Those Who Chase the Flame

The male protagonist's setting is confusing. If his friend dies, just call the police and pretend it's nothing? Meeting the priest just to get rid of suspicion? Facing the half-adoptive father of his dead daughter, he actually left without saying hello. I think the male protagonist is still living in his apartment, so there is no breakup. It is true that there is a separation. And the male protagonist is a rare literate person with excellent appearance, physical ability, and the ability to punch prosthetic modified people, and then he works as a dock porter every day? Your brotherhood doesn't have any clerical jobs. Everything else is fine, my writing skills are quite good.

I tried reading the first volume of the second volume. First of all, let's talk about the protagonist. The eunuch is very good, but due to the lack of psychological description, the protagonist's behavior is too background. Intuitively speaking, it lacks subjective initiative and only serves the plot. Readers cannot know in advance what the protagonist is, what he wants, and what he needs; for the article, the protagonist can hardly advance the plot, and it is very tiring to read. As for the supporting characters, the same problem, background board, the connection established with the protagonist is too coincidental, lacks integration, and is broken too quickly. The parts that should be written in detail are briefly touched on, and the parts that should be tight are suddenly cut off. It is difficult to say whether it is appropriate or not, because the article did not show an abrupt tone in the early stage, and the protagonist did not change or grow much. Secondly, in the plot, it can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into the background layout and world view, but after reading it, I can say it is "classic" in an exaggerated way. The plot of the first volume is smooth and step-by-step, but the background is too flat. The entire force, background characters and stories are independent and rarely intersect. The background is just the background, neither shaping the protagonist nor promoting the plot. Looking at it this way, I can only say that it is mediocre. The hidden foreshadowing, the secrets that emerge in the development of the story, are also poorly written techniques. In this regard, we don't want to do something as big as Daogui, at least something unexpected is required. Especially in the next college, to be honest, I couldn't continue studying. You can look at the blood tax. It completely collapsed in the academy. Because the academy is a relatively new, closed space, it is too regimented, especially if you don't write in advance what the protagonist is going to do and what will happen in the academy. For readers who like adventure genres, especially when the background and many hidden secrets are hinted at the beginning, it will make people feel boring. Not to mention that the protagonist's connection to the deeper plot has been shown, but it is cut off and started all over again. I think it is a plot point, just like the blood tax, but it also has ntr, although it is "brother's test". Actually, it's okay to read the end of the first volume, and I know what hidden secrets can be discovered, but from the beginning of the second volume, I stopped digging, let's go to school. At least you start to say that I want to dig this. I go to school to dig this. There is still hope for this. How to deal with a relatively fixed space in fantasy writing, such as sects, and many hidden secrets, contradictions and conflicts can be seen at a glance. How Kraft dealt with it was to weaken the idea that the academy is a tool to advance the plot, rather than the main plot unfolding in the academy. This will please readers who like to read adventure genres and can bring plenty of freshness. It is difficult to tell in the first and second volumes what kind of people your book is meant to serve. The protagonist joining the Lighthouse, the Holy See or the army is better than entering such a "classic" academy, and the first volume obviously does not attract readers who pay attention to the academic stream. The writing style and background are good, but it's a pity that the author doesn't seem to have written it for the readers this book will attract.

Dear readers, the author Hui Yimeng was hospitalized for surgery on December 10, 2024 due to acute appendicitis. During the surgery, he suffered internal bleeding and went into a coma and entered the rescue room. His current physical condition is that he cannot continue to update. It is expected to resume updating on January 10, 2025. I hope Haihan

The writing is quite good, but I felt very tired while watching it... Maybe it's because the settings are so familiar. Vampire demon steam machine hybrid protagonist.

It might have been popular ten years ago. The writing was good but the plot was too vulgar and had little potential for development.

Finally, there is a cheat who is not a time traveler. It is best not to mess with the system or anything. It should be popular.

I really like this book, but I haven't made any money yet, so I'm not able to make enough money, so I gave it a small reward with some pocket money. Come on, author.

I can say that there are few such good books in Qidian. Why is it not popular? Personal opinion, don't comment.

There are not many online articles with an epic feel these days.

I hope everyone takes care of themselves and the author recovers soon.