiger movie, Lao Pei's scenes are basically to keep running away and seeking help from stronger people. During the process of escaping, people around Pei were constantly injured or died. This experience probably caused Lao Pei to become a lunatic whenever he encountered a similar situation again. In fact, in addition to Lao Qu Yuelao and Ming Ma, Long Jun was also Lao Pei's life mentor. He taught Lao Pei with the bloody reality that if you dare to escape, you will have to pay the price in blood. top2: Qu Zhu The well-deserved boss of the second volume, not to mention the brilliant record of capturing Pei Ye three times, Qu Zhu spent his entire life explaining to Lao Pei what true determination and will are. Compared with the oppression of Long Jun in the first chapter, which was like the sky falling, Qu Zhu's chapter was more inclined to constantly "question the heart" of Pei Ye. Qu Zhu asked Lao Pei a lot of questions. At this time, Lao Pei was still in the growth stage. He just had a goal for his life, but he was far from knowing how to achieve it. While these questions tortured Lao Pei, they also pointed out the path Lao Pei should take. With lofty ideals, a heavy past, a firm determination, a cold will, he endured humiliation for decades and finally succeeded in destroying his enemy. Compared with non-human enemies like Long Jun, Qu Zhu is what Lao Pei really faces, crushing his own existence in all aspects. Lao Pei admires Qu Zhu from the bottom of his heart. Even after their final showdown, Lao Pei still recognizes the relationship between them as both mentor and friend. Parrot's sense of pressure on Qu Zhu is too strong. I still remember that when Pei raved that he would definitely be able to catch Qu Zhu, all the book reviews were criticizing Pei top3: Yu Sicheng Yu Sicheng's plot has not yet been finished by Parrot, and Parrot is currently in a state of suspended animation, so first Let's put it here, Yu Sicheng is the first person in Shenjing who can beat the shit out of Lao Pei and make him willingly admit that he can't beat him. As we all know, Lao Pei is notorious for his sharp mouth. The last enemy who defeated Lao Pei alive purely by strength was Qu Zhu
You are still young, so you might as well bite the bullet and work harder to write a 4,000-word book. After all, you are writing a book online, but 4,000 words seems a bit effortless, and readers will not feel comfortable reading it. It is better to just write 6,000 words, which is very standard. But since we have already written 6,000 words, why not do another 4,000 words, directly go up to 10,000 words, which will not be the same level as before. Since your hand speed is not that bad, it shows that you are working very hard! But it is already 10,000 words. If you don't add 10,000 words and code the meaning of 20,000 words, it would be great! Even when you are lying in bed, you may not be able to figure it out. I've already coded 20,000 words, why do I still care about that? It's not that fast, right? Yes, listen to me, just code 100,000 words today! The man who is in the online book writing pyramid!
My hands are itchy and I want to write a book review
B, It's been so long since the first volume, so I won't comment on it. Let's talk about the second volume, based on the characters. ,, However, there are too many "crossing branches" in the middle, which makes the whole volume appear to be scattered and slow. No matter before leaving the county, the first ones to appear are Brother Cheng and Zhang Junxue. I can only tell you my own opinion. These two characters must be successful. Although Brother Cheng is just half a chapter, it serves as an introduction to Qijiao, Huanshenglou, Qi Zhaohua, and Tianshan, and then leads to the grievances in this volume. Then there is Zhang Junxue. Zhang Junxue is very successful in character creation. How can it be considered a success? Personally speaking, at least your character must be consistent, and all changes must be traceable. At the worst, if you say "I don't know what happened to him over the years," I can barely tolerate it. Zhang Junxue's character creation was very successful, especially the scene with the swearing sword, which makes people feel that this is indeed the decision Zhang Junxue should make, including the subsequent quarrel with Xiao Pei, which is very reasonable and has sufficient "motives". But on the other hand, Zhang Junxue's plot is a bit problematic. The reason why Jun Xue participated in the martial arts competition was because of her hatred for Shang Huai Tong, but someone in the chapter commentary said, was Shang Huai Tong's vicious plan at that time necessary? Let's talk about this later with Shang Huaitong. Another question is about the head of the Zhang family. This section should be to pave the way for Xiao Pei's emotions in the final martial arts competition. The Zhang family's actions caused Zhang Junxue's change in mood, causing her to fight to the death in the ring, which further aroused Xiao Pei's emotions during the battle. By the way, Lao Li was also asked to educate Xiao Li, but the problem was that it was too "intricate". Although this paragraph is actually very useful, my own impression of it was not very good when I read it. First, the mood was already in the martial arts competition at the time, and suddenly something happened gave people the feeling that it would drag on for a few more chapters. Second, there was no warning. How should I put it? I was completely unprepared for the Zhang family to show up, let alone the Zhang family to cause trouble. Moreover, there are too many "unexpected" things in this volume. Although the author actually wrote it with a purpose and pushed a little bit of the plot, it does feel that the pace of the whole volume is very slow and scattered. Then, Xiao Li. Xiao Li actually doesn't have much to say. She is a very likable character with a girlish feel. The pressure on Cuiyu at the beginning of the volume when the sun is fading and the sun is setting on her shoulders also has a good impact on her. Whether it was the desperate move to join forces with Tianshan or the weakness revealed later, it was not abrupt. He fell in love with Xiao Pei at first sight after being regarded as a hero to save the beauty, so his motivation was sufficient. The more controversial part is the plot of the uncle. Parrot has explained it, but how can I put it, if you ask me to evaluate it, this part can only be said to be reluctant. It's the same word, abrupt. The master's uncle appears too late. He appears in the chapter before the fight, and it's easy to catch him at a glance. The key is that the parrot has used this trick too many times, and he will get tired of it if he watches it too much. You asked Uncle Master to appear earlier! Ask Xiao Li to introduce his uncle to Xiao Pei! Tell Uncle Master's situation through Xiao Li's mouth! Please let Xiao Li interact with his uncle more! It's not much better than you are now. Now this writing about Master Mage is too tool-like. He appears just to cash in and give Xiao Li a little bit of mental evolution (in fact, it doesn't show where the evolution is later). However, it has to be written in a sensational way, which will offend some people. I remember someone in the chapter review said that to read the novel, you still have to watch the author bully a demented old man. Even if the uncle is allowed to wake up in the end, the perception may be better. ,,, But Zhang Zongyuan, it's an old problem... Zhang Zongyuan purely upgraded Yang Yan, and by the way introduced Yang Yan's fighting style. Yang Yan upgraded in order to be defeated by Xiao Pei, and finally to foreshadow the emotions during the final. If you say it is useful, it adds a little bit of plot. If you say it is useless, it adds a little bit of plot. Don't always send tool men from the sky! <br I don't know if I will write about the division of the lake later. This line is a bit too weak now. It is said that he stabbed Shang Huaitong, but the result does not seem to be important. Firstly, Old Man Sui saw it more clearly than everyone imagined, and secondly, Qijiao had a way to deny it. As a result, everyone seemed to have forgotten about this incident later, and the Wubi audience had no objections to Shang Huaitong at all! Ah, speaking of this, has Zheng Dong been forgotten... My evaluation of Shang Huaitong's shaping is that it is better to peel off some things. In the end, Shang Huaitong in the ring was actually very well portrayed, and it should be what Parrot wanted to portray. He was proud of his sword and had enough pride in his sword. Other than that, he was a complete villain. But the problem finally showed up, it was weird. ,,,,,,, Shang Huaitong said that he was confident enough in swordplay to be as good as anyone else, so why did he limit his opponents to swordsmen? Wouldn't it be suitable to use another weapon? You said it's not impossible for me to understand, but you always feel that something is wrong. ,, B,, B× It feels like the viciousness is not written out, but it feels a bit like a clown and a villain. ,, Killing Zheng Dong, it is reasonable to say that Shang Huaitong will be punished, but Zheng Dong himself is too unpleasant, and the situation is obvious, so killing is not considered true. The last thing is about Zhang Junyu Guguang. I always feel that Shang Huaitong's motivation for doing this is insufficient. Speaking of Bai Yuliang, the story of Bai Yuliang was finally brought to Huansilou, which actually weakened Shang Huaitong's description. but shang huaitong gave me the feeling that he was successful only in the final stage of the ring. "Several" of the “those†shang huaitong in front of him need to be discarded. That's it, I'm tired of writing...